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1、,How to Write a Topic Sentence,读写任务段落之主题句,评分标准及解题要求,读写任务写作（25分）,概括（5分）,写作内容（20分）,Lead-in,包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或较少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。 得18-20分； 2.包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。得14-17分。 3.包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个
2、别内容不准确或不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。 得11-13分。 4.包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。得7-11分。 5.只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄原文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。得4-6分。,2013年广东高考读写任务，第二部分部分(20分)评分细则,评分标准及解题要求,读写任务写作（25分）,概括（5分）概括全面，表述
3、清晰,写作内容（20分）:主题明确，内容丰富 2007-2013的广东高考卷中，都给出三条内容要点。 因读写任务“写作内容”所列要点的顺序已具有内在的逻辑性，所以应该按照试题所给内容要点顺序写作。一般是每个写作要点安排为一个自然段，且将写作内容的每个要点作为各段的主题句，将主题句放在各段的开头，这样既可以避免在写作时跑题或遗漏要点，又方便阅卷老师落实要点是否齐全 。,As for me, what I do every day is to study hard to enter a famous university, which is always the expectations of m
4、y parents and teachers. So traveling among classroom, dorm and canteen is the routine work. Seldom do I have the time to do some activities. Anyway, unlike you, I have learned how to be independent in a boarding school, which is beneficial to adjust to the college life.,Read the paragraph, and then
5、underline the topic sentence,(NMET2008) 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括： (1) 对中学生活的感受； (2) 理想的大学生活； (3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。,My ideal college life is that I become mature both physically and mentally. I can also obtain qualified academic knowledge and get well prepared for society.,Read the paragraph, a
6、nd then underline the topic sentence,(NMET2008) 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括： (1) 对中学生活的感受； (2) 理想的大学生活； (3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。,As we all know，college is different from middle school. It connects not only adolescence to adulthood，but also the ivory tower to the real society. So an active part in ac
7、tivities，associations as well as some romances are three keys to achieving my ideal college life.,Read the paragraph, and then underline the topic sentence,(NMET2008) 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括： (1) 对中学生活的感受； (2) 理想的大学生活； (3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。,What is a topic sentence?,A topic sentence is a sent
8、ence to tell the reader what the paragraph is mainly about.,Presentation,How to write a topic sentence？,2. Answer the question directly,1. Repeat the content,3. Share the experience,4. Express your view,Skill 1 Repeat the content 复述内容,要点要求说明某事的重要性、意义、重要作用、差别、影响、利弊等。这类主题句直接翻译要点作为段落的主题句。,According to
9、the information, write a topic sentence. 1. (NMET2010要点2) 你的父母（或其他亲人）是如何鼓励你学习的； My _ used to _like this. 2. (NMET2011要点2) 想家给学习和生活带来的影响； Being homesick _ my life.,affected/influenced/ had an influence /effect on,Task 1 Finish all the exercises in Skill 1,parents/relative,encourage me to study,3. (NM
10、ET2013要点1) 描述清洁工工作的艰辛;,Cleaning the street is a kind of hard job.,/ There is no doubt that what a cleaner does is hard.,重要的; 扮演重要角色; 影响; 利弊; 有益； 有害； 原因；,important/of importance play an important role in. affect/influence have an effect/influence on advantages and disadvantages be beneficial/of benef
11、it to; do good to; do harm to；be harmful to； the reason whyis that / The reasons for this are as follows.,Useful expressions,Skill 2 Answer the question directly 回答问题,要点的题干是问句或含“是否”的句子,可直接回答,作为主题句。,1. (NMET2007要点1) 以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点： 读信后的感受； After reading the letter, I _by your deepest love f
12、or me. 2. (NMET2011要点3) 你（或你的朋友）是如何应对的。 (材料内容：上寄宿学校,想家了需要适应新的环境),Task 2 Discuss in your group and finish all the exercises in Skill 2,According to the information, write a topic sentence.,As days went on, I slowly adapted to the new environment.,was moved/ touched,3. (NMET2013要点2) 假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？,I
13、f there were no cleaners in the city, it would be filled with rubbish.,Skill 3 Share the experience 引出经历,需要讲述、举例时，引出记叙文的具体事例。,It reminds me of my experience I also experience such a before. I also have a similar experience (of.). It occurred to me that my friend had a similar experience.,Sentence pa
14、tterns about sharing the experience,According to the information, write a topic sentence. (NMET2011要点1)以约120个词讲述一次你（或你的朋友）想家(homesick)的经历，内容包括： 时间、地点和起因； (Tips:我也有像Tom那样想家的经历。/ 使我想起了我的经历。),Task 3 Finish all the exercises in Skill 3,I also have a similar experience of feeling homesick like Tom.,/ It
15、reminds me of my experience.,2. (NMET2012要点1) 上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师;,It reminds me of my favourite teacher, Miss Li.,Skill 4 Express your view 表明观点,要点的题干含“认为”、“的看法”等时,可明确表示对某观点支持、赞同或反对、不赞同作为主题句。,Useful expressions,依我看来， In my opinion/view, As far as Im concerned From my point of view Personally, As for
16、me,赞成 support/ be in favor of/ be for/ approve of the idea/agree with sb/ agree on/about sth/ agree that. 反对 disagree with sb/disapprove of the idea/ object to sth/ be against/oppose sth/be opposed to sth,建议 suggest doing sth / that advise sb to do sth/that suggestion/ advice 采取有效的措施 take effective measures/ steps/ action to do sth,1. (NMET2010要点1 ) 你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法；,Task 4 Discuss in your group and finish
