单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,基础写作系列之三,如何写人物介绍,1.,例文：假如你叫李明，你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中国文学，来信询问鲁迅其人及作品你回信介绍鲁迅，内容如下,（,1,）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人,（,2,）为了国家，弃医从文3,）著名的作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者4,）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如,阿,Q,正传,、,祝福,这两部影片5,）一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本参考词汇：,阿,Q,正传,：,The True Story of AH Q,祝福,：,The New Years Sacrifice,注意：,1,）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语写作要求,只能使用,5,个句子表达全部内容文章首尾已给出，不算字数评分标准,句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性Dear Bruce,I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature.Now let me tell you something about Luxun,._.,Since you are learning Chinese literatures,I think reading Lu,Xuns,novels will help you to know more about it.,Yours,Li Ming,审题的步骤是什么？,、,、,、,、,、,文体,主体时态,人称,信息点整合,不要打草稿，但应有提纲,人物简介的一般步骤：,Give the right order,(,),教,育,：,education,(,),外,貌,性格,appearance,character,(,),生,平,big events in his or her life (in order of time),(,),评,估,evaluation,(,),概,况,age,sex,birth-place,background,概,貌,育,平,估,平（估）菇,概貌（盖帽）,概,貌,育,平,估,介绍人物步骤记忆技巧：,1.A.,概况,:,译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一,1),Born in,Guangzhou in 1941,Zhong,Nanshan,is one of the greatest doctors in China.,2)Zhong,Nanshan,one of the greatest doctors in China,was born in Guangzhou in 1941.,B.,外貌,性格,:,译：,我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发,*语法，句法高分,tips,尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺,My history teacher is a beautiful woman,with two big eyes and long hair.,巧用,with,做定语,C.,教育经历：,1,）,Majored in Science,he graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years,he went abroad for further studies.,2,）,Graduated from the department of English of,Zhongshan,University,she went on further education and received a doctors degree,.,D,生平：,1,）,Not only is he,interested in science,but also he has a gift for music.,2,）,He set a new world record of swimming,which won a gold medal for China Team.,注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼,尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章,E,评估：,1,）,Leifeng,set us a good example,so all the people,spoke highly of,him and all respected him.,2,）,He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will,be always remembered as,an outstanding man.,3,）,Lishizhen,makes great contributions to,Medical literature.,注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组,生词大扫荡：,Group work:,In groups of 4 or 5,write the composition in,ten,minutes:,Correct with your partners,(How to correct?),1,、,是否恰好五句话？,、是否每句都含必要信息？,、可否自由发挥？,、,pants,纠错原则：,1)pattern,2)agreement,3)number,4)tense,5)spelling,Who will be volunteer to show your composition to the class?,Find out the good sentences in the possible version and remember them with your partner,Dear Bruce,I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature.Now let me tell you something about,Luxun,.,Born in,Shaoxing,Zhejiang,Province,Lu,Xun,with real name Zhou,Shuren,abandoned the study of medicine because he thought he could change society more through writing.Not only was Lu,Xun,a well-Known Chinese writer,a thinker,and translator,but also the father of modern Chinese literature.His novels have been translated into many languages and some of novels have been made into films,such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Years Sacrifice.Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks.,Since you are learning Chinese literatures,I think reading Lu,Xuns,novels will benefit a lot.,Yours,Li Ming,2.,仿写：假如你叫白云，从广告上得知广州某公司需要工程师。
写信应聘要求内容包含如下要点1),姓名：白云，出生于广州市越秀区，年龄,27,岁2)2001,年毕业于中山大学，后来留学英国伦敦大学3)2005,年数学方面成果显著，获博士学位4),英国一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但拒绝了5),为了报效祖国，于,2006,年毅然回国6,）有数学天赋注意：,1,）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语文章首位已经给出，不算字数写作要求,只能使用,5,个句子表达全部的内容评分标准,句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性牛刀小试,；,Now comes your tern!,Dear Sir,How do you do?Through the ad.I know your company needs an engineer.I would like to have this job.Now let me introduce myself to you.,.,I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity.Thank you for your consideration.,I am looking forward to your early reply.,Sincerely yours,Baiyun,Im,Bai,Yun,born in,Yuexiu,District,Guangzhou City,aged 27.After I graduated from,Zhongshan,University in 2001,I was sent to London University in the UK.Through hard work for 4 years,I achieved extraordinary achievement on,maths,because of my gift for,maths,and received a doctors degree.A British company tried hard to invite me with a good offer of salary,but I refused it.To devote myself to our China,I came back this year without any hesitation in 2006,.,基础写作注意事项：,1,）能写几句就写几句，不留空白,2,）主要评分要素包括内容的,完整性,和,连贯性,、句子结果的,正确性,。
3,）每句占,2.5,分，每,0.5,分为一档,4,）连贯性共占,2.5,分,5,）多写或少写一个句子，扣一分，,决不要自我发挥,6,）文不对题给,0,分，写出相关短语给,0.5,分7,）每个句子要含有表中的信息，否则该句不得分8,）不要生搬硬套，强加关联词注意“三写”，在规定的时间内完成,。