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1、 一、短文写作/大作文1. 题目：Academic Dishonesty on Campus（观点表达型）写作要求Recent surveys show that a lot of college students download papers from the Internet to savethe trouble of doing the assignments. This kind of academic dishonesty does harm to the students.You are required to analyze its harmful effects and su
2、ggest some ways to prevent it.Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Academic Dishonesty on CampusYou are to write in three parts.In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.（是什么）In the second part, provide reasons to support your opinion wit
3、h appropriate details.（为什么）In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.（怎么办）Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure tofollow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.审题思路本题是一道现象解释说明/结果预测型的题目，要求分析学术欺骗行为可能会有什么样的
4、恶果，并提出预防措施 。可以从以下几方面进行分析 ：关于结果方面： 对个人能力 、诚信等方面不利 ； 对他人不公平，造成恶劣影响 ；可以单说一项 ，也可以综合起来说 。（为什么）关于建议方面： 事先说明这种做法的后果，进行教育； 采取惩罚措施 。（怎么做）范文赏析Academic Dishonesty on CampusIt is shown in the recent surveys that many college students copy papers from the Internet to save the trouble ofdoing their assignments. I
5、n my opinion, this kind of academic dishonesty is very harmful to these students.引言部分 ：作者先提出有学生从网上抄文章以完成老师布置的任务，然后提出自己的观点：这种行为对学生是不利的。（是什么从题目中获取，并提出观点）First, copying papers from the Internet makes students lazy. Copying papers from the Internet seems easy and can save some time and trouble; seldom w
6、ork hard to complete their papers on their own. In other words, students will become lazier and lazier. Second, students can learn little from copying others work. Students cannot improve their abilities just by downloading papers from the Internet without their own thinking and working. Whats worse
7、, once students get used to academic cheating, they may also cheat in other cases in the future, which will be very dangerous for them, especially when its put down in the honesty record.主体部分：作者在这里给出了三个理由：使学生变懒 ；学不到东西，破坏诚信。这里使用 了first，second，what s worse来连接这些理由。这里的一个亮点是近义词的使用，如 ：copy papers from the
8、 Internet ，academic dishonesty ，copy others work ，download papers from the internet，academic cheating 等都是表示学术舞弊行为。（给出理由）Therefore, in order to prevent academic dishonesty on campus, some punishments by the school may be necessary. But the most important thing is that teachers should talk to those st
9、udents, and make them aware of the fact that copying others work cannot bring them any knowledge and that only by working hard can they improve themselves.总结部分：作者用therefore自然引入结论部分，提出自己的建议：需要惩罚，但更要教育。2. 题目：Studying Abroad: Hardships and Rewards（利弊分析型）写作要求Nowadays more and more students choose to go
10、abroad after they graduate from colleges and universities. They say that they benefit a lot from it, though some people argue that there aremany hardships and difficulties. Whats your opinion about it?Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Studying Abroad:
11、Hardships and RewardsYou are to write in three parts.In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.（是什么）In the second part, provide reasons to support your opinion OR describe your idea.（为什么）In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.（怎么做）Marks will
12、be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.审题思路本题是一个观点选择型的题目，就目前大学生在毕业后选择 留学的利弊孰大孰小进行分析。题目可以从以下几个方面入手：思路1：利大于弊虽然有困难 ，但整体上利大于弊，利体现在 ：1. 教学软件硬件优异 ；2. 有利于将来就业等。思路2 ：弊大于利虽然有好处 ，但整体上弊大于利 ，弊体现在 ：1. 费用昂贵 ；2. 文化差异 ，难以融入
13、其中等。思路3 ：应具体问题具体分析 ，因人而异留学有益 ，体现参考思路1；留学也有弊端 ，体现参考思路2 ；是否选择留学 ，应根据个人情况而定 。范文赏析 Studying Abroad: Hardships and RewardsThere is no denying the fact that studying abroad is a hotly debated topic today. As far as Im concerned, I believe hardships and rewards coexist and people have to consider it from a
14、ll sides.引言部分：作者先提出留学是个热门话题 ，然后说明留学有利有弊应全面综合来考虑 。这表明下文将既讲利又讲弊。（是什么）Obviously, studying abroad has a number of rewards. In the rst place, a student can have access to advanced science and technology as well as desirable working conditions which might not be available at home. In the second place, he
15、can be exposed to entirely new ideas and trends. Last but not least, by living and studying in a foreign country, one can improve his foreign language much faster than at home. Nevertheless, as every coin has two sides, studying abroad also confronts （面对）one with a series of hardships. For one thing
16、, learning a foreign language is far from an easy thing at the beginning for most people. For another, a completely new environment with different customs and habits mayalso be a barrier to overseas students, especially to the young. An added difficulty lies with finance: it can cost a lot to study abroad.主体部分：作者先说有几个显而易见的益处是列举观点时常用的句式。然后用“In the first p
