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1、Written Work,Dont worry if you have problems! If youre breathing, you have difficulties. Its the way of life. And believe it or not, most of your problems may actually be good for you! The lagoon (环礁湖) side of the Great Barrier Reef looks pale and lifeless, while the ocean side is lively and colorfu
2、l. The reason is that the coral (珊瑚) around the lagoon side is in still water, with no challenge for its survival. It dies early. The coral on the ocean side is constantly being tested by wind, waves and storms. It has to fight for survival every day of its life. As it is challenged and tested it ch
3、anges and adapts. It grows healthy. It grows strong. And it reproduces. Thats how it is with people. Challenged and tested, we come alive! Like coral struck by the waves, we grow. Physical demands can cause us to grow stronger. Mental and emotional stress can produce strength and patience. Spiritual
4、 testing can produce strength of character and faithfulness. So, you have problemsno problem! Just tell yourself, “There I grow again!” 写作内容: 1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要； 2. 用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括： (1) 你在生活中遇到的2-3个问题； (2) 就如何对待或解决你的问题，谈谈你的理解和想法。,问题： 狗咬的？ 汪汪汪！ -2分,一、问题作文：,问题： 你老师没跟你说不分段会迷了阅卷老师的眼吗？ -2分,问题：第一段未写内容概要
5、 -2分,问题：只写了内容概要，未提升主题 -2分,问题：第二段没有主题句，而且词数偏多（共只要120字）。切记：每部分务必先,Singal,问题：陈述问题含糊不清，连词意义不明，段不达意，果断下降等级。,问题：第三段从主题句看出，只写了做法，未有理解 -5分,二、优秀书面表达,优秀之处： 第一段内容概要齐全，升华到位。 言简意赅。,优秀之处：除到位外，一个句型： A is to B what C is to D 妙不可言,优秀之处：第二段导入自然,优秀之处：导入自然，例子不错,优秀之处： 第三段 主题句，高级句型到位 难得,优秀之处：高级表达不少，但可惜 你能发现问题所在吗？,优秀书面表达选
6、集,可惜啊！ 注意第一段,大家来找茬： 尤其第二段,新材料作文- 如何概括,How to write a summary,(1)概括内容要点要：精，准，全,写概括时应满足的5个条件,(4) 一般以第三人称来表述,(2)不得直接引用原文的句子（同义词组替换法；正话反说法 (虚拟法)；语态变换；简单句变复合句）,(3)词数:约30词（小于20词或大于40词，扣2分）,(5)与原文时态一致（正文和结尾除外）,记叙文概括的方法-串联要素法,第一步：先通读全文，找出几个要素 who 谁 what 何事 when 何时 where 何地 why 原因 as a result/consequence/fin
7、ally 结果 .,which led to,第二步：用自己的话串联起来 万能公式：The passage mainly tells us that sb. (who) did sth. (at someplace at sometime ) because of / as a result of /due to , which led to finally/eventually,开头套用句式： The story/passage mainly tells us that The passage describes What is revealed in the passage is that
8、 What the passage conveys to us is ,Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod with bait, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting n
9、ear me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “Dont consider f
10、ishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.” Suddenly, I understood what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the
11、following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience.,had no patience,第一步：请找出这篇短文的几个要素： who 谁 _ _ what 何事 _ _ when 何时 where 何地 why 原因 _ _ as a result 结果 _,I (the writer),didnt catch any fish,
12、an old man,his basket was full of fish,got very angry,Its very important to be patient,learn to be patient; caught it.,第二步：用自己的话串联起来,One possible version,The passage mainly tells us that the writer who had no patience at first caught a lot of fish after becoming patient because of being influenced b
13、y an old man. Finally , he realized patience is the key to success.,had intended to give up intended to have given up,Group Work,阅读下面的短文，然后以约30个词概括这篇短文的主要内容。 Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment. I went to a very sma
14、ll high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I need to know some basic life skills, such as balancing a check-book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me
15、at first and I got badly homesick. Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I love itgood facilities, helpful instructors, and a good library. The students Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs. One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on dance team in college and met a ton of people that wayit was so much easier to make f
