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1、,writing a picture story,假定你是TOM,请根据下面的图画内容写一篇日记.,1. Style : 2. Tense( generally): 3. Person:,1. Go over the requirement,A diary,past tense,I,Tuesday December 6 ,2005 Fine I had a very bad day yesterday. Everything go wrong. In the morning, my alarm clock didnt ring so I woke up an hour late. I am i
2、n such a hurry that I burned my hand when I was cooking breakfast.,Correct any mistakes,went,was,Then I run out of the house to catch the 8:30 bus, but of course I miss it. I was very unhappy because I know my teacher got angry if anyone was late for class. So I ran three miles to the school. But wh
3、en I arrived there in the end, I find that it was Sunday,Correct any mistakes,ran,knew,found,missed,根据下列图画中 Tom 骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇故事。 短文要写得连贯、完整。,Sample 1,1. topic : 2. Tense( generally): 3. Person:,1. Go over the requirement,A story （a traffic accident),past tense,Tom , he,Tom /ride a bike Along the st
4、reet/road A few days ago/ the other day/ one day,2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how),A car / run fast to/run into him Tom/ fall off his bike Suddenly,2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how),The driver/ frightened/ run away,2. Go over the pictures （who, what,
5、 where, when, why, how),A woman/ remember the number of the car The police The driver/ catch,2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how),Key words,sentences,A woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car. She called the police. The driver was caught.,ride a bike /run fa
6、st to,see the accident /remember the number /call the police /be caught,be frightened /run away,hit him /fall off his bike,When Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him.,The car hit him. And he fell off his bike.,The driver was so frightened that he ran away.,Tom was riding along the s
7、treet. A car ran fast to him. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver was frightened. He ran away. A woman saw the accident. She remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman. The driver was caught.,Passage 1,3. Writing a passage,The other day, Tom was riding along the stre
8、et when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to
9、see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.,passage 2,The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was to
10、o late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told
11、him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.,Passage 2,Using connectives,并列 转折 3. 因果 4. 其他,and, bothand,but, however, though, while,so, therefore, because,when, suddenly, immediately, as soon as , unfortunately, sothat , finally, as a result, What was worse
12、,Go over the requirement（person, tense, style）,Summary : How to write a picture story?,Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how),Write a passage （using connectives and adding details and specific information. ),基本篇章结构 点题（时间、地点、人物、事件） 事件的起因 事件的发展/过程 事件的结果 扣题,下面4幅图片描述的是星期天上午在中山公园里发生的一件事。请
13、根据图片所提供的信息用英语为你校的“英语园地”写一篇短文。 注意：短文须包括所有图片的主要内容。短文的内容要连贯、完整； 短文单词数：100左右（已给句子中的单词不计入总词数）； 参考词汇：货摊stand (n.) ; 抢夺 snatch (v.) ; 逮捕 arrest (v.),1点题（时间、地点） 星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊旁 2事件的起因 年轻妇女的包被抢 3事件的发展/过程 人们追赶抢包者 ；长排椅上坐着一位老人；抢包者从老人身旁跑过，老人用伞将他绊倒 4事件的结果 两名警察逮捕抢劫者： 5扣题 妇女感谢老人，人们称赞老人的机智,审题,描述过去个人经历,第三人称,一般过去时,星
14、期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊 One Sunday morning,；in Zhongshan Park.；At an ice-cream stand 年轻妇女的包被抢 snatch her handbag away 人们追赶抢包者 run after the snatcher 在附近长排椅上坐着一位老人 There be sb. sitting on the bench nearby,提纲,从老人身旁跑过 Run past the old man 拿起伞；将伞放在他两腿之间； pick up his umbrella ; put it between the two legs of the
15、 snatcher; 摔一大跟斗 fall down on the ground heavily,两名警察来到并逮捕抢劫者 Came in a police car; arrest sb. 感谢老人的帮助 Thank sb. for his help 称赞老人的机智 Praise the old man for his cleverness,1、几天前 the other day; several days ago 2、使人感到意外 to ones surprise 3、就在这时 at that moment; at that time,常用关联词, 副词：suddenly, unfortun
16、ately, luckily, immediately as a result so/suchthat two hours later, and,1. It was (天气) 2.While sb. was doing / sb. was about to do when 3. sb. did and 4.see /hear sb. Doing 5. with the help of sb.,一些可能用到的句型和词组,One Sunday morning, many people went to Zhongshan Park. As it was very hot, some people got thirsty and were trying to buy some ice-cream. Suddenly a woman at the stand sho
