Giving adviceGiving adviceWritingWriting1. Review how to express advice.2. Polish a paragragh. 3. Write a paragragh.Tasks Tasks 1.Why not (do) …2.Why don’t you (do) …3.You’d better (do) …4.You should /can/could/need (do) …5.How / What about doing ? 6.Would you mind doing…7.You are supposed to (do) …8.If I were you, I would (do) … 9.V-ing …is helpful. 10.It’s helpful for you to (do)…… 11.It’s a good idea for you to (do)……Topic 1: learn EnglishTopic 2: relaxAlice, I feel more and more stressed out in Junior Three. First, I study hard, but I still can’t get good grades. Then, I often have headaches and feel sleepy, so I can’t concentrate on my study. Besides, my parents don’t understand me at all. They always think I’m wasting time. Sometimes I even argue with them. That makes us unhappy. Do you have the same problems? I need your help.I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours, Liu Ming①① ②②③③…First of all, you can ask teachers for help. Second, you can take exercise. In my opinion, taking exercise can make you to energetic because you won’t feel sleepy. It’s helpful to your health. It’s helpful to your study. Third, you can get a part time job and make some money. Finally, you’d better to understand your parents. ….1.要点:齐全enough 2.内容:建议合理、具说服力reasonable / 3.结构:文段连贯 、逻辑 4. 语法:标点词句准确correct 5. 语言:词句多样 colorfulconvincing coherent/logicalLetter 1:… In my teacher’s eyes, I am certainly a good student in English learning. I listen in class and finish homework in time. But I’m not happy with the results…Letter 2:… I like watching TV in my free time. I don’t like going out to exercise. I also like eating potatoes and drinking cola while I am watching TV. I am fat now and I have few friends. Could you give me some advice?.Dear ________,I’m sorry to hear you are in trouble now. I can understand your feeling. Don’t worry. Here are some advice for you. ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________I hope my advice would be helpful.LilinGive adviceGive advice1. 要点:是否齐全 2. 内容:建议是否合理、具有说服力 3.结构:文段是否连贯 、逻辑 4.语法:标点词句是否准确 5.语言:词句是否多样 6 书写:是否规范UnderlineUnderline good words good words /sentences/sentences1. 要点:是否齐全 2. 内容:建议是否合理、具有说服力 3.结构:文段是否连贯 、逻辑 4.语法:标点词句是否准确 5.语言:词句是否多样 6 书写:是否规范主要错误 佳句摘抄 Give advice & Help others 1. Polish your own writing.2. Appreciate others. 3. Write down the advice about the other topic.Homework Homework③③Finally, you’d better to understand your parents. ①①First of all, you can ask teachers for help. ②②Second, you can take exercise. In my opinion, taking exercise can make you energetic so that you won’t feel so sleepy. I think it’s really helpful to both your health and your study. Examples Reasons convincing convincing (有说服力的)(有说服力的)Although she is a little girl, she knows something about science.First(ly),Second(ly), Third(ly),… Besides, What’s more, In addition,… At first, First of all, In the beginning, finally,at last…On (the) one hand,…. On the other hand, …. Not only….but also….Coherent & Logical。