第六课时“SectionB(3a一3b)单元同步作文指导 一\话题概述本单元以“过去和现在的变化“为话题,围绕这一话题运用usedto结构谈论过去,并对照现在,描述人们的外貌.性格及日常生活等方面的变化,而最能全面体现本单元话题及语言运用能力的话题作文就是“谈论变化“,这也是单元测试和中考等试题中常考的话题作文之一二、写作内容根据表格信息提示,以“XiaoXue「sChange“为题,简要介绍你的妹妹小雪的成长变化过去现在外貌个子矮,短发个子高,长发性格|“文静,有点儿害羞活浪外向爱好看电视和聊天肉欢打网球.看书和网上冲浪 要求:1.不要逐字逐句翻译,逻辑要合理通顺;2.可适当发挥;3.词数:60一80个三、佳作示范XiaoXue「sChangeXiao又ueisnowdifferentfromwhatsheusedtobelike.Shehaschangedalot.Sheusedtobeshortandhaveshorthair.Butnowsheistallwithlonghair.Sheisoutgoingnowwhileshewasquietandalittleshyinthepast.Asforhob-bies,shedoesn“tlikewatching丁Vandchattingwithothersanylonger,whichsheusuallydidduringthepast.Nowsheenjoysplayingtennis, readingbooksandsurfingtheInternet、Asweknow,thingsarealwayschanging.点评:(1)文章开头总说,中间从三个方面阅述变化内容,结尾点题。
2)文章在描述过去和现在的变化时,除应用教材中的“usedto“句型外,还使用了“while“引导的两个并列句子以及“not..anylonger“句型,给文章增添了色彩四、同步仿写Writeapassageinabout100wordswiththehelpofthefollowingpointsaboutZhangHua「slifechange. ZhangHuaasachildZhangHuanow余usedtohavemuchtime余usedtospendalotoftimeplayinggameswithhisfriends余usedtowatchTVorchatwithhisgrandmaintheevening余usedtogotoconcertswithhisfather余istoobusy余getsupearlyandstaysinschoolallday余doesn「thaveanymoretimetoplaygameswithhisfriends余doeshishomeworkandgoestobedlate余hardiyhastimeforCOncerts余missestheolddays 五、写作指导1.此篇作文以谈论张华的成长变化为主线,主要内容是根据提示谈论张华的学习和生活方面的变化,写作内容渗透着本单元的话题和语言目标一一运用usedto结构谈论过去,对照现在,描写变化。
写作中要运用usedto结构谈论过去,用一般现在时陈述现在的情况,通过今昨对比方式,描述变化2.写作模板ZhangHuazslifehaschanged开气点题一[iotinShefastfewyyeas“FInthepastheusedto..介绍变化Butnowhis..tHemissestheolddaysverymuch.提出希望|wHehopesthathecan.. 六、学生作文(教师巡回指导) 5参考范文〗抄写并读背》ZhangHua「slifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Inthepast,heusedtohavemuchtimetoplayafterschool.Heusedtospendalotoftimeplayinggameswithhisfriends.Whenhefin~ishedhishomework,heoftenwatchedTVorchat-tedwithhisgrandma-On_Saturday,heoftenwenttoconcertswithhisfather.Butnowhisschoollifehaschangedalot.Heisverybusyeveryday-.Hehastogetupearlyandstaysinschoolallday,becausehehastostudyhard.Hedoesn“thaveanymoretimetoplaygameswithhisfriends.Hehastodohishomeworkandgoestobedlateeverynight.Hehardlyhasanytimeforconcerts.Hemissestheolddaysverymuch. 。