五句话作文的句子整合技巧高考英语基础写作主要考查考生运用语言结构和基本句型，对表达内容进行加工、整合的能力考生如果没有一定的语言驾驭技巧，要用五句话完整地表达众多繁杂的内容也绝非一件容易的事下面以 2011 年广州一模的基础写作为例来谈谈句子的整合技巧原题：学校英语论坛针对目前城市交通拥堵、污染严重的问题进行了 “治堵方案大家谈” 的讨论 以下是讨论概要[写作内容]请根据以上概要写一篇短文，包括以下内容：1.存在的问题；2.解决的方案；3.方案的好处经过简单的审题，我们可以列出以下十多个松散的信息点：①We had a discussion.②Our streets are crowded with traffic./There are toomany private cars.③The air is seriously polluted.④Some solutions are put forward./Everyone isencouraged to offer suggestions. ⑤Car owners could reduce the use of private cars.⑥They could share their cars with their friends andworkmates.⑦The government should do something to improve thepublic transport system.⑧The government should build more green lanes.⑨The public transport system should be more convenientfor citizens.⑩People should be encouraged to use their bicycles.Money, time and energy will be saved.The measures are friendly to the environment.其中，①-③涉及存在的问题，④-⑩表达解决的方案，最后两点是方案的好处。
接下来，我们来运用自己的语言知识，将相关的信息点整合起来一、运用短语来整合信息1. 运用名词短语Increasing numbers of private cars contribute to heavytraffic jams and serious air pollution.(名词短语，整合信息点②③)2. 运用介词短语People are more aware of the fact that increasing numberof private cars has given rise to serious problems like traffic jams and air pollution. (介词短语充当定语，整合信息点②③)3. 运用非谓语短语The government should improve the public transportsystem to make it more convenient for people.(动词不定式短语，整合信息点⑦⑧⑨)Building more green lanes is obviously a good way toencourage cycling instead of driving. (动名词短语作主语和动词不定式短语作定语，整合信息点⑤⑧⑩)There is a widespread concern over environmentalpollution and traffic jams caused by private cars. (过去分词短语作定语，整合信息点②③)First, car owners could share their cars with their friendsand workmates, thus reducing the use of private cars. (现在分词短语作状语，整合信息点⑤⑥)4. 运用 with 的复合宾语结构或独立主格结构。
Hopefully, with people sharing private cars with each other,our city will definitely be an environment-friendly place to livein.(with 的复合宾语结构，整合信息点⑥)5. 运用词语搭配Meanwhile, it is our belief that our government has a roleto play in improving the transport system by building moregreen lanes and encouraging cycling. (动词搭配 play a role in的 变体，合并信息点⑦⑧⑩)We held a discussion in the hope of coming up with somepractical solutions to end the shameful condition of traffic jamsand air pollution in our city. (动词搭配 in the hope of doing...，合并信息点②③④)二、利用并列结构来整合信息写作中，我们常用 and, but, not only..but also...,neither...nor..., either...or..., for, while, as well as等并列结构来合并两个或者更多的相关信息。
These measures can not only help save money, time andenergy, but also improve the environment. (并列谓语，合并信息点)三、利用复合句来整合信息复合句可以整合众多相关信息，同时也是语言功底的表现1. 运用名词性从句When it comes to traffic jams and air pollution, somepeople come up with the idea that car owners could reduce theuse of private cars by sharing cars with their friends andworkmates. (运用同位语从句，整合信息点⑤⑥)2. 运用定语从句With the development of economy, more and more people have their own cars, which in turn leads to such problems astraffic jams and air pollution. (运用定语从句，整合信息点②③)3. 运用状语从句。
If the government could improve the public transportsystem, it would be more convenient for people to travel. (运用条件状语从句，整合信息点⑦)当然，在实际写作中，我们要灵活、综合运用，使句子长短有致，简洁明了，同时使用关联词，使句与句之间更连贯流畅我们可以将以上内容整合成五句话：Recently, the issue of traffic jams and air pollution causedby private cars has been brought to the concern of all people,especially us students, who came up with some practicalsuggestions in a discussion. (信息点①-④) In our opinion,citizens could reduce the use of private cars by sharing withtheir friends and workmates. (信息点⑤⑥) Besides, what reallymatters is that the government improves the public transportsystem to make it more convenient for people to travel.(信息点⑦⑨) Meanwhile, the government should have more greenlanes built to encourage cycling. (信息点⑧⑩) By taking theabove measures, not only can we save money, time and energybut also we can contribute to a city with better environment. （信息点）(作者单位：佛山市顺德区勒流中学)责任编校蒋小青注： 本文中所涉及到的图表、 注解、 公式等内容请以 PDF格式阅读原文 。