书面表达之读后续写序号 内容1考点解读2考向策略3考点过关【考点解读】命题趋势答题技巧真题再现真 题（典例）引领模拟检测读后续写是随着我国高考改革由教育部考试中心研制的英语高考新题型,20 16年1 0月在浙江省首次使用该题型通过读写结合，检测学生的英语书面语言理解与表达能力要求学生能够梳理故事文体的结构、分析故事发展的线索、想像故事发展的情节以及续写故事的发展和结局从试题结构看，读后续写评价的是书面理解能力和书面表达能因此，在写作之前，首先读懂文本，理清故事情节，然后构思故事的发展和结局下面介绍一下读后续写的答题技巧:【考向策略】答题技巧第一步：通读文本，提取线索词和信息句，写出每段段落大意第二步：根据文本每段内容，结合所给续写部分的首句，构思完整的故事情节第三步：根据续写部分所提供的首句，写出续写部分每段的段落大意，围绕续写部分的段落大意进行合理的细节描写第四步：润色成篇真 题（典例）引 领12021 全国新高考1卷】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文A MOTHER（S DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning forMothers Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in thekitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to thekitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left itto boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the secondstove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying thebread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burntpiece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so itcooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm andturned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so theycould continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeff s hand touched the hot burner and hegave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell ofburning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.【答案】As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.Father,sappearing was like a savior to the two children.Under the guidance of their father,they tookpositive actions and started all over again.They made the bread and then went on cookingporridge.Father helped them adjust the fire,which was the key to success.It was all right thistime.Delicious breakfast was ready.How happy they were!The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.When their mother saw thedelicious and perfect breakfast in front of her,she was very surprised.It was not only the gift,butthe love of the children for her that moved her very much.The two children could finish cookinga breakfast,which she didn,t expect.The children said loudly,“Happy Mothers Day!”Motherhugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.【解析】【分析】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和 Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败，后来在父亲的帮助下，获得成功，他们把早餐献给亲爱的母亲，妈妈非常感动的故事。
详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动2.续写线索：帮助-指导-积极-献礼-感动3.词汇激活行为类帮助：help/assist.指导：guide/conduct.献礼：present a gift/give a gift情绪类.积极：positive/positively/take positive actions.感动：moved/touched【点睛】高分句型 1.Father helped them adjust the fire,which was the key to success,（which 引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型 2,It was not only the breakfast,but the love of the children for her that moved hervery much.（使用not only but（also）句型及强调句型）真 题（典例）引领22020 浙江】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One falh my wife Elli and I had a single goakto photograph polar bears.We were staying at aresearch camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world-the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears-like all wildanimals-should be photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,Ilike it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,andsmelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.Hepulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws（爪子）.I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter（相遇），I took some pictures ofthe bear.Ell。