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1、2019年初三英语作文whetherteenshouldmaketheir whetherteenshouldmaketheirowndecision Whetherteenshouldmaketheirowndecisions?Ithinkwecantalkaboutthisquestionfromtwoways.Ontheonehand,Althoughteenareyoung,theyhavetomakemanyimportantchoicesbythemselves.suchlikemakingfiends,wearingwhatkindsofclothes,Teenshouldlea
2、rntoplanthingsforthemselves,theyneedsomeskillstomakealivinginthefuture.manyparentscareabouttheirchildrentoomuch.Thisgivestheirchildrenalotofpressure.thatisnotgoodforteen.Onetheotherhand,althoughteencanmaketheirdecisionsbythemselves,butasforsomeserousthings,teenshouldalsoacceptadvicefromtheirparents.becauseparentshavemoreexperienceandtheycantellyouwhatisrightandwrong. 点评:文章观点明确,能通过一分为二的辩证的观点看问题,非常好。思路清晰,句子前后连贯,过渡自然,句子结构正确,能够使用一些重要的短语和句型,简单句和复合句的并用增强了文章的色彩,提高了文章的档次。文章写得非常成功!继续努力哦! 美中不足:只要注意一下个别单词的使用和字母的大小写就可以了。 初三英语作文-whetherteenshouldmaketheir相关文章: