启航黄涛：点评2022考研英语大小作文审题与从05年到07年，小作文已经测试过辞职信(赔礼信)、恳求信和建议信的写法，08年重考了偏向于与私人沟通的赔礼信，09年小作文接着又测试了考生对建议信的写作通过试题中列举的提纲，我们推断出此次的建议信要求考生首先做简短的评论，并提出2至3条建议小作文写作难度不大，考生只要依据自己平常对“白色污染”学问的积存或常识，就能做出简短的评论，这种做法确定破坏我们的生活环境，因而不利于环保考生重要的是在其次局部加以发挥，要写出比拟中肯的建议来依据课堂上讲到的段落绽开三层论述法：国家立法，社会关注，个人遵守三个方面来绽开都可以固然还有其它方面的建议因此我们列出一个提纲：首段说明写信的目的，中间段落做出简短评论，末段提出三条建议，最终盼望被接受，表示谢意并希望回复 一.小作文局部 Directions: Restrictions on the use of plastic bags have not been so successful. In some regions, white pollution is still going on. Write a letter to the editors of your local newpaper to: 1) Give your comments briefly and 2) make two or three suggestions. Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming“ instead. Don’t write the address. 参考范文 Dear Editors, I, as your faithful reader, am writing this letter to suggest that plastic bags should be restricted in our daily life. However, to my surprise and sadness, I have found that disposable plastic bags are still widely used in some areas just because people are unwilling to change their old habits, thus causing their surroundings to be even worse. To solve this serious problem, I would like to put forward a couple of practical suggestions. Above all, our country should establish a strong agency to limit the production of those bags and monitor the use of them. Furthermore, some other choices should be adovcated to replace plastic bags with paper or bamboo ones. Finally, consumers should pay for the use of plastic bags so as to enhance their consciousness of environmental protection. I really hope my suggestions would attract your due attention and receive an early reply. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming 二.大作文审题 正如我们所料，09年的大作文还是考了我们所猜测的图画作文，字数要求在160--200词。
图画作文往往是一张抽象而意味深长的图片或漫画，有时让人很难理解今年的图画只有一张图，但主题明显直接很多人都坐在一个个狭小的空间里，在电脑面前上网谈天，虽然近在咫尺，却看似相隔很远大量的人和一台台计算机组合在一起就像一张蜘蛛网(即互联网)图画的文字示意也特别明显，网络把不同地区的人们连接在一起，这是网络带给人们的好处，但我们还应当更留意到网络带给我们不利的一面，也就是说，网络让人们沉醉在这个虚拟的空间里，人与人之间的空间距离看似缩小了，但是由于人与人之间的联系是通过电脑进展的，人们很少外出，因此实际上人们之间面对面的沟通却随之更少了尤其通过下面的文字提示：网络的“近”与“远”，这几个汉字提示我们网络即拉近了人们之间的距离，但又使得人与人之间的关系变得疏远、甚至冷漠总的说来，可以谈谈网络的利与弊，但应当多说说网络的弊端 考研大作文多年来关注的是对青少年思想品德方面的训练，比方：01年要培育爱心;02年要把民族文化发扬光大;03年要学会独立自强;04年要与时俱进;05年要孝敬父母;06年关于偶像崇拜;07年的自信;08的合作与团结，09年普遍关怀的网络问题从中我们可以看得出命题专家们对训练年轻一代的良苦专心。
也正由于如此，最近九年的考研作文看上去特殊简单推理，总不离长辈对年轻人的谆谆教育 在写作时，第一段需要简短描述图画图画中消失的人物就是许多人坐在电脑前上网谈天，示意网络给人们带来了极大的便利其次段需要阐释图画寓意，其实就是让我们分析网络的利与弊，必需实行传统的一分为二的方法先说说网络的好处，然后笔锋一转，肯定要谈网络给人们带来的一些不利方面这个内容应当重点阐述最终一段应当说明本人对网络导致这种现象的态度或建议 【作文思路】 根据我们课堂上的写作方法，可以这样来绽开描述和谈论第一段为传统的图画描述段，依据图画中的详细信息，尤其是下面的文字说明，进展直接描述比方可以运用 “As is vividly depicted in the drawing, “，和“Simply designed as the drawing seems to be，” 及其后面的文字解释说明：The caption(文字)indicates that Internet brings us both advantages and disadvantages. “属经典的开头套话在描述中，不行缺少的主题相关词包括“Internet“, “popularity“和 “computers“，另外还包括上网冲浪(surf the Internet), 沟通看法(exchange the views) 等与网络有关的词汇。
其次段要求阐释漫画背后所隐蔽的深刻社会意义在这一段首句可以直接采纳“ It is apparent that the cartoon is indicative of a pervasive problem with regard to Internet. “在句型运用方面，可以考虑使用词组“can’t….too (再怎么…也不过分)”，和强调句型“It is ….that ”同时利用转折词However来谈网络的害处可以用到的词组有：be addicted to, be indulged in, be indifferent to等 第三段阐述自己的观点或提出可行的建议都可以，我们一般把comments定位为建议结论段本段构造要求我们应当理性地对待网络，发挥它的特长，来使我们的生活更欢乐和有意义 【范文】 As is vividly depicted in the drawing, in front of computers and in narrow spaces are sitting many people, exchanging their views with each other by surfing the Internet. How impressive the drawing is in describing the people’s addiction to the Internet. The drawer’s intention seems to be highly self-evident and the meaning causes us to be thought-provoking. It holds apparent that the cartoon is indicative of a pervasive problem with regard to Internet. When it comes to(一谈到) Internet，its great impacts and benefits can’t be too estimated. It is the Internet that makes our big world become a global village. However, as a growing number of individuals are addicted to (沉溺于) the Internet, they forget doing other important work and are gradually indulged in(沉溺在) the virtual world, unwilling to go into the real society. As a consequence(因此), they close their doors and never go out as soon as they return home from work, reluctant to have any face-to-face connection even with other folks except on line. What’s worse, they become indifferent(漠不关怀)to their friends, neighbours, as well as relatives. This phenomenon is harmful to us and our community too. As the pressure in life and work increases, we should learn to use proper ways to relieve it. It’s time that we took some measures to improve the situation. People can be organized to hold some activities together to develop some good hobbies. Consequently, we must make full use of Internet to do everything beneficial to make our daily life both joyful and meaningful. (272 words ) 。