写作亮点的体现方法一、适当运用非谓语构造非谓语构造通常被认为是一种高级构造,适当运用非谓语构造,会给人一种娴熟驾驭语言的印象如:1. When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.听了这消息他们都快乐得跳了起来2. As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.→ Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.由于不知道她的地址,我没法和她联系3. As he was born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.→ Born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.他诞生农夫家庭,只上过两年学。
二、避开重复使用同一词语为了使表达更生动,更富表现力,同学们在写作时应尽量避开重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思,尤其是一些老生常谈的词语如有的同学一看到“喜爱”二字,就会立即想起like,事实上,英语中表示类似意思的词和短语许多,如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等如:1. I like reading while my brother likes watching television.→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.三、合理使用省略句合理恰当地使用省略句,不仅可以使文章精练、简洁,而且会使文章更具文采和可读性如:1. He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?→ He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?他可能很忙,要是这样,我以后再来访问。
要是不忙,我现在可以见他吗?2. If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If it is not fine, we’ll not go.→ If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If not, not.假如天气好,我们就去;假如天气不好,我们就不去了3. She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.她本可申请这份工作的,但她没有四、敏捷转变句子开头在通常状况下,英语句子的排列方式为“主语+谓语+宾语”,即主语位于句子开头但若依据状况适当转变句子的开头方式,比方使用倒状语或以状语开头等,会使文章增加表现力如:1. There stands an old temple at the top of the hill.→ At the top of the hill there stands an old temple.在小山顶上有一座古庙2. You can do it well only in this way.→ Only in this way can you do it well.只有这样你才能把它做好。
3. A young woman sat by the window.→ By the window sat a young woman.窗户边坐着一个年轻妇女4. The door opened and Mr Smith came in.→ The door opened and in came Mr Smith.门开了,史密斯先生走了进来写好一篇英语文章,不能只靠枯燥的词汇,也要留意文章内容的设计,盼望大家在写作的过程中能够提高的更多。