英语书面表达英语书面表达 15分分 中考英语写作评分规范中考英语写作评分规范一类〔一类〔13-15分〕：写出全部内容要点，语句流畅根分〕：写出全部内容要点，语句流畅根本无语法和词汇方面的错误词数到达要求根本本无语法和词汇方面的错误词数到达要求根本无单词拼写及标点错误无单词拼写及标点错误 二类〔二类〔10-12分〕：写出大部分要点内容语句较流畅分〕：写出大部分要点内容语句较流畅有少量语法和词汇方面的错误，但不影响了解有有少量语法和词汇方面的错误，但不影响了解有少量单词拼写及标点错误少量单词拼写及标点错误 三类〔三类〔7-9分〕：写出部分要点语句根本照射有一分〕：写出部分要点语句根本照射有一些语法和词汇错误，有少量单词及标点错误些语法和词汇错误，有少量单词及标点错误 四类〔四类〔4-6分〕：写出少量内容要点，语句不照射语分〕：写出少量内容要点，语句不照射语法、词汇、单词拼写、标点错误较多只需少量句法、词汇、单词拼写、标点错误较多只需少量句子表达正确子表达正确 五类〔五类〔0-3分〕：根本上没有写出内容要点，语法、词分〕：根本上没有写出内容要点，语法、词汇、单词拼写错误较多根本上没有照射的句子。
汇、单词拼写错误较多根本上没有照射的句子只写出一些单词，不知所云只写出一些单词，不知所云 一、字数达一、字数达标，， 卷面整卷面整洁二、把握英二、把握英语造句的特点：造句的特点：1、、“ 先主先主谓，后，后时地〞今天下午我今天下午我们要在操要在操场举行行篮球球竞赛2、、“无无动不成句〞不成句〞 He very happy. My father at home . She twelve years old.三、以三、以简单句句为主长句短句交叉运用最句短句交叉运用最好尽量不反复句型尽量不反复句型We will have a basketball game on the playground this afternoon. 写好篇章构造写好篇章构造 Middle 正文正文Ending 结尾结尾concluding sentence 结论结论句句----对对全文的全文的总结总结和概括supporting sentences支持句支持句----用例子、用例子、实实事或数据事或数据围绕围绕主主题题开展表达、开展表达、讨论讨论topic sentence 主主题题句句 ----说说出文中的要点、中心出文中的要点、中心问题问题Beginning开头开头 Beginning〔开头〕 开头万能句型：1) ....plays an important part in the...2) As we know, ... becomes more and more....3) Many people say that.... But I don’t think so. For example:As we all know, English becomes more and more popular/ important.Many people say it’s difficult to learn English.But I don’t think so. 1. Learning English2. The InternetAs we all know ,the Internet plays an important part in our lives. 正文：巧用衔接词〔一〕正文：巧用衔接词〔一〕按事情开展的先后或按事情开展的先后或时间顺序序 1〕〕Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly 2〕〕first, then/next, after that/ next, finally表示并列表示并列not only... but also, both... and, on the other hand 表示表示举例或例或补充充1〕〕for example 2〕〕besides / what’s more/ what’s worse表示表示转机机 however, though, instead of表示表示缘由由 thanks to, because表示表示结果果 as result (of) , so ，，so...that, 表目的表目的 in order to, so that... For example…the Internet is wonderful. We can … What’s more, It can help us… But each coin has two sides. If we spend too much time on it, we will… What’s worse, It’s harmful to… So we should use the Internet properly. 正文：句式富于变化〔二〕正文：句式富于变化〔二〕( good)(better)It’s necessary for us to have a healthy habit.We should have a healthy habit.A She is very young. She can’t carry the heavy box.B She is too young to carry the heavy box.C She is so young that she can’t carry the … 参与英参与英语俱俱乐部是学部是学习英英语的好方法的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.〞〞 So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.正文：加谚语正文：加谚语(saying) 〔三〕〔三〕 Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect. 3.Do as the Romans do. 熟能生巧。
熟能生巧有志者事竟成有志者事竟成入入乡随俗早起的早起的鸟儿有虫吃儿有虫吃4.The early bird catches the worm.2.Where there is a will, there is a way.5.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，一天一苹果， 医生医生远离我 我我们应尽所能尽所能维护环境挽救地球境挽救地球We should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.正文：加例子〔四〕正文：加例子〔四〕 加例子加例子在家里，我在家里，我经常常协助父母助父母亲干家干家务活I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, tidying the room, sweeping the floor and so on. 1. 与开与开头头呼呼应应，再次重申本人的，再次重申本人的观观念念, 留意防止反复句式。
