读后续写备考写作与范文（10道题）：原文内容+续写范文+范文译文（一）【原文内容】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了亚瑟经常东西混乱，东西随地乱丢，脏衣袜从不自己 清洗但在妈妈的教育引导之下，他改变了这个坏毛病续写范文】He turned mom for help, however, Mom was still reading and said nothing. Seeing his mother's response, he burst into anger, “why are you so cold!” he shouted. But mom just closed the book, staring at him, stating calmly, “all of your pain results from your bad habits." Furious but weak in words, Arthur turned back sharply and stepped upstairs with lame legs. Arthur came to realize it was he that could solve the problem by himself. Tears of regret filling the eyes, he quietly picked up the toy train and put it in the box.Having put away the toy train, he caught sight of the dirty socks. It suddenly struck him that it was also his duty to do the washing himself. Having collected the socks, he sank them in water, then gazing at them without knowing what to do. Just as he was scratching his head, mom came over and told him how to wash them softly. His face lighting up, Arthur sprang up into his mom's warm hug. Stroking Arthur's hair, Mom smiled with satisfaction for his getting rid of the bad habit.【范文译文】他向妈妈求助，然而，妈妈还在看书，什么也没说。
看到母亲的反响，他怒火中烧 “你怎么这么冷！”他喊道但妈妈只是合上书，盯着他，平静地说：“你所有的痛苦都是 你的坏习惯造成的亚瑟气势汹汹，言语无力，猛地转身，跛着腿上楼亚瑟意识到只有 他自己才能解决问题悔恨的泪水盈满眼眶，他悄悄拿起玩具火车放进了盒子里收起玩具火车后，他看到了脏袜子他突然意识到自己洗衣服也是他的职责捡起袜 子后，他将它们浸入水中，然后盯着它们，不知如何是好就在他挠头的时候，妈妈走过 来，告诉他要如何轻柔地洗亚瑟脸一红，扑进妈妈温暖的怀抱妈妈抚摸着亚瑟的头发， 为他改掉了这个坏习惯而满意地笑了范文译文】天气更冷了，他的胳膊也疼了起来并开始变得僵硬和麻木他又喊了一声没人来 吗？妈妈！妈妈！”但自从日落以来，他的母亲一直焦急地沿着堤道为她的小男孩看了很多 次，现在她关上并锁上了小屋的门，以为彼得正在和他的盲人朋友过夜，她会在水池里骂 他早上擅自离家彼得试图吹口哨，但他的牙齿因寒冷而打颤他想起了躺在温暖床上 的兄弟姐妹，想起了他亲爱的爸爸妈妈我不能让他们淹死，”他想我必须待在这里， 直到有人来月亮和星星俯视着蹲在堤岸边-•块石头上的孩子他低着头，闭着眼睛，但他并没有 唾着我会以某种方式忍受它，”他想。
所以，他整晚都呆在那里，把大海挡在外面第 二天一大早，一个上班的人在沿着堤坝的顶部行走时听到了一声呻吟越过边缘，他看到 一个孩子依偎在长城的一边怎么了？ ”他称你受伤了吗？ ” “我把水留着！ ”彼得 喊道叫他们快点过来！”警报传开了人们拿着铁锹跑来，洞很快就补好了他们把彼 得带回家见了父母，不久全镇的人都知道他那天晚上救了他们的命十）【原文内容】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在新年里，作者的妈妈号召孩子们去帮助穷苦的一家 人，作者刚开始不愿意将自己的早饭奉献出，看到兄弟姐妹都很慷慨，也决定成为其中的 一份子，他们最终给这家人送了食物，还帮助清扫了卫生，度过了有意义的新年的故事续写范文】We were soon ready and set out. With May and Beth carrying the pot and I holding the porridge, we closely trailed mom. We plodded forward in the harsh wind and heavy snow. Then appeared a shabby house and in we popped. What greeted our eyes shocked us: at one end of the bed huddled six kids shivering with cold and the other lay a weak woman who just gave birth to a fragile child. Dirty pans and pots scattered about, with cockroaches creeping on the