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1、How to Enrich your Writing by Adding Details,2015年全国1卷 假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下： 1. 栏目介绍； 2. 稿件内容； 3. 稿件长度：约 400 词汇； 4. 交稿日期：6 月 28 日前。 2016年全国1卷 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）. 2017年全国1卷 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你
2、写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括： （1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗； （3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。,2018年全国I卷 假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家里做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1、到达时间 2、合适的礼物 3、餐桌礼仪注意: 1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,分析,1.在高考全国卷英语高考书面表达中，应用文的命题形式主要以提纲式材料来呈现。所提供信息趋向于简单化，要点化，多呈现半开放式命题特点。 2.这既是机遇（发挥空间更大）。 3.这又是挑战（字数不够，拿什么来凑？）？,注意：可根据内容要点适当增
3、加细节，以使行文连贯。,如何“短话长说”？,I am writing to offer you some suggestions.,Sample One,1. I am writing to offer you some suggestions on how to spend your summer vacation meaningfully.,2. Knowing it will be a long summer vacation before you are admitted into your dream universities, I am writing to offer you s
4、ome suggestions on how to spend your summer vacation meaningfully.,1.给今年即将毕业的全体高三学生写封信，信中建议他们在高考（the College Entrance Examination）结束后的暑假中能够安排一些有意义的事去做。,给,建议,(15),(18),(22),Look forward to your reply.,Sample One,I will appreciate it very much if my application can be taken into consideration and look
5、 forward to your reply.,2.听说某中外合作办学大学招收广东高中毕业 生，有意申请到该校英语系学习，用英语写一封自荐信。,tip： 交际性拓展，主要集中在信件开头与结尾，可通过背景介绍，感谢期待等内容的添加，让书信交际功能更生动而又有人情味。,1. Knowing it will be a long summer vacation before you are admitted into your dream universities, I am writing to offer you some suggestions on how to spend your summ
6、er vacation meaningfully. 2. I will appreciate it very much if my application can be taken into consideration and look forward to your reply.,Practice ：,Improve it! _ _,Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to take part in a traditional Chinese pa
7、inting exhibition.,In China, the winter vacation falls during the Chinese New Year, so most students take part in different Spring Festival activities.,Sample Two,In China, the winter vacation falls during the Chinese New Year, so most students take part in different Spring Festival activities, such
8、 as visiting family, eating lots of food, and most importantly, getting lucky money.,1.中英寒假生活调查，向英国朋友介绍中国学生的寒假生活。,In China, the Chinese knot is a symbol of friendship.,Sample Two,In China, the Chinese knot is a symbol of friendship, reunion and good luck.,2.你准备了中国结作为礼物送给外国网友，感谢他的帮助。,细节拓展可通过两方面进行: 1.
9、下义延伸，即通过适当添加例子，将写作内容具体化。（such as, for example, like） 2.平行补充：挖掘写作对象的不同方面。,1. In China, the winter vacation falls during the Chinese New Year, so most students take part in different Spring Festival activities, such as visiting family, eating lots of food, and most importantly, getting lucky money. 2.
10、 In China, the Chinese knot is a symbol of friendship, reunion and good luck.,Practice ：,Improve it! _ _,Improve it! _ _,Traveling in China, you can learn a lot about Chinese traditional culture, such as traditional food, clothes, painting, local customs and so on.,You can take some pictures about n
11、atural scenery, famous places of interest Or historical sites, local customs of China and so on.,Sample Three,1.邀请他来中国体验文化。 2. 所有老师全部为外教。 3. 暑假建议你去学车。,Look at the sentences below:,I would like to invite you to come to China this summer.,All the teachers are native English speakers.,You can learn to
12、drive in order to get a driving license.,Why not pay a visit to China, so that you can have a taste of Chinese culture in person?,All the teachers are native English speakers, making you exposed to fluent language environment.,You can learn to drive in order to get a driving license, which will enab
13、le you to drive in your daily routine.,so that,making,which,表结果,4. 向外国朋友介绍中国传统绘画，推荐同学李雷为导游。 5. 学校茶文化活动通知。 6. 李华，考试不要紧张。,Id like to recommend my classmate Li Lei to be your guide.,A Tea Culture Festival is going to be held in our school next week.,Li Hua, dont be nervous while taking exams.,As I know
14、, you want someone who has a broad knowledge of traditional Chinese painting. So Id like to recommend Li Lei to be your guide.,In order to enrich our students knowledge of tea, a Tea Culture Festival is going to be held in our school next week.,Li Hua, dont be nervous while taking exams, because it will prevent you from concentrating your attention on the test paper.,Look at the sentences below:,Sample Three,表原因,Practice ：,_ _,_ _,_
