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1、Writing,中考作文指导,Learning aims:,学会作文审题，根据所给要点构建文章结构。,2. 能够根据要求列出关键词，学会连词成句。,3. 通过添加主题句、适当的连接成分等学会组句成篇。,中考英语写作评分标准,一档文（17-20分）,写出全部内容要点，层次清楚， 语言流畅，有句式变化， 有复杂结构，至少2-3个， 基本无语法错误，只有1-2个， 或有少量由于使用复杂结构 而引起的语法或拼写错误， 但不影响意义理解。,How can we write a good composition(作文)?,第一步：都要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点,How can we write
2、 a good composition? (Have a discussion!),具体做法：用笔勾画,假如你是王林。你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(Helping Hands Club)”将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封自荐信。,1.,要求：1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等； 3. 表格中“加入目的”一栏内容由考生自拟； 4. 词数：70左右。,第二步： 列出写作提纲（Outline）。,具体做法： 根据段落整理写作要点,不要遗漏要点！,Write an Outline,Introduc
3、tion,Main body,Conclusion,I want to join,本人特点,“爱心”表现,加入目的,看表格,看表格,看图,自拟,I hope you will agree with me.,可以用英文或中文,姓名/性别,易漏掉的要点！,自荐信,What will you write？,王林,Who are you in this letter?,人称: I,Whats your purpose ?,加入该俱乐部,时态：一般现在时为主,Thinking:,Dear Chairperson, I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. Id li
4、ke to join the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates. If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. And I can also do more for others.,扣分原因一 词数不够！,Dear Chairperson, I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. Id li
5、ke to join the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates. If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. And I can also do more for others.,Introduction,本人特点,加入目的,扣分原因二 遗漏要点！,Write an Outline,Introduction,Main body,
6、Conclusion,I am a boy,Id like to join,本人特点,“爱心”表现,加入目的,I hope you will agree with me.,无法拿满分！,Dear Chairperson, I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. Id like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates If
7、 I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others. Yours Wang Lin,少了两个重要部分，扣5-6分，只得9-10分！,缺少“爱心”表现,也缺少Conclusion,“爱心”表现(examples),Picture 1,helpwith,help classmates with lessons,我的,I often help classmates with lessons.,看图,Picture 2,helpcross,“爱心”表现(examples),看图
8、,help old people cross the road,I help old people cross the road on my way home.,Picture 3,“爱心”表现(examples),看图,give my seat to,give my seat to people in need,I often give my seat to people in need on a bus.,“爱心”表现(examples),看图,Picture 4,clean up the park,help clean up the park,I often help clean up
9、the park.,“爱心”表现(examples),1. I often help classmates with lessons.,2. I help old people cross the road on my way home.,3. I often give my seat to people in need on a bus.,4. I often help clean up the park.,Conclusion,Ill be glad if I can join the club. I hope you will agree with me.,Dear Chairperso
10、n, I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. Id like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others I get on well with my classmates .If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others. Yours Wang Lin,Ill
11、 be glad if I can join the club. I hope you will agree with me.,and often help classmates with their lessons. On my way home, I often help old people cross the road. On a bus, I always give my seat to people in need. Sometimes, I help to clean up the park.,不但要点完整了，词数也够了。,写作： 第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要
12、点 第二步就是要列出写作提纲，根据段落整理写作要点。,写作前：,确定人称、时态,写作后：,？,Dear Chairperson, I am a boy student from class1 Grade 9. Id like be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hardly at my lessons. I like helping others. and often help classmates with their lesson . On my way home, I often help old peo
13、ple cross the road. On a bus, I always gave my seat to people in need. Sometimes, I help to clean up the park. If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, he can do more for others. Ill glad if I can join the club. I hope you will agree with me. Yours Wang Lin,C,to,lessons,give
14、,I,be,1分,其它六处错扣2分,只得12分,作文中应避免的几种常见语言错误： 时态错误（扣分多，一个时态错误扣分在1分左右）。 中国式的英语（不正确的英文表达会让整句不得分）。 单词拼写错误及大小写（单词拼写一定要过关）。 介词, 代词，非谓语动词或形容词副词的不正确使用（对单词的词性要熟悉）。 名词单复数（细心就可以避免的错）。,写作： 第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点 第二步就是要列出写作提纲，根据段落整理写作要点。,写作前：,确定人称、时态,写作后：,检查,另外作文中书写不规范，卷面不整洁也是要失分的（中考中有12分的卷面整洁分，这两分不能丢！）。,解决方法：平时认
15、真规范书写，少用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。,Lets practice!,你将代表学校参加扬州市中学生英语演讲比赛，演讲的题目是Learning to get along with our parents. 请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容要点如下。 要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右（演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数） 4）不得使用真实姓名和校名等。,Lets enjoy our own compositions!,Sample writing,Good morning , ladies and gentl
16、emen. Today my topic is learning to get along with our parents . These days , most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents .We easily get angry for no reason and even dont talk to them for days. I think the causes are as follows .First , our parents only care about our marks and it makes us stressed . Second , we are unwilling to communicate with them . Its time for us to change. First，we can commu
