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1、贵州遵义县2016高考英语书面表达二轮品析（2）书面表达训练一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文。1.家庭; 2.工作; 3.业余生活 注意：1、字数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、开头语已为你写好，但不计入总词数。I often imaginewhatmy lifewillbelikeinthefuture._【参考范文】I often imaginewhatmy lifewillbelikeinthefuture.Ithinkmylifewillbeverydifferentintenyears.Iwillbetwenty-e
2、ightyearsoldbythen.Iwillhavemyownfamily,probablywith a lovely child .IhopeI willworkinacomputercompanyas aprogramdesigner.Iwillenjoymyworkandgetalongwellwithmycolleagues;IwilldoagoodjobinwhateverIdo.Inmyfreetime,Iwillcontinuetotakeregularexercise,suchasswimming,runningandvarious ballgames.Onmyholida
3、ys,Iwilltravelaroundtheworld.Inaword,mylifewillbemuchricherandmorecolorful.书面表达训练暑假国外旅行时同团的一个小女孩于上午10点左右在机场咖啡厅附近走失，请你替她焦急的父母写一份广播稿通知找人，要点如下：女孩名叫玲玲，4岁，身高110cm左右，长发大眼，身穿红裙白鞋。如发现任何线索请将小孩送到机场广播站或拨打电话677-852-4523。对提供帮助的人表示感谢。注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已为你写好。【参考范文】AnnouncementLadies and Ge
4、ntlemen, Attention, please! Here is something urgent!A four-year-old Chinese girl named Lingling is missing. She is about 110cm tall with long straight black hair as well as a pair of big eyes. She is wearing a red dress and white shoes. She was last seen at ten oclock nearby the cafe at the airport
5、. Linglings parents are very anxious as she can only speak Chinese Putonghua. If any of you see her or get any clue about her, please take her to the broadcasting station of the airport or call at 677-852-4523. Wed show our sincere gratitude to anyone who offers related information or who helps find
6、 the girl. Thanks for your attention!2016书面表达选练假设你是新华中学的高三学生李华，你校打算邀请阿里巴巴首席执行官马云来学校做一次毕业典礼演讲，请你给马首席写一封邀请信。内容包括：1.说明写信的目的；2.说明演讲的具体安排-时间：5月30日；地点：学校操场; 主题：怎样通过个人奋斗实现人生理想；3.表达感谢与祝福。注意：1.词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.参考词汇：毕业典礼演讲 commencement speechDear Mayun, CEO of Ali Baba, My name is L
7、i Hua. Im a Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School.【参考范文】Dear Mayun, CEO of Ali Baba, My name is Li Hua. Im a Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School. I am writing to ask you a favor. Would you please come to our school and give us a commencement speech? The speech is scheduled to be given on
8、 May 30th on the school playground ,the theme of which will be how to realize our dreams through personal efforts. We are eager to hear you talk about your own experiences and unique views. I sincerely hope you can take time out of your busy schedule, and I would appreciate it very much if you could
9、 come. Thank you in advance and wish you all the best! I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Sincerely yours, Li Hua2016书面表达选练某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中任何一个数据中反映的情况写出你的一个看法。词数100词左右。生词：图表：chart课余活动：after-class activities【参考范文】 【广东省揭阳市2014模拟】读写任务 (
10、共1小题，满分25分)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。One day, while she was walking in the woods, a girl found two starving songbirds. She took them home and put them in a small cage. She cared them with love and the birds grew strong. Every morning they greeted her with a wonderful song. The girl felt great lov
11、e for the birds.One day the girl left the door to the cage open. The larger and stronger of the two birds flew from the cage. The girl was so frightened that he would fly away. As he flew close, she grasped him wildly. Her heart felt glad at her success in capturing him. Suddenly she felt the bird g
12、o limp. She opened her hand and stared in horror at the dead bird. Her desperate love had killed him.She noticed the other bird moving back and forth on the edge of the cage. She could feel his great need for freedom. He needed to soar into the clear, blue sky. She lifted him from the cage and tosse
13、d him softly into the air. The bird circled once, twice, three times.The girl watched delightedly at the birds enjoyment. Her heart was no longer concerned with her loss. She wanted the bird to be happy. Suddenly the bird flew closer and landed softly on her shoulder. It sang the sweetest melody tha
14、t she had ever heard.She finally realized that the fastest way to lose love is to hold on it too tight, the best way to keep love is to give it WINGS!写作内容1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点；2. 然后以约120个词就 “爱就要放手” 这一主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：a) 以自己为例，简述生活中你父母对你的过度关注；b) 你父母的做法对你造成了什么不良的影响；c) 如果有机会，你会就此问题对父母说些什么写作要求1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的
15、故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考答案】 【解析】试题分析：本文属于读写任务写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，再以约120个词写一篇短文，按照要点去表达，不能有遗漏，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。【亮点说明】文章简洁的总结了所给材料，语言规范，内
