Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,11/7/2009,#,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,How to Write a Letter of Asking for Help,How to Write a Letter of Askin,Lead in,Read a sample of a writing passage and find out the structure and characteristics of a letter for help.,Lead inRead a sample of a wri,假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习,暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校,中心（,Learning Center,）的帮助根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：,1.,本人简历,2.,求助内容,3.,约定时间,4.,你的联系方式（,Email:;Phone:12345678),注意：,1.,词数,100,左右。
2.,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3.,结束语已为你写好假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习,Dear Sir/Madam,I,m Li Hua,a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university.,I,m writing to ask for help,.,I came here last month and I find my courses interesting.,But I have some difficulties with note-making and I have no idea of how to use the library.,I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and,I,m anxious to get help from you.,I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons.Please let me know which day is ok with you.You may email or phone me.Here are my email address and phone number:;12345678.,Thanks for your kindness in advance.,Look forward to your reply.,yours,Li Hua,点明目的,描述困难,恳求帮助,表示感谢,Dear Sir/Madam,点明目的描述困难恳求帮助,1.,交代背景,/,询问对方，,_,；,2.,叙述现状，,_,，,_,；,3.,寻求帮助，,_,，期盼回复。
Common structure,点明目的,描述困难,恳求帮助,表示感谢,1.交代背景/询问对方，_；Commo,Characteristics,1.,通常使用的时态：,_,；,2.,阐述要清晰，用词要恰当，注意语气委婉、真诚；情态动词多使用,_,3.,注意使用,过渡性词汇,，如：,first,besides,also,what,s more,at,the same time,meanwhile,in,addition,unfortunately,luckily,thus,however,so that,等等一般现在时,would/could,Characteristics1.通常使用的时态：_,Useful expressions for writing the letter:,A.,点明目的,B.,描述困难,C.,恳求帮助,D.,表示感谢,E.,期盼回复,Presentation,Useful expressions for writing,A.,点明目的,我写信是为了向你寻求帮助1._,2._,_,More expressions,：,3.I am sorry to bother you,but I really need your help(with,),4.I,m writing to ask whether you can help me.,I am writing this letter to ask you to do me,I,m writing to you to get/ask for some help.,a favor/give me a hand.,必修一英语作文之求助信 共,27,页,PPT,必修一英语作文之求助信 共,27,页,PPT,A.点明目的I am writing this lette,B.,描述困难,我在英语学习方面遇到了一些困难。
1._,_,2._,More expressions,：,3.I am now confronted/faced with the difficulty with,/following difficulties.,4.The reason why I write this letter is that,I have trouble when I do sth.,I find it difficult for me to do sth.,I have some difficulty/trouble in doing,(because,),必修一英语作文之求助信 共,27,页,PPT,必修一英语作文之求助信 共,27,页,PPT,B.描述困难 I find it difficult for,C.,寻求帮助,/,建议,你可以帮助我吗？,1._,2._,_,More expressions,：,3.Faced with/Facing so much difficulty,I have to turn to you for some help.,4.It would be very helpful if you could do me a favor.,5.I really don,t know what to do and expect you to give me your advice/suggestions.,6.I have no idea what I should do and long for your advice.,I wonder if you can help me with the,Could you please give me a hand?,difficulty.,必修一英语作文之求助信 共,27,页,PPT,必修一英语作文之求助信 共,27,页,PPT,C.寻求帮助/建议I wonder if you can h,D.,表示感谢,如果你能帮助我,/,给予我建议，我将不胜感激。
1.I would be grateful _,_,2.I would _ it _,_,More expressions,：,3.I would like to express my thanks/gratitude in advance(for your kindness).,4.Thank you for,if you could give me some,suggestions(on how to solve the problem).,appreciate,if you could offer,me help.,必修一英语作文之求助信 共,27,页,PPT,必修一英语作文之求助信 共,27,页,PPT,D.表示感谢if you could give me som,E.,期盼回复,希望尽快收到你的来信1._,_,2._,More expressions,：,3.I sincerely hope to get your timely reply.,4.Your kind early reply will be highly appreciated.,Expecting your writing back soon.,Looking forward to/Hoping for your early,reply(and I,ll be grateful for your help).,必修一英语作文之求助信 共,27,页,PPT,必修一英语作文之求助信 共,27,页,PPT,E.期盼回复Expecting your writing b,Practice,Example 1,：,（,2011,山东卷）假设你是李华，你的美国朋友,Tom,上个月来到北京学习。
七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛,(speech contest),，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难请根据以下要点给,Tom,写一封电子邮件：,a,询问,Tom,的生活和学习情况；,b,谈谈你的困难并请,Tom,帮忙；,c,告诉,Tom,你打算赛后去看他注意：,a,词数：,100,左右；,b,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,必修一英语作文之求助信 共,27,页,PPT,必修一英语作文之求助信 共,27,页,PPT,PracticeExample 1：必修一英语作文之求助信,Step 1,：构思,审题,时态,人称,提纲,（提取信息）,Para 1,Para 2,Para 3,一般现在时,第一、第二人称,Tom,上个月来到北京学习，,询问,Tom,的生活和学习情况我将去参加英语演讲比赛，在,等方面遇到了困难打算赛后去看,Tom,求助，感谢,必修一英语作文之求助信 共,27,页,PPT,必修一英语作文之求助信 共,27,页,PPT,Step 1：构思时态人称提纲Para 1Para 2Par,Step 2,：提笔,Dear Tom,It has been a month since you studied in Beijing.(,问候,)_?,I am going to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July this summer.,However,（搜集资料困难）,_ when I collect useful materials.,Meanwhile,（语言运用困难）,_ in using English properly._,I may be too nervous to speak in face of thousands of audience.,（求助并感谢）,_,_.,Hopefully,the great effort I am making will pay off.,I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest.,Yours,Li Hua,Step 3,：注意过渡，衔接，检查文章,（如时态，主谓一致等）,How is everything going with you,I am now confronted with difficulty,I still have some trouble,Besides,I would appreciate it,if you could give me a hand and thank you for your help,必修一英语作文之求助信 共,27,页,PPT,必修一英语作文之求助信 共,27,页,PPT,Step 2：提笔Step 3：注意过渡，衔接，检查文章Ho,（,2017,汕头一模）假如。