Unit 1 Friendship Unit 1 Dear editor, I’m a student from Huzhou Senior High School. I have a problem. I’m not good at communicating with people. Although I try to talk to my classmates, I still find it hard to make good friends with them. So I feel quite lonely sometimes. I do want to change this situation, but I don’t know how. I would be grateful if you would give me some advice. Best wishes XiaodongRead the letter to the editor from Xiaodong: 1) What problem does Xiaodong have?I donI don’ ’t know how to change the situationt know how to change the situation ProblemsProblemsNot good at communicating Not good at communicating with peoplewith peopleFind it hard to make friendsFind it hard to make friendsFeel lonelyFeel lonelyAdvice?What is your advice?Why do you give the advice?What will be the result of your advice? 2) Why does Xiaodong write the letter? vHome school materials are everywhere. In fact, as a homeschool parent, one of the best learning tools you can use is making use of songs. Think of it. When you hear your favorite songs come on the radio and as soon as the lyrics begin, you can join in at once and sing along. Perhaps you haven’t heard this song for months or even years! Doesn’t it amaze you? There is no doubt learning through lyric and rhyme is a great way!A leading sentenceA conclusive sentence Writing taskGive adviceStructureA leading sentence( your advice )Body ( your reasons )A conclusive sentence (result) Useful expressions List several advice:First,Secondly,Thirdly,I hope you will find these useful.Ways of giving adviceWhy not…?In my opinion, you shouldIt would be a good idea if…My advice is…Words showing results:In this way; then; So/therefore; if you do this;By doing thisAnd thenBesides…In addition… Self assessmentideas(内容）structure（结构）Verb forms（动词）Spelling*grammar（语法）complete the task: advice & reasonTopic sentence + reason+ conclusive sentenceRight tense; right formsRight spelling; complete sentences. Peer assessmentideas(内容）structure（结构）Verb forms（动词）Spelling*grammar（语法）complete the task: advice & reasonTopic sentence + reason+ conclusive sentenceRight tense; right formsRight spelling; complete sentences. Dear xiadong , I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you: First ,why not go and talk to people standing on their own? I agree that this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this I am sure you will soon communicate with them well. Second, you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes. That way you will soon find people with the same interests. I think that is a good way to find new friends. Finally, you should try to join in a discussion. You may not feel that this is right, but by doing this you are letting people know how friendly you are. So there should be no problem. It should certainly kill your loneliness. I hope you find these ideas useful. Yours, Miss Wang v并列并列v选择选择v原因原因v结果结果v时间时间v比较比较v转折转折v递进递进v举例举例v总结总结Some of the discourse markersand; as well as ; also;or; either—or; or else; otherwisebecause ; owing to; due to ;on account of ; thanks toso ; therefore ; thus ; as a resultwhen ;soon after ; before; later ; first ; and then ; next ; finally; afterwards.on the contrary ; on the other hand ; likebut ; yet; however ; although; in spite of ; instead ; besides ; moreover ; even ; in additionfor example/instance; such as ; that is ; namely ; in conclusion ; in short ; in general ; generally Speaking,in all, in a word 得分条件得分条件:1.行文连贯流畅行文连贯流畅2.语句严谨准确语句严谨准确3.表达简明概括表达简明概括4.句型要有变化句型要有变化5.语言使用适当得体语言使用适当得体6.行书整洁行书整洁,字体规范字体规范 检查修改作文应注意的问题检查修改作文应注意的问题:v1. 有没有在正文一开始就摆出中心句有没有在正文一开始就摆出中心句?v2.每一段是否都有主题句每一段是否都有主题句?v3.文章是否按照写作要求的内容写文章是否按照写作要求的内容写( 有没有有没有多了多了,少了或是偏了少了或是偏了)?v4.每个句子结构是否都完整每个句子结构是否都完整( 都有主语、谓都有主语、谓语语) ?v5.有没有语法错误有没有语法错误( 如时态、语态、人称、如时态、语态、人称、单复数、大小写等）？单复数、大小写等）？ v6.句子之间是否有连词句子之间是否有连词v7.句式是否多样化？句式是否多样化？ （（ 句子的多样性是句子的多样性是决定文章能拿高粉的中要因素之一。
决定文章能拿高粉的中要因素之一 因因此，恰当地使用某些方法使句式多样化，此，恰当地使用某些方法使句式多样化，有助于增强文章的表达效果常用的方有助于增强文章的表达效果常用的方法有：恰当地运用从句、倒装句、同位法有：恰当地运用从句、倒装句、同位语从句；长短句交替使用；适当用介词、语从句；长短句交替使用；适当用介词、分词短语、不定式等开头分词短语、不定式等开头 Thanks a lot!Any comment is welcome! 。