I-Head-a-Fly-buzz-I-Head-a-Fly-buzz-When-I-DiedWhen-I-Died赏析赏析 ““Questions:1. When you are tired or sad, you heard a fly buzz, what feeling will you have?2. Can you describe the atmosphere when a man die? You can describe it from the movies or the novels. I Heard a Fly Buzz ---When I DiedI heard a fly buzz--- when I died---The Stillness in the RoomWas like the Stillness in the Air---Between the Heaves['hi:vz] of Storm---The Eyes around had wrung[rʌŋ] them dry---And Breaths were gathering firmFor that last Onset when the KingBe witnessed in the Room--- I willed my Keepsakes signed awayWhat portion of me beAssignable---and then it wasThere interposed a Fly---With Blue ---uncertain stumbling Buzz---Between the light ---and me---And then the Windows failed---and thenI could not see to see--- 我听到苍蝇的嗡嗡声——当我死时房间里，一片沉寂就像空气突然平静下来——在风暴的间隙注视我的眼睛——泪水已经流尽— 我的呼吸正渐渐变紧等待最后的时刻——上帝在房间里现身的时刻——降临我已经分掉了——关于我的所有可以分掉的东西——然后我就看见了一只苍蝇—— 蓝色的——微妙起伏的嗡嗡声在我——和光——之间 然后窗户关闭——然后我眼前漆黑一片—— 3 3 People alwals have mixed percetions,thoughts or beliefs about death.When people think about death,they might experience fear or anxiety as to what the afterlife holds for them.Within the poem,Dickinson described a picture of a sad moment when she was dying.Her relations and frinends were standing around her with a sad expression.She gave them what she left when she was awaked.And then her voice became weaker.And then she could't see anything. 非正式随笔主题可以流离，正式严肃题材需严谨语言是有重量的 。
这首诗描述的死亡的过程，全诗用的过去式，以死者的口吻诉说死亡通过颜色声音来描绘出死亡时思维的混乱，而苍蝇声的出现对于死亡这一严肃的话题是很讽刺的，所以也有对神的“亵渎”，同时也表现出了对于永生的质疑Theme •the past tense.•sporadic [spə'rædɪk]分散的capitalization of nouns.•figurative language象征性语言;比喻语言：simile,metaphorWriting Styles Image•"the King": the God of Death.•"Windows":the door to heaven.•"Failed": her doubt of the exitence of eternal heaven.•“With Blue ---uncertain stumbling Buzz--”: in the process of dying, the sense of hearing and sight become weak and dim. 叙事 The word “fly” is very cleverly used in the work. On the one hand, it refers to that insect; on the other hand, it may indicate “free flying”. Before death, the “fly” was buzzing around, I hear it; after death, it may lead me to go far and forever, I am flying. The fly also implys that death is not important.The writer takes a peaceful attitude toward death 对话““Thank you若有不周之处，一笑而过 结束结束 。