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1、基础写作,Basic Writing 从遣词，造句，谋篇方面分析,一.遣词方面 1.措辞要贴切具体 A man is the street.(走) A man is the street. A man is in the street. A man is the street.,(漫步,闲逛),(徘徊,漫游),(大步走),walking down,strolling down,wandering,striding down,2.使用高级词汇 This is a difficult job. He learned about everything at last. I should thank
2、you for taking so much trouble to help me.,(eventually),(challenging),(grateful),他以为偶像。 He He He He He .,3.避免重复使用词汇,his idols.,regardsas,chooses as,takesas,looks uponas,viewsas,4.要善于运用短语 When he was a child, he wanted to learn everything . -When he was a child, he knowledge. Hacker attackers are inc
3、reasing. -Hacker attackers are . Your work is so good that it cannot be praised enough. -Your work is all praise.,had a strong,appetite for/ was thirsty for,on the increase/rise,beyond,句式多样 文章增“靓”,一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,二. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力,三. 尝试多样化表达方式,二、造句方面：句式要准确而多变.,第一类是复合句，包括含有名词性从句的复合句，含有定语从句的复合句，含有状语从句的
4、复合句。 第二类是并列句，包括具有递进关系的并列句， 如由and，then，besides，in addition, furthermore，moreover, whats more等连接的并列句，具有转折关系的并列句，如由but，however on the contrary, after all等连接的并列句，具有平行选择关系的并列句，如由bothand，as well as，as well, neithernor，eitheror，not onlybut also等连接的并列句。 第三类是一些特殊句型，如使用强调句、倒装句、含有with复合结构的句子、there be开头的句子、以形式主
5、语it开头的句子等。,1,如何在写作中避免句式单一,Rewrite the sentences,1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard.,方法一. 使用非谓语动词及复合句使句子简洁高档,When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphe
6、re.,Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.,If I am given another chance, I will succeed.,Given another chance, I will succeed.,In order to improve his English, he studies hard.,方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,he returned home did he realize his foolishness.,by changing the way we live can we sa
7、ve the earth.,Clever he is, he does not work hard.,stands the clock tower.,Use different ways to describe the picture,方法三. 尝试多样化表达方式,一就受到欢迎,As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed . On arriving at the airport , Lien Chan and his wife Lien Chan and his wife
8、 were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport. No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were ,三、谋篇方面:结构要清晰流畅,巧用过渡词 下列各组表示列举的短语非常实用,对高考写作很有帮助: 1.firstly,secondly,thirdly,final
9、ly, 2.to begin with,then,furthermore,finally,. 3.to start with,next,in addition,finally, 4.first and foremost,besides,last but not least 5.most important of all,moreover,finally 如果只有两层意思,可选用下列两组中的任一组. 1.On the one hand,on the other hand 2.For one thing,and for another thing,常用的过渡表达法: 1.表增加:and ,also
10、, in addition, furthermore, moreover 2.表时间顺序:now, then, before, after, soon, gradually 3.表空间顺序:near, beyond, above, around, outside 4.表示比较:in the same way, just like, just as 5.表示对照:but, still, yet, however, on the contrary 6.表原因和结果:because, since, so, as a result, therefore 7.表目的:for this reason, f
11、or this purpose, so that 8.表强调:indeed, surely, without any doubt, truly 9.表解释说明:for ,for example, in fact, actually 10.表总结:in conclusion, in brief, in a word,写作 请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。 情景说明 根据提示写出你对环境污染的看法。 1.汽车的不断增加，排放大量废气。 2.森林减少，气候变得干燥。 3河流被污染，城市供水不足。 写作要求 1.标题：Environmental Pollution
12、2.必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容 3.将5个句子组织成连贯的短文 评分标准 句子结构的复杂度和准确性 短文内容的完整性和连贯性,Though the development of industry and agriculture has improved our living conditions, it is doing great harm to our life. Now more and more cars and trucks give off waste gases, which are polluting the air. Moreover , more and more trees are cut down, which makes the climate drier. Polluted rivers lead to a lack of water in cities. Now it is time for us to do something to protect our living environment, for we have only one earth.,