留意防止反复句式2. 结结尾尾经经典典词组词组、句型：、句型： At last/ Finally ... 最后最后 In a word/ In short, ... 总总而言之而言之 Let’s try our best to .... If we can..., ... will be ....结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应 For example:Keeping healthyHelping others In short, it’s important to have good habits and keep healthy.I believe if we can help each other, our world will be more and more beautiful. 书书面表达普通步面表达普通步骤骤：： ⑴⑴审标题审标题：切中：切中题题意⑵⑵列提列提纲纲：要点，先后：要点，先后顺顺序，分序，分层层次⑶⑶定基定基调调：定出：定出时态时态、人称、、人称、顺顺序、开序、开头头和和结结尾。
尾⑷⑷写全文：句型，构造写全文：句型，构造词汇词汇，关，关联词联词，表达，字数表达，字数⑸⑸改病句：仔改病句：仔细检查细检查，，矫矫正正错误错误 ⑹⑹卷面整卷面整洁洁：：书书写工整，卷面整写工整，卷面整洁洁 写作常见错误写作常见错误•1、、时态时态的的误误用用 •2、、词词法法错误错误〔 〔名名词单词单复数，不可数等复数，不可数等〕 〕 •3、、词词性性误误用 〔 〔描画描画词词，副，副词词混用混用〕 〕•4、一致性、一致性错误错误 〔 〔主主语语 谓语谓语不一致不一致〕 〕•5、、“汉语汉语式〞英式〞英语语 I’ll give you some color see see.•6、、综综合性合性错误错误〔 〔拼写，拼写，标标点，表达法等点，表达法等〕 〕 写作常见错误写作常见错误•1、、时态时态的的误误用用 •2、、词词法法错误错误〔 〔名名词单词单复数，不可数等复数，不可数等〕 〕 •3、、词词性性误误用 〔 〔描画描画词词，副，副词词混用混用〕 〕•4、一致性、一致性错误错误 〔 〔主主语语 谓语谓语不一致不一致〕 〕•5、、“汉语汉语式〞英式〞英语语 I’ll give you some color see see.•6、、综综合性合性错误错误。
〔 〔拼写，拼写，标标点，表达法等点，表达法等〕 〕 1.I want to buy bike. 2.My father's body is strong. 3.There are some boy on the playground.4.How to be a green person? Here are some advice.5.Miss Wang teaches good.6.We very love she.7. It’s good for our healthy. 8.We went to there by train.9.If... our world will be more and more better.火眼金睛火眼金睛a bikeboysiswellWe love her very much.healthbetter and better 火眼金睛火眼金睛10.My classmates is friendly to me.11.He want to visit the Great Wall.12.In the past, the children can’t go to school.13.Stay up is bad for our health.14.When I was very small, I …15.I go to school time is 7:20.16.I have many hobbies. Such as swim,play basketball, listen to music and so on.arewantscouldn’tstayingyoungatswimming,playing…listening.. •为了进一步加强中学生的平安认识，提高为了进一步加强中学生的平安认识，提高自我维护才干，某校开展了以自我维护才干，某校开展了以"平安为主题平安为主题的英语演讲竞赛。
请他根据以下要点提示的英语演讲竞赛请他根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿写一篇演讲稿一显身手How to keep safe?脱险报警上放学平安饮食平安其它 实战演演练同窗同窗们，从小到大他的父母教，从小到大他的父母教师一定不断教育他留意平一定不断教育他留意平安！平安使珍安！平安使珍贵的生命不遭到的生命不遭到损伤，使生活充溢，使生活充溢欢乐请根据提示写一篇根据提示写一篇题为“Always be careful"“Always be careful"的英的英语作文8080词左右左右 Always be careful Always be carefulat home,turn off,strangerat home,turn off,strangeron the road,ride,traffic ruleson the road,ride,traffic rulesat school,don't run after, protect,do sportsat school,don't run after, protect,do sports How to Keep SafeAs students, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some ways. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating bad food will do harm to our health. •Third,if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river.•In short, safety must come first! 。