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1、PART THREE,第三篇 写作妙解篇,类型(三) 留言条,典例分析,假如你是李华,你要和父母去度假,你给朋友Jim写一个留言条,请求他帮助照顾一下你的家。告诉他你什么时候离开,要去哪里,你想让他帮你做些什么以及回来的时间。,提示词语 tomorrow, look after, walk the dog, clean 提示问题 When and where will you go? What will Jim do? When will you come back?,Dear Jim, _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Li Hua,【写作架构】,【思路点拨】 1.要点提炼:本文是一篇应用文,类型
2、是留言条。根据题目要求,可以提炼出3个要点: (1)说明离开的时间 (2)说明你需要他帮你做的事情 (3)说明什么时间回来 2.时态:一般将来时 3.人称:第一人称和第二人称,【基础写作】 .根据所给提示词补全下列各句 1.我和我的父母下周三要去度假。(go on vacation) next Wednesday. 2.你能帮我照看一下我的房子吗?(Could you please) _ 3.请帮我给花儿浇水。(help sb do) Please .,My parents and I are going on vacation,Could you please help me look af
3、ter my house?,help me water the flowers,4.当我外出的时候请帮我喂狗、遛狗。(when) _ 5.别忘了喂猫并陪它玩儿。(Dont forget to) _,Please help me feed and walk the dog when I am out.,Dont forget to feed the cat and play with it.,.句子升格 按括号中的要求改写句子。 6.Would you please help me look after my house? Im on vacation.(用while 连接两个句子) _ 7.I
4、t is my habit.I take a walk after supper.(合并为一句话) _ 8.Remember to give my dog some food and water.(用Please改写句子) _,While Im on vacation, would you please help me look after my house?,It is my habit to take a walk after supper.,Please remember to give my dog some food and water.,9.You need to water my
5、 flowers and feed the dog.(用bothand连接两个句子) _ 10.My parents will be back next Friday.(用notuntil改写句子) _,You need to both water my flowers and feed the dog.,My parents wont be back until next Friday.,【连句成文】 Dear Jim, My parents and I are going on vacation tomorrow.We will go to Shanghai.Could you pleas
6、e help me look after my house? Please clean the house and water the flowers.Oh, I have a dog.Will you please feed my dog? And dont forget to give him some water and take him for a walk.Well be back next week.Thanks. Li Hua,拓展积累,【说明外出的表达】 1.My parents and I decide to go to Hainan next weekend. 2.I pl
7、an to visit my grandparents with my parents next Friday. 3.My parents and I make a decision to leave for Shanghai this Saturday.,【要求对方做事情】 1.I would be happy if you can look after my house. 2.I will be thankful if you can help me water my flowers. 3.I hope you can give my dog some water and food. 4.
8、Dont forget to take my dog for a walk.,【说明返回时间并表示感谢】 1.We make a plan to be back next week.Thanks. 2.We wont be back until next Saturday.Im really thankful to you for your help. 3.We plan to come back next Monday.Thank you for helping me look after my house.,实战演练,假定你是李华,你正在英国接受英语培训,住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东M
9、rs.Wilson不在家,你准备外出,请给Mrs. Wilson写一个留言条。,内容 1.外出购物; 2.替房东还书; 3.Tracy来电留言: (1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消; (2)此事已告知Susan; (3)尽快回电。 注意 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,One possible version: Mrs.Wilson, Im going out shopping, and wont be back until about 5:00 pm.I have taken with me the two books you asked me t
10、o return to the City Library.At about 1 oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to do.She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting.She wanted you to call her back as soon as possible.She has already told Susan about this change. Li Hua,
