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1、专题十七 概要写作,高考英语 (浙江专用),自主命题浙江卷题组 Writing 1(2019浙江6月) 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, “Weve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when par- ents tended to be more strict.”By
2、giving kids a lot of praise, parents think theyre building their childrens confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and,when given in a way thats insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where t
3、heir parents praise has put them. Still,dont go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much.Kids will feel like theyre not good enough or that you dont care and,as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.,五年高考,So wha
4、t is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome,you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward. “We should especially recognize our childre
5、ns efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal,”says Donahue,author of Parenting Without Fear:Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. “One thing to remember is that its the process not the end product that matters.” Your son may not be the best basketball player on hi
6、s team. But if hes out there every day and playing hard,you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard,cook dinner,or finish a book report. But whatever
7、 it is,praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的)to the amount of effort your child has put into it.,答案 写作提示 1.本文是一篇议论文。文章论述了如何有效表扬孩子的问题。文章结构清楚,论点明确。 2.文章第一段指出过度的表扬不利于孩子的成长。第二段认为不表扬孩子也不好。第三段指 出了表扬的核心:要关注过程而非结果。最后一段指出,我们要表扬孩子的努力,不必太过关注 结果。 3.针对此类文章最好在概要中加入主旨句,先对文章的总体内容给予
8、介绍。 One possible version: How to praise our kids is really a sensitive problem.(主旨)Experts believe that too much praise or praising the kids in a wrong way may have opposite effects on children.(要点1) On the other hand, no praise also does harm to kids development.(要点2)To gain the best result, our pr
9、aise should focus on the process rather than the end product.(要点3) Therefore,what we should praise is our kids proper effort, regardless of the result.(要点4),精彩语句 1.精美词汇 sensitive adj.敏感的 focus on 集中于 regardless of 不管 2.出彩结构 How to praise our kids is really a sensitive problem.(“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”结构作主语) Th
10、erefore,what we should praise is our kids proper effort, regardless of the result.(what引导主 语从句),Writing 2 (2018浙江11月) 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Its a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can all start to look and sound the same. Nothing will give you the sense
11、of what it will actually be like to live on a col- lege campus(校园)like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms, classrooms and athletic equip- ment and, of course, the students. It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to vis- it college campuses, and it can also be pricey i
12、f the schools you are applying to happen to be more than a car ride away. But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right one. Theres no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area. I
13、n fact, a lot of college applications even ask if you have visited campus, and obviously, if you live across the country that wont be as much of a possibility, but if you live nearby, go check it out! If campus visits arent going to happen before you apply, at the very least you should find some tim
14、e between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools youd like to attend.,It can save you a lot of heartache if you rule out now the things that you dont like about certain campuses, things that you wouldnt know unless you actually visit. Now, if time and money are making it i
15、mpossible, then check out the online college fairs at Col- legeWeekLive. Its a chance to chat online with admissions officers, students, and college coun- selors(顾问), and it wont cost you a penny! You can register for its online college fair at college- . While visiting an online college fair cant t
16、ake the place of an actual campus visit, it can be a very useful tool that along with all your other research will help you make an informed decision about which colleges or universities youd like to attend.,答案 One possible version: It is a wise choice for you to pay a personal visit to the college you are applying to,especially the ones that are close to you.(要点1)In order to avoid being regretful, you should at least visit the col- lege you decided to
