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1、高考英语作文:OnEquality范文 OnEquality Inthedayswhenawomansentireobligationwastobeagooddaughter,agoodwifeandagoodmother,menandwomenwerefarfromequal。Womensufferedsexualdiscriminationuntiltheso-calledfeminismcameintobeing。Nowadays,feminismhasbeenrunningforoveracentury。Result?Itranintotheextremeofequalityfromm
2、yperspective。 Mostofusagreethatmenandwomenshouldenjoyequalityinthismodernsociety。Butwhatonearthdoesthisequalitymean?Tobeequal,thoseforfeminismwouldliketoshareeverythingwithmentheysplitbills,applyformasculinejobs,etc。Theyintendedtobuyinalltheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofbeingaman。Ontheirlongjourneytot
3、heequalworld,theyveforgottensomebasicfactstheyAREwomen。Evenschoolchildrenknowthatwomen,afterall,aredifferentfrommenbothphysicallyandmentally。Itisunwise,orevenstupid,toignoreallthesedifferencesandpursueasocalledequalworld。Wecouldntexpectamantogivebirthtoababyaswecouldntexpectthesuntoriseinthewest。Lik
4、ewise,wecouldntexpectawomantobecometheworldsfastestrunner,asissimple,butseemsforgottenbythosefeminists。 Equalityisnotbisectingeverything。Realequalityshouldbebuiltuponthecommonsenseofthebasicsexualdifferences。Sincesomeofthejobscanonlybedonewellenoughbymen,womenshouldnotfeeldiscriminatedwhenwefail。Aft
5、erall,thererealsosomejobs,whichcanonlybeperfectlydonewithwomenshands。Thesearenotsymbolsofinequality,butnaturallaws。Whatreallycountsisequalityinrights,reputation,etc。Onlywhenalltheindividualsvaluethespiritofbeingequalcanwomenreallyenjoyequalitywithmen。 简评 男女平等是人们的美好夙愿,但什么才是真正的平等?怎样促成平等的实现?一些女权主义者们所倡导
6、的能带来真正意义的平等吗?这是文章要告诉我们的。 文章观点比较独特,向进行了一个多世纪的女权运动提出了质疑。开篇亮出了观点,明确表态。“Nowadays,feminismhasbeenrunningforoveracenturyResult?Itranintotheextremeofequalityfrommyperspective”在第二段写到女权运动在现今社会的产物,进一步指出,“Itisunwise,orevenstupid,toignorea11thesedifferencesandpursueaso-calledequalworld”,并且附加了两个简洁有力的事实例证,加强这一论述观点。到此为止,文章的论述都是有条有理的,但文章接下来就急于结尾了,而对于什么是真正的平等,和如何促成平等的实现,几乎是一语带过,只写到,“Whatreallycountsisequalityinrights,reputation,etc”没有展开任何的论述,感觉是指出了问题,却没找到真正的方向,最后一段的论述空洞,没有说服力,让人觉得虎头蛇尾,实在可惜。 文章中的关联词使用得不多,从语言表述方面也还不够成熟。英语语言是一种“chainlaneuaee”,而准确、恰当的关联词是语言学习是否步入一个成熟阶段的衡量指数,这也是该习作要注意提高的地方。 高考英语作文:OnEquality相关文章: