单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,大学英语四级作文真题,Directions:For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled,On Excessive Packaging,following the outline below.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,1.,目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象,2.,出现这一现象的原因,3.,我对这一现象的看法和建议,大纲要求：写作,(writing),部分是测试学生用英语进行书面表达的能力，所占分值比例为,15%,，考试时间为,30,分钟要求：三段式，字数,120,至,180,，时间,30,分钟,四级考试题型为六大类：,观点对比型,，现象解释型，问题解决型，谚语论证，以及,应用文和图表作文,描述现象、分析原因、个人看法仍是四级考试写作部分主要考查的重点,提高写作的五条原则,practice,：从现在开始到考试，本学期至少写五篇作文；选其中三篇最好作文，作为成绩。
input,：要有必要的输入要多看范文，背范文在理解的基础上，把范文的精彩句子、词汇和结构默写同时熟记不同类型论文的句子框架outline,：动手写作文前要根据题目或者中文提纲，把英语关键词写下，以确保作文不离题vary,：作文的句子要多变要在练习中敢于尝试使用新的句型和词汇表达revise,：作文最后定稿前，至少改三遍第一遍自己改，第二遍请班上两名同学帮改，第三遍重新检查，抄正后再交给老师观点对比选择型议论文写作训练,Learning Objective,Evaluate two points of view and choose which one you agree with.,Practice writing an introduction,body paragraph and a conclusion.,Writing practice,要求从正反两方面对某一事物加以论述这类议论文有其固定的模式，如就某一事物或现象给出两种完全对立的观点，然后再摆出自己的看法；,或是先说明某一事物的重要性，积极因素，然后再说明该事物的危害性、消极因素等观点,1+,观点,2+,个人观点,描述现象,+,观点,1,、,2,（积极性、消极性）,+,个人观点,对比选择型,(,正反两点论式,),议论文,历年四级作文,Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?,1.,名校校园正成为旅游新热点,（描写现象）,2.,校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同,（观点,1+,观点,2,）,3.,我认为,（个人观点）,历年四级作文,On the Spring Festival Gala,1,、许多人喜欢看,cctv,春节晚会,（现象,+,观点,1,）,2,、但有的人认为应该取消,（观点,2,）,3,、你的看法,（个人观点）,历年四级作文,Recreational Activities,1.,娱乐活动多种多样,（描写现象）,2.,娱乐可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性,（积极性,+,消极性）,3.,作为大学生，我的看法,（个人观点）,例题一：,My View On Job-hopping,有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为,有些人喜欢经常更换工作，因为,我的看法,对比选择型,(,正反两点论式,),作文分析,1,Paragraph 1:introduction,My View on Job-hopping,Everyones attitude toward job-hopping is different.,Some people think they will do one job until retirement.,They often say something like this:Take up one thing,like it and be good at it.,（引用法）,These people think that,only,when they are absorbed in one job can they do it well.,（半倒装句型）,第一段：第一句首先概括主题现象。
本段第二句为主题句，第三、四句通过引用某类人的观点，对主题句进行解释或者说明By contrast,other people like to change jobs from time to time.,In their opinion,the aim of doing a job is only to get more money.So when they have a chance to get a better-paid job certainly they ought to seize the chance.,第二段：段首句为主题句，中心思想是“,like to change jobs from time to time”,；第二、三句为发展句在对第一、二段进行衔接时，文章使用了信号词“,By contrast”,Paragraph 2:body,Paragraph 3:conclusion,My view on job-hopping falls between the two viewpoints expressed above.,I think if I have a job that really suits me,Ill do it all my life.No other job can attract me no matter what the benefits may be.But if I dont get a suitable job,Ill change it until I find something satisfactory.,In a word,I want to find a job that suits me;money and other things are not under consideration.,第三段：谈论“我的看法”时，作者并没有单纯倾向于哪一种观点。
段首句中作者首先解释：我的观点介于两者之间；之后，又在发展句中对其态度作了进一步说明point 1,point 2,Your view,Further explanation(reason),Summary(restate),Further explanation(reason),Further explanation(reason),例题二：,Private Cars,：,Good Or Evil,1.,有人认为我们应积极推广私人汽车,2.,有人认为我们不应推广私人汽车,3.,你的看法,Private Cars:Good or Evil,With the improvement of peoples living standard,some people have bought cars of their own,and others are planning to buy cars.,（用一到两个句子描写现象，不要过度描写）There is a general discussion nowadays about,the good or evil effects private cars may bring us.,To this problem,different people hold different views.,开头段：段落第一句为概述，通过具体的现象引起读者的共鸣。
第三句为论点，论点的主题：“,different views”,Paragraph 1:introduction,Those who,favor,private cars,maintain,that,private cars are highly desirable,for obvious reasons,.,（主题句）,In the big cities of China,buses are often crowded and slow,especially during rush hours.If there are more private cars,people can get around easily.Besides,by driving cars,they might be well protected from the bad weather,and cover long distances rapidly and pleasantly.,（分论点；举例）,主体段：主题句为第一句中心思想是“,obvious reasons”,；发展句中，作者运用了公共汽车拥挤和小汽车的种种便利这两个事实，对中心思想进行说明。
Paragraph 2:body part,However,there are three chief reasons for those people who are against cars.,（主题句）,First,cars are the main cause of traffic accident.,（分论点）,Thousands of people have been killed or injured by car accidents all over the world.,Second,car owners have to pay vast sums for road tax and other fees every year.This is a big drain on their resources.,Finally,private car owners in China may have all kinds of trouble,such as,getting a driving license and finding a parking lot.,Paragraph 2:body part,As to me,the latter opinion is more acceptable.,Although cars have so many obvious benefits,they are too luxurious for the overwhelming majority of Chinese people to own them.Therefore,we may say that it is still early at present for the popularization of private,cars in our country.,结尾段：本段中，作者先在第二句话介绍了原因，第三句话阐述了作者的具体观点,普及轿车为时尚早。
Paragraph 3:conclusion,point 1,point 2,Your view,General statement(describe the phenomenon),Further explanation(example+reason),Summary,Further explanation(example),Further explanation(reason),小结,一篇好的作文首先要有好的结构（写提纲，不离题）,句子、段落之间合理使用连接词,句子主题句明显,说理之后可以借助举例,恰当地使用特殊的句式（强调句、倒装句、条件状语从句）,争取在文章中要有一到三个亮点词汇、词组、句型）,在写作正反两点论式文章时，我们。