1书面表达-- 赢取高分策略一、NMET 对书面表达的要求： 要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇 100 个单词左右的短文 情景包括目的、对象、时间、地 点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等本部分满分 25 分，所需时间约为 30 分钟 二、NMET 书面表达评分原则： 1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定五个档次 第五档. 21~25 分 第四档. 16~20 分 第三档. 11~15 分 第二档. 6~10 分 第一档. 1~5 分 0 分 评分提示： ·有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑（21 一 25 分） ·应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑（16 一 20 分） ·应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯（11 一 15 分） ·较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性（6 一 10 分） ·缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯 （1 一 5 分） 2、文章主要内容要求：内容要点；--覆盖所有内容要点 词汇和语法的数量和准确性；--应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 上下文的连贯；--有效地使用了语句间的连接成分 语言的得体性，--语言地道，规范 3、拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
4、词数少于 80 和多于 120 的，从总分中减去 2 分 5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次 三、如何算是一篇好文章？ 1.覆盖了所有的要点--要点全 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇--词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂） 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑--连接词 四、书面表达如何写？分为五个步骤 1、注意审题；文字信息；图画信息；题材、人称、时态、要点 2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点 3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子 4 联句成文：注意 ①主语和谓语②背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）③逻辑关系④开头与结 尾 ⑤语篇衔接 5、检查修改，规范抄写以给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象 五、文章结构：整体三部分 1.Heading 点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性 2.Body 中心记述部分；层次分明 3.Ending 小结；呼应主题 六、尽量增强书面表达效果的技巧 技巧： 1. 使用较高级的词汇---词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志 2. 使用较丰富的句式---运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。
3. 使用恰当的连接词---使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接2自然、紧凑 七、怎样使用较高级的词汇 1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. ----Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. --- We all think highly of him . 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea --- A good idea occurred to me./ / A good idea suddenly struck me. 4.The students there needn’t pay for their books --- Books are free for the students there. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.--- The plan turned out to be a failure 6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow. ---At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow. 7. She went to Austria in order to study music. ---She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music. 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.--The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. 9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.---Our school is made up of twenty–six classrooms. 10.You can find my house easily. --You’ll have no trouble finding my house. 八丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。
1. 感叹句 e.g. How happy I was when I received your letter!What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was ! 2. 强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible. 3. 倒装句 e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem.There comes the police car.Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man. 4. 省略句 e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus.Come to me if necessary. 5．with 短语 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand. 6、 定语从句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information.Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library. 7、 各种名词性从句 e.g. That’s what I should do.We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present. 8、 各种状语从句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it.The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting.So long as we work harder at our lessons, we’ll catch up sooner or later.Do call me before hand so that I can meet you at the airport.They had to wait because the rain was getting more and more heavily. Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式 1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用 V-ing 形式）. --On his arriving, please give me an e-mail. 2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） ----What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.33. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用倒装句)--Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort. 4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (使用强调句型) --It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. 5. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气） --I couldn’t have passed the physics exam but for your help. 6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) ---Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab. 7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用 V-ing 形式) ---Singing and laughing, they went back to school. 8.I won’t believe what he says. （使用状语从句）---No matter what he says, I won’t believe. 9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句） --Study hard and you’ll make rapid progress. 10．He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句) --No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. 九、高考大纲中常用的连接词 1. 表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容：另外，还有：what is more; besides; also; moreover; in addition 2. 表示转折关系：但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary. 3. 表示因果关系： 因为，因此，所以: since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示条件关系：如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 否则: or else 5. 表示时间关系： 当… 的时候 : when ; while； 在…之后: after 在…之前: before ；直到: until一…就… : as soon as ；后来， 然后: later; afterwards ；不久: soon； 近来: lately; recently自。