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1、Continuation Writing,The cost of a smile,Reflection,1.Have you got a high score in this writing? 2.What problems do you have? Or Why do you fail to get a good result?,Do you think such kind of ending acceptable?,1.Charlie moved to another city with his son or daughter.,2.Charlie was the boss of a bi
2、g company, so he asked Kathy to work with him in his company.,3.To win Kathys smile,Charlie gave lots of tips to Kathy.Then they were in love with each other. But Charlie was seriously ill.,the funeral,Make sure the story develops logically and reasonably.,When doing continuation writing, what shoul
3、d we pay attention to?,the given passage:,How many words should we write? How many given underlined words should be used? How many paragraphs should we write?,the continuation writing part:,In general, how many words are there?,1.续写材料是一段350词以内的材料（一般为记叙文）。 2.所续写短文的词数应为150左右。词数少于130词,从总分中减去2分; 3.应使用5个
4、以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。 4.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 5.续写完成后，请用下划线标出所使用的关键词语。,注意事项,One day he didnt come to the restaurant . She called his home , only to hear an answering machine . With nervousness wrapped into anxiety , Kathy went to his house and found out from his neighbor that he had died the previous nig
5、ht . On hearing the bad news she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldnt help crying bitterly. Because Charlie had no family or close friends , Kathy put herself in charge of his funeral arrangements . She and the neighbor were the only people to attend.,范文欣赏：,Use vivid detailed description to
6、 show characters.,Several days after the funeral , Kathy received a very important - looking letter in the mail . It was sent to her from Charlies lawyer . Enclosed was a check for almost $600 , 000 ! Kathy nearly fainted（晕倒） , but then she noticed a handwritten note which read ， “ Dear Kathy , by t
7、he time you read this , I will be gone . Here I have left for my best friend a small token（表示） of my gratitude I can never repay you for what youve given me , for you see , Kathy , a smile is worth much more than $20 . Indeed , a smile is priceless.,Convey positive message.,A smile costs nothing, bu
8、t it is worth everything.,message (positive),development (logical/reasonable),language (vivid),Children of Heaven,Continuation Writing,电影：天堂的孩子,Read for information,What is the type of writing? A. narrative (记叙文） B. exposition （说明文 ) C. argumentation (议论文）,How many characters are there in the passag
9、e? Who are the main characters ?,Many. The main characters are Ali and his younger sister, Zahra.,Character,Background information,1.Where did Ali and his family live?,2.How was the family condition?How,Ali and his younger sister, Zahra, lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood.,Their mother
10、was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job, and they had only a little money with which to buy food. As they had not paid the rent for several months, the landlord was breathing down their necks.,Ali and Zahra lived in a _ neighborhood with their parents.The family _ to make ends me
11、et.,poor,struggled,对某人盯得特别紧,Ali lost Zahras shoes.,The main story,Ali and Zahra kept it secret by -.,One day,The day of race,A piece of news,A long distance race would be held.,The third prize was a pair of new shoes.,.,Start,Halfway,Near the finish line,He had a strong start.,He got exhausted but p
12、ersisted.,He crashed to the ground.,It seemed that -.,Para.1,Para.2,Para.3,Para.4,Read for structure,_ information,_ of the story,_ of the story,_ of the story,The family struggled to make ends meet.,Ali lost Zahras shoes and shared his shoes with Zahra to go to school.,Ali decided to take part in a
13、 long distance race to win a new pair of shoes for Zahra.,Ali was knocked down and it seemed unlikely for him to finish third.,Background,Beginning,Development,Climax (高潮),Paragraph 1: Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.,Paragrap 2: Filled with delight, Ali walked home quickly.,Conti
14、nuation Writing,Ali,Zahra,shoes,race,prize,excitedly, promise,runners,third,collided.,Did Ali win the prize?,Yes? Or No?,possibilities,He won the third prize.,He was awarded for his bravery.,The runner who collided him gave the shoes to Ali.,He didnt finish the race.,He finished first.,-,Did Ali win
15、 the prize?,Whatever the result was, Ali eventually went home with a pair of new shoes for Zahra.,Paragraph 1: Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.,Paragrap 2: Filled with delight, Ali walked home quickly.,Continuation Writing,What would you write?,Describe the action and feeling afte
16、r the crash.,Action,What would you write?,Describe the joy when Ali brought shoes back home. Describe Zahras reaction to Ali.,Feelings,站起来 往前冲 咬紧牙关 挥汗如雨 -,nervous happy excited moved grateful -,Ali,Zahra,shoes,race,prize,excitedly, promise,runners,third,collided.,Describe Alis action after the crash.,struggle to his feet; grit his teeth; run as fast as his legs could carry him; gather all his strength; dr
