WritingXinchenWangJinhui Middle School Ye Qiuhong The High School Entrance Exam(中考中考) is coming!tiredtiredbusybusy G Good ways to get relaxedood ways to get relaxed going outing(春游), listening to music, playing basketball, sleeping, watching movies, playing computer games ... Is Is going outinggoing outing( (春游春游) a good way to) a good way to relax for Grade 9 students ? Why?relax for Grade 9 students ? Why?I think it’s (not) good for us. Because … Reasons70% of studentsagree30% of students disagreeYour opinion ?1. get close to nature; enjoy the beautiful nature2. Open our eyes and increase our knowledge3. be good for our health1. waste time ; affect our study2. feel tired3. Worry about our safety Recently our class had a discussion on if going outing is a good way for Grade 9 students to get relaxed. 70% of the students think it’s a good way. They think it’s a good chance to get close to nature and enjoy the beautiful nature. Going outing can not only open our eyes but also fill them with more knowledge. Going outing is good for their health. 30% of them don’t like the idea. In their opinion, going outing is a waste of time, and it has a bad effect on their study. After all, going outing will also make us feel tired. What’s worse, if they go out to a strange place, no one can be sure of the safety of every student Going outing is of benefit not only to our health but also to our study. However, it should be organized well . Recently our class had a discussion on if going outing is a good way for Grade 9 students to get relaxed. 70% of the students think it’s a good way. _____they think it’s a good chance to get close to nature and enjoy the beautiful nature. ______, going outing can not only open our eyes but also fill them with more knowledge. ________, going outing is good for their health. ___________ , 30% of them don’t like the idea. In their opinion, going outing is a waste of time, and it has a bad effect on their study. After all, going outing will also make us feel tired. What’s worse, if they go out to a strange place, no one can be sure of the safety of every student ________, going outing is of benefit not only to our health but also to our study. However, it should be organized well . in a word , besides , first , next , on the other hand , FirstNextBesides On the other hand In a wordWriting skill:使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑自然、紧凑，使，使文章更为文章更为地道地道，更具，更具“英语味英语味”。
Sometimes to do relaxing things can make you feel better. Tony GinaHow are they ? Tony Gina Tony Ginaso…that, and ,than, so, however, but, so…make sentences with the following words:eg. Tony is so...that he... The better learning way, the better grade you’ll get. Tony and Gina are two middle school students . They both work hard but they have different learning ways . Tony often tired in class . He hardly listens to the teacher , hemiss lots of important points that the teacher makes . As a result,It’s too difficult for him to finish the homework quickly . So he hasto stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep . However , Gina listens careful and tries to catch what the teacher says in class . Because of this , so she learns better than Tony and she goes to bed early . In my opinion , Gina learns better in class and has more free time to enjoy herself , so I prefer her learning way . 改错改错1.Tony is often tired in class. / Tony often gets/feels tired in class .2. he misses lots of important points 3. Gina listens carefully4.Because of this , she learns better than Tony . 1. good words: 2.Suitable conjunctions:3. Wonderful sentences: hardlystay up late …butas a result…soandhowever1 …points that the teacher… (定语从句定语从句 ) 2 It’s too … for sb to … 3…catch what the teacher says... (宾语从句宾语从句 ) 4 …better than … ( 比较级比较级 ) Writing skill: 使用好词好句能使你的文章加分增加文采。
使用好词好句能使你的文章加分增加文采 Tony and Gina are two middle school students . They both work hard but they have different learning ways . Tony is often tired in class . He hardly listens to the teacher , hemisses lots of important points that the teacher makes . As a result,It’s too difficult for him to finish the homework quickly . So he hasto stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep . However , Gina listens carefully and tries to catch what the teacher says in class . Because of this , she learns better than Tony and she goes to bed early . In my opinion , Gina learns better in class and has more free time to enjoy herself , so I prefer her learning way . It’s too difficult for him to finish the homework quicklytries to catch what the teacher says in classmisses lots of important points that the teacher makesShe learns better thanTony Our school lives are nearly ending . school lifeWhat do you think of your school life ?What are important things in your school life ?Do you have any dreams now ? What are they? Let’s share ! activities 三年的初中学习生活即将结束，在装载你收获的行囊三年的初中学习生活即将结束，在装载你收获的行囊——成长记录袋中应该增成长记录袋中应该增添一份你自己满意的答案添一份你自己满意的答案,请以请以My school life 为题写一篇短文为题写一篇短文, 记下你的校园记下你的校园生活，字数６０－９０。
生活，字数６０－９０写作指导：写作指导： １．１．Before writing：： 细读试题，认真审题细读试题，认真审题 ：：1.确定文章所用体裁是记述文确定文章所用体裁是记述文2.确定文章所用的人称是第一人称确定文章所用的人称是第一人称3.确定文章的时态用一般现在时确定文章的时态用一般现在时 写作指导：写作指导：２．２．While writing：： 3．． After writing：： （１）（１） 拟提纲，分好段落拟提纲，分好段落 Our school lives are nearly ending . （２）连句成篇 检查全文检查全文, 注意逻辑和文采．注意逻辑和文采． school lifeWhat do you think of your school life ?What are important things in your school life ?Do you have any dreams now ? What are they? Homework:1.以以My school life 为题写一篇短文为题写一篇短文。
2.根据中考评分标准，四人一组互评作文根据中考评分标准，四人一组互评作文并订正并订正各各自的错误及找出同组作文中好自的错误及找出同组作文中好词、好句词、好句 记录在作文本）记录在作文本） 附作文评分标准（供参考）：附作文评分标准（供参考）：第第一一档（很好）：档（很好）：1313—1515分分 内容涵盖所有要点，内容涵盖所有要点，表达清楚，表达清楚，意思意思连贯，连贯，符合逻辑，符合逻辑，基本无误或错误很少基本无误或错误很少第第二二档（好）：档（好）：1010—1212分分 内容涵盖所有要点，内容涵盖所有要点，表达清楚，表达清楚，意思意思连贯，连贯，符合逻辑，但符合逻辑，但有少量有少量语言语言错误第三档（还好）：第三档（还好）：7 7—9 9分分 内容涵盖大部分要点，内容涵盖大部分要点，表达表达较为较为清楚清楚、、连贯，连贯，基本符合逻辑，但基本符合逻辑，但有有一些一些语言错误语言错误第第四四档（较差）：档（较差）：4 4—6 6分分 内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少量正确句子，内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少量正确句子，但但整体表达不大连贯，且整体表达不大连贯，且语言错误较多，影响了意思表。
语言错误较多，影响了意思表第第五五档（差）：档（差）：0 0—3 3分分 只能写出一些单词，不成句子，缺乏逻辑性，错误很多只能写出一些单词，不成句子，缺乏逻辑性，错误很多 Thank youDon’t give up , you’ll be successful . 。