高考英语读后续写语篇练习1高中毕业后的职业选择题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目再现3续写原文In 1989,fresh out of high school,I had the difficult task of choosing a career path before college started in three months.In those days in Pakistan,there were limited choices:becoming a doctor or an engineer,or entering the financial world after getting a business degree.I wasnt interested in engineering,so that I was left with medicine or business.I couldnt decide.My uncle suggested that I do a work placement(实习)to experience it for a month in an international company followed by a month in a hospital.After that,I could make a decision.It seemed like a good idea.I was accepted for a months placement at a foreign bank in Karachi.I got a feel for how the world of finance functioned,made new friends,and generally enjoyed the mostly easy-going work surroundings.4续写原文The month passed rapidly,and soon I began working at a leading hospital in Karachi.The experience couldnt have been more different.The hospital had a stressful environment.The days started early(at 7 am,compared to 9 am at the bank),and were filled with endless duties.And the night calls!This was crazy,working all day,through the night,and again the next day.I began thinking about my two experiences.The bank had offered a more relaxing atmosphere,better working hours and less stress.The hospital was full of excitement,but the studying and training was difficult.It seemed that the business choice was going to win out.Near the end of my month at the hospital,I was driving home after an especially busy night call.In front of me was a public bus,with college students sitting on the top.As the driver weaved through(穿梭)traffic,I could see the boys shaking from side to side.5段首句Paragraph 1:Suddenly,a boy fell off the back of the bus.Paragraph 2:The next day,when I went to the hospital to see the boy,all his family got up,with grateful smiles on their faces6Part 2题目分析7续写已知内容我刚高中毕业，面临职业选择（career path），有三个选择：doctor,engineer,enter a financial world.但我不喜欢engineer，最终有两个选择。
我的叔叔建议我先在国际公司实习，然后实习医生我发现当医生比当银行职员要繁忙的多，并且责任重大，我感到很大压力就在医院实习快要结束时，在路上，我看到一群孩子在车顶上，穿梭于繁忙的车辆中，摇摇晃晃8点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题情节构建的重点9续写建议第一段：1.（衔接描述boy:）The boy lay stiff on the ground,blood dripping down from his forehead.（独主）2.（恐慌周围的反应：）People shrieking,cars crashing,what a mess the scene was!（独主+感叹）3.（恐慌我的反应：）A wave of terror swept over me,rooting me to the ground.（无灵主语+非谓语）4.（突然灵机一动）Suddenly,it dawned upon me that my emergency knowledge could save him.（it句型）5.（开始做起来）Without hesitation,I dashed to him and performed the routine skillfully.6.（结果成功）After what seemed a century,to my relief,the boy came to himself and opened his eyes.（what句型）7.（衔接句）Just at that point,the ambulance arrived and rushed him to the hospital.10续写建议第二段：1.(衔接写his family的对话)“Thank you.But for you,my boy would have lost his life forever.”The boys father hugged me tightly,his eyes sparkling with gratitude.2.（我的感受：激动）To be frank,his words sent a flush of excitement coursing through me.3.（我的对话）“Any doctor will do that.”I blurted out,grinning from ear to ear.4.（照应主题）Yes,deep in heart was buried a holy commitment that I should be a doctor.5.（照应主题）But it was not until that moment that I realized which career path I should choose.11Part 3范文呈现12范文呈现Suddenly,a boy fell off the back of the bus.The boy lay stiff on the ground,blood dripping down from his forehead.People shrieking,cars crashing,what a mess the scene was!A wave of terror swept over me,rooting me to the ground.Suddenly,it dawned upon me that my emergency knowledge could save him.Without hesitation,I dashed to him and performed the routine skillfully.After what seemed a century,to my relief,the boy came to himself and opened his eyes.Just at that point,the ambulance arrived and rushed him to the hospital.13范文呈现The next day,when I went to the hospital to see the boy,all his family got up,with grateful smiles on their face.“Thank you.But for you,my boy would have lost his life forever.”The boys father hugged me tightly,his eyes sparkling with gratitude.To be frank,his words sent a flush of excitement coursing through me.“Any doctor will do that.”I blurted out,grinning from ear to ear.Yes,deep in heart was buried a commitment that I should be a doctor.But it was not until that moment that I realized which career path I should choose.14Part 4努力方向15高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语16定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）17低头是题海，抬头是前途。
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