考向42 读后续写之情感情绪细节刻画情感细节包括人物的感受、情绪，是续写中必不可少的细节描写之一合理的情感情绪描写与刻画，可以凸显人物的性格、人际关系的特征、以及烘托故事高潮进而突出语篇主题等因此，合理的情感情绪刻画在续写中是非常必要的以下就是读后续写过程中，刻画人物情感情绪的四个方法：一、直接利用恰当的表情感的形容词、副词或名词、介词短语等表达人物的喜怒哀乐例如：快乐(happy, delighted, pleased, joyful, enjoyable等)、吃惊(surprised, shocked, amazed, astonished)等形容词或介词短语(to ones surprise, in relief, in panic)等描述人物的情绪二、利用环境细节“融情于景”烘托人物的情感例如：Della finished her crying and dried her face. She stood by the window and looked out unhappily at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard.(小说《麦琪的礼物》中利用3个形容词gray，体现了Della的难受和不开心。
)三、利用恰当的动作描写反映人物的情绪例如：下面文章片段中的句子：With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping_to_see_the_lake. (动作描写，说明Jane满怀期望) To her surprise, (利用介词短语体现Jane的吃惊) she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. (寓情于景，体现Jane的无望失落) She suddenly realized that she was lost.四、利用高级句式和修饰成分细化情感细节例如：①“Absolutely！” replied John, excitement shinning in his eyes. (利用名词excitement和独立主格结构，描写John的兴奋激动)约翰答道，“一定”，他两眼兴奋地闪闪发光。
②So angry was the bear that it roared and smacked the fence violently. (so ... that倒装句型)熊怒火中烧，开始咆哮并用爪子猛烈地拍击护栏③You can not imagine how frightened we were at the approach of the polar bear. (how引导的宾语从句，介词短语)你无法想象北极熊向我们逼近时我们多么的恐惧策略微练】Ⅰ.按要求补全下面动作、情感和心理细节的句子1．简又害怕又无助，靠着一棵树坐下，歇歇疼痛的双脚 , Jane sat against a tree, . (形容词短语/非谓语动词作状语)2．“如果我没有和汤姆吵架，我现在就不会被困在这里了，”她想，悔恨的泪水模糊了她的眼睛 ，” she thought to herself . (虚拟语气的倒装句， with复合结构)3．她挣扎着站起来寻找那个湖。
4．她精疲力竭，她爬上一块大石头，躺了下来，很快睡着了 (so ... that状语从句，一连串的动作)5．简醒来时天已经亮了 6．尽管很沮丧，她还是决定继续前进 , she decided to continue forcing her way ahead. (让步状语从句) , she decided to continue forcing her way ahead. (状语从句的省略句)7．随着小溪的声音，她向水边走去 , she walked toward the water. (非谓语动词作状语)8．突然，她注意到远处有一个熟悉的身影向她走来。
(非谓语动词作宾补)Ⅱ.将以上补全后的各句合并为短文，注意恰当的衔接过渡 【典例示例】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数应为150左右Sam Watts was a 37yearold fisherman living and working in Canada. One day, Sam planned to head out into the Pacific at 9 am and work straight through until 5pm the next day. Joining Sam would be his crewman, 24yearold Tom Buck.Although Sam had been warned that a storm was coming, there was little that would keep him from going. As he sailed through the waves some 120 kilometers from land, Sam let out his threekilometerlong fishing line. The storm was gaining strength on land but had yet to reach the men far offshore. That changed around 1 am. Waves rocked the small boat, which began to turn sideways like an amusement park ride. “Get us out of here！” Tom screamed to Sam. “Lets go back！”With the winds and waves kicking up, the boat began to fill with water. Sam and Tom tried to pull in the fishing line together, but the high waves filled the boat with water, forcing Sam to make a hard decision. He cut the line, losing thousands of dollars worth of equipment and fish in the sea. He then pointed the boat toward a port five hours away. Sam then called his boss, William Fox, to report his position.With dawn coming, Sam spotted the rise of the mountains on the horizon. He was figuring out a route through the dangerous waters when suddenly the motor stopped. “I couldnt believe it，” Sam said. “We were 24 kilometers off the coast, and the motor died.” High waves raised and dropped the boat, sending the men crashing into the sides. “William, William！”Sam yelled into the radio. “If youre coming to get me, come now！”“Were coming！” William shouted back.Paragraph 1Shortly after, the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore, driving the men farther out to sea. 。