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1、中考英语作文写作,By Lu Sulin SheHong Middle School,初中英语新课程标准,五级写作目标： 能根据写作要求，收集，准备素材 能独立起草短文，短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改 能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系 能简单描述人物或事件 能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明,7-9年级分别完成三、四、五级目标,中考英语作文8个常考话题,一、介绍人和事件 （自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等） 二、介绍地点（旅游等） 三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等） 四、课外生活（家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等） 五、假期安排（计划、过去经历等） 六、
2、节假日活动（志愿者活动、过去经历） 七、环境、健康（环保、疾病、食品健康等） 八、个人观点建议（提建议、劝告等）,Dear Dr. Know， I m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us arent interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then its so difficult for
3、us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more, there are so many new words we havent meet before in the passage. I dont know what to do. Sometimes we cant understand the
4、 main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon.,Mary,(the beginning),(the ending),
5、the body（正文）,basic structure(基本结构安排),basic steps(基本写作步骤),search（审） list（列） add(加: 开头和结尾) connect(连) beautify(美：谚语/例子),健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,审(search),travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,如何度假
6、 调查报告 倡议假日休闲,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,列(list),根据以下关键词及图表用 简单的句子列出文章的要点。,A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.,列(list),How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here
7、 is our report. （the beginning） A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）,加(add),加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂
8、亮。,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People
9、 who relax well work well.,连(connect),Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,方法一:善用词汇 甚至善用高级词汇,Which is better?,他们在海滩上听音乐。,A They listened to the music on the beach. B They enjoyed the music on the beach.,Which is better?,我希望你能帮助我。,A I wish you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help.,Which is better?,他们很早就到
10、了。,A They arrived early. B They arrived as early as they could.,Which is better?,最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。,A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.,A I think learning English is interesting. B I find it really fun to learn English .,我认为学英语很有趣。,我们应该保护环
11、境。,A We should protect the environment. B Its our duty to protect the environment.,方法二:活用多种句型,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。,A She is very young. She cant carry the heavy box. B She is too young to carry the heavy box. C She is so young that she cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry
12、 the,方法三:妙用关联词,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, whats more not onlybut also, neithernor 2.表示选择: or, eitheror 3.表示转折: but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, notbut, while, in the
13、same way, on the one handon the other hand 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually,
14、in fact 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short,关联词(connection words),Lets try,_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got ou
15、t. _, he went back. _, he smiled.,ThoughAlthough,instead,like,First,Next,FinallyAt last,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit
16、 friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,连(connect),美(beautify),We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watchi
