Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,11/7/2009,#,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,中间段落的写作技法,分主题句的写法,主,旨(thesis statement)：全文中心思想的总结,主题句（topic sentence）：段落中心思想的概括,主题句（Topic sentence）可以出现在段落的任何位置，甚至可以隐于其间但是对以TEM-4考试，由于时间、篇幅有限,，,为使阅卷教师在第一时间把握主题，我们建议大家在文章最显眼的位置，以明确的方式提出文章的主题根据TEM-4 作文指令对内容安排的要求，全文的主旨在开场白提出，,因此第二部分（第二段或第三段）的主题句针对主旨而言是分主题如果第二部分只说明一个理由，则段落只有一个分主题句；如果两个理由都在第二部分出现，那么其实我们要写两个分主题句文章的发展模式如下：,分主题句写作妙招1：分主题的结构：分主题=论题+具体观点（主旨的某一具体体现）,（2006）论题“网上交友是否明智”发表自己见解,Making friends online,might result in lacking communications with friends in real life.,Making friends online,may help us enlarge our circle of friends considerably.,（1996）论题,“A major advantage/disadvantage of advertising on television”,The major advantage of TV advertising,lies in its efficiency in message conveyance.,The major disadvantage of TV advertising,lies in its negative influence on young children.,Practice,(2003)The importance of keeping a good mood,_,Keeping a good mood is conducive/helpful to ones physical and mental health,Keeping a good mood helps to start a positive recycle around you,which may free you from the pressure.,分主题句写作妙招2:分主题要足够具体,案例分析：,1.Making friends online is helpful.,2.The first reason is that we need to keep a good mood.,1.Making friends online is helpful in broadening our friends circle,2.First,we need to keep a good mood to build harmonious interpersonal relationship./we need to keep a good mood,first,to keep us healthy physically and mentally.,原句：,3.The cell phone is very important to our life.,4.Womens role is more difficult to play than that of men.,3.Cellphone is a very important way of communication./Cellphone is a new way of getting information.,4.Compared with men,women have to experience more serious dilemma between tiresome housework and competitive job.,分主题句写作妙招3:分主题要足够概括,病例：,1.My statement of the importance of keeping a good mood is based on the following reasons.,First,I know everyone has such an experience that when you are upset or gloomy,you are unwilling to do anything.You become low-spirited in study or work.,（所需命题形式出现的具体理由，并非以具体现象形式出现的论证过程）,2.,First,a 100-year-old man was reported to do physical exercises every day.He said that it is sports that make him stay healthy.（first后面仅是一论据，不足以概括论点）,分主题句写作妙招4:分主题表达要充分自信、坚定,直截了当表明观点，不用刻意强调这是“我自己的观点”，显得更加客观、自信。
尽量避免使用“I think”、“I believe”等表达试比较：,In this paragraph I will talk about why people go to college.,People have many complex reasons for going to college,In my opinion,everyone should exercise.,Everyone should exercise to reduce stress,maintain a healthy weight,and feel better overall.,I think student fees are much too high,Student fees need to be explained and justified,.,分主题句写作妙招5:分主题表达形式要规范(无句子片段等),句子要完整，最好陈述句,Why should we keep a good mood under whatever circumstances?First,to be calm enough to make decisions.,改为,：The reason for us to keep a good mood under whatever circumstance is that it can help us calm down to make a sensible decision.,反义疑问句,双重否定句能表达强烈的感情但往往带有强烈的主观情感。
最客观的最有说服力，我们建议大家用陈述句来表达分主题,Why shouldnt we keep healthy by doing regular exercise?,No one doubts the importance of a good mood in keeping a good relationship with others.,可改为：,We should keep healthy by doing regular exercise.,A good mood is very important in keeping a good relationship with others.,练一练,判断下列各句是否可以做分主题句,Because of the various advantages of cellphones,they are now widely used through the world.,It is true that the dinning condition here is poor.Generally speaking,there are two main problems.,Last Sunday,I went to my sisters wedding party.,Computer games are harmful to youngsters physically and mentally,Extracurricular activities can develop students sense of cooperation.,For reference,Because of the various advantages of cellphones,they are now widely used through the world.,关键词，advantage or,wide use,?,Cellphones are now widely used through the world,because of their various functions.,(末尾中心句，亦利于承接下文),It is true that the dinning condition here is poor.Generally speaking,there are,two main problems,.,poor dining condition;two main problems;二合一，更紧凑概括,可合为：,The dining condition here is poor in the following two aspects.,Last Sunday,I went to my sisters wedding party.,何为主题句？,充分概括段落主要内容，对所发生的事情或所描述的事情有一个总体的评级,原句有时间、人物、地点的描述；叙事开场白；细节陈述；不符合主题句特征；可改为：,My sisters wedding is quite traditional.,Computer games are harmful to youngsters physically and mentally,Extracurricular activities can develop students sense of cooperation.,主题鲜明，概括具体,主题拓展方法,确定了主题句也就确定了段落发展方向。
主题句的常用拓展方法有：,举例、列举、对比比较和因果论证法用什么取决于考试指令例如：1995年命题作文指令中,1.对比比较法,（1996）The main difference between my college life and my middle school life.指令,First Para.,Among various differences,I enjoy the“freedom”of college life most.,Second Para.,Firstly,I can enjoy the freedom to make decisions.,In the college I am free to discuss various problems with my teachers.No one scolds me when I argue against his or her opinions.,However,in the midd。