浅议英语书面表达中增分点摘要：学生要想在高考英语作文中拿高分，就必 须掌握得分要点本文将从如何恰当地运用较为复杂的英语 句型，以及如何巧妙地运用连接词来衔接好上下文等几方面 进行分析，以提髙学生的书面表达能力，进而帮助学生在应 试作文中取得高分关键词：高考 英语书面表达 增分点高考英语书面表达评分标准中明确规定要尽可能多使 用较为复杂的句型结构，这就要求同学们在写作过程中，要 学会运用三大从句结构以及它们与简单句之间的转换；尽量 使用变化多样的句式，如疑问句、祈使句、倒装句、省略句、 感叹句、强调句等；尽可能使用分词、动名词、不定式等非 谓语动词；学会使用被动语态，适当运用连接词等学生掌 握这些得分要点后，有效地运用在自己的文章中，必然会使 教师在阅卷过程中眼前一亮，给以高分一、三大从句与简单句之间的转换1.把定语从句或者状语从句转化为介词短语或非谓语 动词1) 转化为介词短语例如：As soon as he heard the sad news, he burst intot ears.At hearing the sad news, he burst into tears.(2) 转化为分词。
例如：The young man couldn? t help crying when he heard the bad news・ Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn? t help crying.(3) 转化为动词不定式例如：He got up early in order that he could catch the first bus. He got up early in order to catch the first bus・(4) 转化为独立主格结构例如：The physicist has been devoting his energy to his scientific research, but later cancer sucked the life out of him. Cancer sucking the life out of him, the physicist has been devoting his energy to his scientific research.2•把简单句转换为复合句，使句子更加丰富多彩(1) 使用较高级的状语从句。
例如：I won， t believe what you say. No matter what you say, I won， t believe・(2) 使用定语从句例如：The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. The girl whose composition was well writ ten is spoken highly of.(3) 使用较高级的名词性从句例如：People say he will go to France to learn art・ It is said that he will go to France to learn art.It disappointed everybody that the player was badly injured in the first round. The fact that the player was badly injured in the first round disappointed everybody.(4) 使用强调句。
例如：He didn" t know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper・ It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.(5) 使用倒装句例如：Not only should I spare no efforts to sharpen my oral English to make a qualified volunteer, but also I will shoulder the responsibility to appeal to the people surrounding me to have our environment beautified and transportation system improved.(6) 使用虚拟语气例如：You didn，t follow my advice, so you failed in theexam ・ If you had followed my advice, you wouldn?t have failed in the exam. Had you followed my advice, you wouldn? t havefailed in the exam・（7）改变时态和语态可以增加文章表达方式的多样性。
例女口： The bell is ringing now・ There goes the bel1.二、过渡性词语的合理使用1.表示并列关系的连接词如果句子之间是表示并列关系，可以使用下列连接词：and； or； as well as； not only. • • but also...； either…or… ； neither. . . nor…； as well； also等例如:他不但给我建议，还给我钱1) He gave memoney as well as advice.(2) Hegave me advice,and money as well.(3) He gave menot only advice but also money.2 •表示转折关系的连接词如果句子间是转折关系，可以使用下列连接词：but； yet； however； on the contrary； at the same time； while； nevertheless 等例女口：他原以为自己理解了那道题，但是他错了1) He thought he understood the problem, but he was mistaken.(2) He thought he understood the problem, however, he was mistaken.3•表示因果关系的连接词如果想使句子表达得丰富多彩，使整篇文章更具说服 力，表示因果关系的连接词就发挥出它们的作用了，常用的 这类词有：because； as； since； for； thanks to； thus； therefore； as a result of； consequently； for this reason； due to； owing to； on account of ； one reason is that. . . , another reason is that. . •等。
例女口:由于天在下雨，你最好乘出租车1) As it，s raining, you" d better take a taxi.(2) Because it s raining, you，d better take a taxi.(3) It，s raining, so you" d better take a taxi.4. 表示强调关系的连接词如果想进一步强调所要表达的问题，在表达上可采用下 列的连接词：even； what? s more； furthermore； moreover； besides ； in addition ； what，s worse ； to make things/matters even worse； worse still 等例女口：我不喜欢那件裙子，而且它太贵了1)1 don，t like the dress；besides,it，s tooexpensive.(2) I don，t like the dress；moreover,it，s tooexpensive・(3) I dont like the dress；what，smore,it，s too expensive・5. 表示插入关系的连接词在发表自己的观点，表明自己态度的时候，常用一些插 入语，这类的连接词有：I m sure； It hink/believe； I m afraid； as far as I know； as far as I，m concerned； from where I stand； from my point of view； on a personal note； in my opinion/view 等。
例如：From where I stand, it，s high time that everyone of us should take the responsibility to be aware of the significance of protecting our environment.6. 表示总结关系的连接词考生在书面表达中还要学会使用表示总结的一些连接 词，这类常见的词有：in short； in a word； all in all； in brief； in conclusion； to conelude； on the whole； in general； generally speaking 等例如：一般而言，语言是用来交际的1) In general, language is for communication・(2 ) Generally speaking , language is for communication.三、使用复杂高级的词汇1.多实少虚写作时，尽量多用高级词汇，少使用普通词汇；多用蕴 含感情色彩的词语，少用中性词如常见的“good” 一词， 指人时可用以下形容词来替换：kind, honest, generous, selfless , brave , warm-hearted , sympathetic ,honorable, smart等；指物时可用以下形容词来替换： great, fantastic, splendid, marvelous, excellent, wonderful, meaningful, enjoyable 等。
2•短语优先在行文中多使用词组、习语，使文章看起来更具文采例如:(1) I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us. 1 can no longer put up with the way he speaks to us.(2) He didn t listen to what I said in the class・ He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class・(3) Surp。