cracked floor.Seeing the house totally in a mess, we fell to work immediately. May helped sweep the floor. Beth and Nan cleaned the sink. Mom and I started a fire, which immediately heated up the place. The oldest brother joined us and set the table, which was now laid with lukewarm porridge, creamy milk and yummy bread. All the work done, we sat around and enjoyed the delicious food with mom complimenting it was the most meaningful New Year she had ever had. Meanwhile, tears of gratitude twinkled in the family's eyes as no words could convey with their appreciation towards us.【范文译文】我们很快就准备好了，出发了。
梅和贝丝端着锅，我端着粥，我们紧紧地跟着妈妈 我们在狂风和大雪中蹒跚前行然后出现了一个破旧的房子，我们突然出现了映入眼帘 的一幕让我们震惊：床的一端挤着六个冻得发抖的孩子，另一头躺着一个刚生下一个脆弱 的孩子的虚弱女人肮脏的锅碗瓢盆散落一地，裂开的地板上爬满了螳螂看到房子一团糟，我们立即开始工作梅帮助扫地贝丝和南清理了水槽我和妈妈 生了一堆火，立刻把这个地方加热了大哥加入我们并摆好餐桌，餐桌上摆着温热的粥、 奶油牛奶和美味的面包所有的工作都完成了，我们围坐在一起享受美味的食物，妈妈称 赞这是她度过的最有意义的新年与此同时., 一家人的眼中闪烁着感激的泪水，无法用言 语表达他们对我们的感激之情二）【原文内容】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在池塘里玩耍时遇到了一只鳄鱼的袭击，作者的 腿被鳄鱼咬伤，伙伴们用石头砸向鳄鱼，将鳄鱼的注意力从作者身上引开作者挣扎到了 岸上，流了一地的血幸好附近的猎人赶来开枪赶走了鳄鱼作者在医院里醒来时心有余 悸续写范文】I fell onto the ground, lying in a pool of blood. Meanwhile, our screams were heard by two hunters who were not far away from us. They rushed over to where we were. On seeing what was happening and the crocodile, which was still floating in the water behind me, one of them fired a shot in the air to frighten the crocodile away. It had the desired effect. The crocodile stopped in his tracks moved back a few steps from the edge of the pond, and disappeared hurriedly into the water: Then, I passed out.When I came to myself, I found myself in an unfamiliar environment. The smell of antiseptic told me that I was in the hospital. I later learned from my mother that I was rushed to the casualty ward immediately by the two hunters.I was treated for opening wounds on my right ankle and a long deep cut which required fifty six stitches. Mum reminded me of how fortunate I was to have had the two hunters nearby and have escaped from the jaws of the crocodile. What a narrow escape it really was!【范文译文】我倒在地上，倒在血泊中。
与此同时，离我们不远的两名猎人也听到了我们的尖叫声 他们冲到我们所在的地方看到发生了什么事，鳄鱼还在我身后漂浮在水中，其中一个人 朝空中开了一枪，把鳄鱼吓跑了它到达了预期的效果鳄鱼停住了脚步，从池塘边往后 退了几步，匆匆消失在水里：然后，我昏倒了当我回过神来时，我发现自己身处一个陌生的环境防腐剂的气味告诉我我在医院 后来我从妈妈那里得知，我被两个猎人立即赶到了伤员病房我因右脚踝的开放性伤口和 一个需要缝五十六针的长而深的伤口接受了治疗妈妈提醒我，有两个猎人在附近，并从 鳄鱼的嘴里逃了出来，我是多么幸运这真是一次险情！（三）【原文内容】本文以人物为线索，主要讲述了作者因为家里新收养的孩子，觉着母亲不再关注自己， 他偷了母亲对自己的爱而内心备受伤害却在一次戏剧演出中，自己的裙子束带松了，这 个男孩帮助了作者，防止了在舞台上裙子掉落的尴尬通过这件事，作者也才意识到家里 有了这个新成员也是一件不错的事。