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1、,Summary 写作思路,1、 对所给文本内容要点和结构的精确解读； 2、对所写文本行文措辞和逻辑的衔接归整。 A. 理解文章，概括大意 主题句直接归纳法 关键词整合归纳法,概要写作No 1,A typical lion tamer(驯兽师) in peoples mind is an entertainer holding a whip and a chair. The whip get all of the attention, but its mostly for show. In reality, its the chair that does the important work
2、.When a lion tamer holds a chair in front of the lions face, the lion tries to focus on all four legs of the chair at the same time .With its focus divided, the lion becomes confused and is unsure about what to do next. When faced with so many options, the lion chooses to freeze and wait instead of
3、attacking the man holding the chair.,概要写作No 1,A typical lion tamer(驯兽师) in peoples mind is an entertainer holding a whip and a chair. The whip get all of the attention, but its mostly for show. In reality, its the chair that does the important work .When a lion tamer holds a chair in front of the li
4、ons face, the lion tries to focus on all four legs of the chair at the same time .With its focus divided, the lion becomes confused and is unsure about what to do next. When faced with so many options, the lion chooses to freeze and wait instead of attacking the man holding the chair.,When faced wit
5、h the four legs of a waving chair, a lion is unable to focus, feels confused and freezes.,How often do you find yourself in the same position as the lion? How often do you have something you want to achiever (e,g. lose weight , start a business , travel more ) -only to end up confused by all of the
6、options in front of you and never make progress ?,How often do you find yourself in the same position as the lion? How often do you have something you want to achiever (e,g. lose weight , start a business , travel more ) -only to end up confused by all of the options in front of you and never make p
7、rogress ?,When people are in the same position as the lion, they feel confused and make no progress.,This upsets me to no end because while all the experts are busy debating about which option is best, the people who want to improve their lives are left confused by all of the conflicting information
8、 .The end result is that we feel like we cant focus or that were focused on the wrong things, and so we take less action, make less progress, and stay the same when we could be improving.,It doesnt have to be that way. Anytime you find the world waving a chair in your face, remember this: All you ne
9、ed to do is focus on one thing. You just need to get started .Starting before you feel ready is one of the habits of successful people. If you have somewhere you want to go, something you want to accomplish, someone you want to become .take immediate action. If youre clear about where you want to go
10、, the rest of the world will either help you get there or get out of the way .,It doesnt have to be that way. Anytime you find the world waving a chair in your face, remember this: All you need to do is focus on one thing. You just need to get started .Starting before you feel ready is one of the ha
11、bits of successful people. If you have somewhere you want to go, something you want to accomplish, someone you want to become .take immediate action. If youre clear about where you want to go, the rest of the world will either help you get there or get out of the way .,People need to focus on one th
12、ing and get started immediately.,B. 妙用技巧，整理成文。 评分标准： 理解准确，涵盖全部要点 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用语句建的连接成分，是所完成的概要结构紧凑； 完全使用自己的语法。 1、确保要点不遗漏 2、注重行文表达，处理信息整合。 a. 对原来的语言进行语态转换或同义替换。 b. 适当添加衔接词、过渡句 c. 尽量使用贴切的高级词汇、句型。,A possible version,In face of the four legs of a waving chair, a lion stays still, unable to decid
13、e which one to concentrate on, which is often the case with humans. When confronted with numerous choices, people tend to shrink back, making no advances. Actually, to seek a way out of the dilemma, what people are supposed to do is make a choice anyway and act upon it instantly.,A possible version,
14、In face of the four legs of a waving chair, a lion stays still, unable to decide which one to concentrate on, which is often the case with humans. When confronted with numerous choices, people tent to shrink back, making no advances. Actually, to seek a way out of the dilemma, what people are suppos
15、ed to do is make a choice anyway and act upon it instantly.,67 words,A possible version,In face of the four legs of a waving chair, a lion stays still, unable to decide which one to concentrate on, which is often the case with humans. When confronted with numerous choices, people tent to shrink back
16、, making no advances. Actually, to seek a way out of the dilemma, what people are supposed to do is make a choice anyway and act upon it instantly.,67 words,freezes,承上启下过渡句,faced with,many options,It doesnt have to be that way.,A possible version,In face of the four legs of a waving chair, a lion stays still, unable to decide which one to concentrate on, which is often the case with humans. When confronted with numerous choices, people tend to shrink back, making
