英语优秀作文的几个特点13000字 英语优秀作文的几个特点学生写作时，如果仅局限在把内容交代清楚的水准上，只选用一些普通的、直截了当的词，或一律使用简单句平铺直叙，那么，这样写出来的文章就会像一碗白开水，呆板、单调，没有可读性句式单一、缺乏生气的文章,哪怕没有任何错误也不可能得高分要使文章耐人寻味，有亮点，有深度，有文采，给读者留下深刻印象必须注意语言的多样性、连贯性和得体性,具体说来，优秀英语作文往往有以下几个特点1、长句和短句交叉使用在英语写作中，过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好正确的做法是，根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短句，使文章显得错落有致，这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感，而且使文章读起来铿锵有力如果整篇文章都是短句，显得文章简单呆板没有深度；而文章长句太多会显得冗长乏味，艰深难解只有长句和短句交叉搭配才使文章快慢结合，诵读起来，音韵铿锵，琅琅上口，给人以一种美的享受例如：中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐休息一会儿后，我们唱歌的唱歌，跳舞的跳舞，还有讲故事、下棋，大家玩得很开心一般句式】 At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.【优秀句式】 At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling stories and playing chess。
工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题例如：As a creature，I eat；as a man，I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind，they are in a way quite similar 如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！2、避免同一词语的重复使用为了使表达更生动，更富表现力，写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思，尤其是一些老生常谈的词语在作文中频繁使用同一词会显得重复累赘，不能引起读者的兴趣如果换用一些表达同一意思的新词会使文章更加生动，更富有表现力如要表达like的意思，还有love=enjoy=prefer=be fond of=be care for=appreciate等同义词使用贫穷的：poor = needy = impoverished = poverty-stricken。
富裕的：rich = wealthy = affluent = well-to-do = well-off流行的：popular = prevailing = prevalent = pervasive优秀的：excellent = eminent = top = outstanding大量的： a host of = a multitude of = a vast number of = a vast amount of例如：我喜欢读书，而我的弟弟喜欢看电视一般句式】 I like reading while my brother likes watching television.优秀句式】 I enjoy reading while my brother prefers watching television3、短语优先原则，适当使用短语代替单词一篇优秀作文里往往含有大量的短语和习惯用法用短语代替单词会使文章更加地道生动，体现作者的写作水平例如，love=fall in love withfill=be filled with = be awash with = be inundate with = be saturated with。
decide= make up one's mind一般句式】He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.优秀句式】He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up一般句式】He doesn't like music.【优秀句式】He doesn't care much for music.【一般句式】He told me that the question was now being discussed.【优秀句式】He told me that the question was now under discussion.写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到几个短语，必然会低看你一等相反，如果发现有精彩的短语，那么你的文章就容易得高分了其二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！比如：I cannot bear it.，可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.。
I want it.，可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确4、恰当使用某些固定表达方式和习惯用法一般句式】 The film was very interesting.，Both the teachers and the students liked it.【优秀句式】 The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.【一般句式】He was very tired，He couldnot walk any farther.【优秀句式】He was too tired to walk any farther.【一般句式】Your son is old. He can look after himself now.【优秀句式】Your son is old enough to look after himself now.5、合理使用省略句有些句子前后部分意思重复，如果恰当使用省略句会使句子精炼简洁，更加生动，更具文采如：(1) 他可能很忙，要是这样，我以后再来拜访。
要是不忙，我现在可以见他吗?【一般句式】 He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?【优秀句式】He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?(2) 如果天气好，我们就去；如果天气不好，我们就不去了一般句式】 If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If it is not fine, we’ll not go.【优秀句式】If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If not, not.(3) 她本可申请这份工作的，但她没有一般句式】 She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.【优秀句式】She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t .6、适当运用非谓语结构现在分词、过去分词、动名词、不定式统称为非谓语结构。
非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构，适当运用非谓语结构，会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象如：【一般句式】When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.【优秀句式】 Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.【一般句式】As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.【优秀句式】Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.【一般句式】As he was born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.【优秀句式】Born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling. 7、恰当使用关联词（过渡词或衔接词），使行文自然流畅流畅性是指根据整篇文章意思的需要，有效采用不同的连接手段，以使文章层次清晰，行文连贯。
关联词就是常用的连接手段之一英语作文中的关联词使用，可以使得句子与句子之间更加流畅，避免了各个句子的分割独立，使得文章顺理成章，一气呵成恰当使用这些关联词无疑能使全文过渡自然，令读者对后面的句子产生心理的期待和准备，增强句子间的逻辑性和紧凑性下面列举一些常用的关联词：(1) 表示平行、对等或选择关系：and，both?and，as well as，neither?nor，also，not only.?but also等2) 表示转折关系：but，yet，however，nevertheless，in spite of，although，otherwise，while等3) 表示对比关系：on the contrary，instead of，on the other hand，just like，unlike等4) 表示因果关系：so，for，therefore，as a result，because，owing to，due to，thanks to，on account of等5) 表示时间、顺序关系：shortly after， first, second?，then，next，finally，for one thing，for another thing，in the end，eventually等。
6) 表示递进、强调关系：besides，furthermore，what’s more，in addition，moreover，worse still，above all，to make matters worse等7) 表示解释、说明关系：namely，actually，such as，for example，for instance，that is to say，in other words，and so on，to tell you the truth，according to this等8) 表示结论：in short，in brief，in a word，in general，as you know，as far as I know，on the whole等例如，对于这样一段话“Usually if you read th。