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1、,为了你的健康成长,家里父母会给你制定一些规矩,或许你会认同或者不满,请你以“my family rules”为题写一篇80词左右的短文,写出你家里的制度(包括穿衣,饮食,作息时间,上网,看电视以及交友等方面),并发表你的观点,开头已给出。 参考词汇:first,then, whats more, in my opinion, be allowed to ,have to 参考句型: I have to get up at I cant go out at night. My parents worry about my safety. I am not allowed to watch TV
2、 on school nights. I should be allowed to,审题,文体:议论文,人称:以第一人称为主,时态:一般现在时,PART 01,列提纲找思路,开头:开门见山提出在我家有很多的家规,a lot of rules, follow,具体写出有哪些规章制度,结尾:我的感受,watch TV, surf the Internet, make friends, wear.,In my opinion, obey them,PART 01,满分作文欣赏,There are a lot of rules that I have to follow in my home. Let
3、 me tell you some of them. First ,I am not allowed to spend too much time watching TV or surfing the Internet on school day, and I must go to bed before 10:00, because I have to do homework and get up early the next morning. Then I have to clean my room every morning. My parents think it is a very g
4、ood habit to do so. But I dont agree with them, because my room is not always dirty. Besides, I am also not allowed to wear the clothes what I want, it makes me unhappy. Whats more, Im an outgoing girl, but my parents dont allow me to make friends with people I know. I know they both care much about
5、 me. However ,I am allowed to make my own decision. Even I dont agree with some of the rules, I will obey them. I think my parents wont do anything that is bad for me.,结构:,总-分-总,Beginning(引出话题):,There are a lot of rules that I have to follow in my home. Let me tell you some of them.,Body(talk about
6、some of the rules):,First ,I am not allowed to spend too much time watching TV or surfing the Internet on school day, and I must go to bed before 10:00, because I have to do homework and get up early the next morning. Then I have to clean my room every morning. My parents think it is a very good hab
7、it to do so. But I dont agree with them, because my room is not always dirty. Besides, I am also not allowed to wear the clothes what I want, it makes me unhappy. Whats more, Im an outgoing girl, but my parents dont allow me to make friends with people I know. I know they both care much about me. Ho
8、wever ,I am allowed to make my own decision.,Ending(feelings):,You feeling,Even I dont agree with some of the rules, I will obey them. I think my parents wont do anything that is bad for me.,1. There are a lot of rules that I have to follow in my home. Let me tell you some of them.,高分句型:,3. Besides, I am also not allowed to wear the clothes what I want.,4.I think my parents wont do anything that is bad for me.,2. I am not allowed to spend too much time watching TV or surfing the Internet on school days.,Thank You,