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1、大学英语四级写作评分实例题目 1：Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports1、参加体育运动有许多好处2、但也有副作用3、你的体会【样卷 1】得分：2 分I like sports. It take me more profit. The first one is health as well known. The second is relaxion. After learning in school, I like make some movement, just as running. It can relax myself. Although the
2、re has so many other positive aspects of sports. There also has so many negative aspects of sports. It make someone damagours. Because you would hurt in sport, just like football. Its most likely to happen but it couldnt provent people from sports.I think that sports take more profit than damaguos t
3、o me. I like sports.【样卷 2】得分：5 分Sports can provide us good healthy. Especially when we are in childhood. Sports can be benefit of our growing. It can strengthen our body, brighten our brain, widen our all kinds of interests and make you encouragable. As a student studying in college sports is essent
4、ial and important for our study. Positive sports can make you succeed in all kinds of things.But it doesnt follow that sports has not any shortcoming. If occupying all of you spare time, sport will influent other hobbies of yours. If you do that for a long time, you will become a hollow-brain man. I
5、t is terrible for your future. I like sports very much. Because suitable sports really can help my study. And it make me confident. I can solute any question depending on my energy and storing body.【样卷 3】得分：8 分There are a lot of positive aspects of sports. People takes part in sports and game s from
6、 time to time is likely to have a good body. While having sports, people can strengthen his muscles, fasten his speed of response, and increase his ability of resisting disease. Sports are also helpful to train peoples charactors and determianation.But you can never neglect the negative aspects of s
7、ports. People may hurt himself or others when he join sports, especially those are violent.On the end, having sports has more advantages than disvantages. I enjoy playing basketball and this has brought me such excitement. And I have make some good friends when we played basketball together. We alwa
8、ys stick to the rules so that I never hurt others or be hurted.【样卷 4】得分：11 分Sports have a lot of good effects. It can make you stronger and more intelligent. Proper sports can also make you feel energetic for work. For example, if you play football, your muscles exercise and became stronger and stro
9、nger. If you play chess, your brain moves quickly. Thats good for the development of your intelligence.On the other hand, sports have a few ill effects. It may make you feel tired if you exercise too much. And old people may be hurt by improper sports. Furthermore sports may even lead to sudden deat
10、h.I prefer to play football. Im a member of college team. When I play, I feel excited, and after it, I feel relaxed. Thats to say: its good for my health.【样卷 5】得分：14 分Sports benefit us in many respects. When taking part in sports, we get the chance to train almost all parts of our bodies. There is n
11、o doubt that proper sports activities keep our physical fitness. Furthermore, sports can enrich our life and maintain our psychological health. Through participation, everyone can learn that on the playground he not only struggles for himself but also fights for his team. Sports teach us about consi
12、deration, cooperation and optimism to failure. But sports can do some harm to those people who can not plan their activities properly. Too hard training my hurt their bodies, exhaust their vigor, and even cause them to be sick.In general, I love sports. I enjoy sports. I feel that I not only gain a
13、well-balanced life through going in for sports, but also get more chances to move closer to nature. Sports add happiness to my everyday life when I perform in a decent way.解释说明型模板首段（描述现象）模板 1 Nowadays, with the reform of （现象的背景） , （描述现象） . This phenomenon has been brought into public focus and calle
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