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1、,分类写作,十七、倡议,hold the wrong idea 持有错误的观点 donate blood 献血 do harm to 对有害 a small amount of 少量的 make a quick adjustment 做出快速调整 patient 病人 survive 活下来；生存 have a better understanding of 有更好的理解 medical knowledge 医学知识 set a good example for sb. 为某人树立好榜样 hold a series of activities 举办一系列的活动 call on sb. to d
2、o sth. 号召某人做某事 give away 捐献；捐赠 lower grade 低年级,【必备词语】,be intended to 为准备的 promote friendship 促进友谊 encourage economy 鼓励节约 be highly praised by sb. 被某人高度赞扬 be strongly for 强烈赞成 break traffic rules 违反交通规则 littering 乱扔垃圾 keep sth. in mind 记住某事 keep to the right 靠右 run the red light 闯红灯 the pedestrian cr
3、ossing 人行路口 spitting 随地吐痰 behavior 行为；表现 make a difference 起作用；产生不同,【必备词语】,1. Therefore, lets take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. 因此，让我们负起责任来通过骑自行车建设一个低碳城市。 2. Some people hold the wrong idea that . 有人持有错误的观点： 3. We students of Senior Three are called on to give
4、 away our used books. 我们高三学生被号召来捐赠旧书。 4. I am strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful. 我强烈赞同这个活动，因为它很有意义，很有帮助。,【好句朗诵】,5. I hope my behavior will make a difference. 我希望我的行为可以起到作用。 6. As high school students, its our duty to tell everyone around us to save water. 作为高中生，告诉身边
5、的每一个人节约用水是我们的责任。 7. Lets start right now and spare no effort to do a little every day, every hour and every minute. 让我们从现在开始每天努力一点点，抓紧每一天、每一小时、每一分钟。,【好句朗诵】,1. Our government is aiming to build an “harmonious society”.,1. an改为a,2. I think it is every citizens duty to work hardly to achieve this goal.
6、,2. hardly改为hard,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,3. Firstly, we should love our great motherland, our society or our school.,3. or改为and,4. Secondly, we should be respect and love our parents.,4. 删掉be,5. We should trust our fellow students and help every other.,5. every改为each,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,6. Lei Feng set a good e
7、xample for us to learn from him.,6. 删掉him,7. To build our country into a powerful socialist country, “Lei Feng Spirit” still necessary.,7. still前面加is,8. Because he was only a soldier, he managed to save a considerable amount of money and gave it away to poor people.,8. Because改为Although/Though/While
8、,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,9. Whatever he was asked to do and no matter how difficult the task was, he always tries his best.,9. tries改为tried,10. Lei Feng died over 30 years before.,10. before改为ago,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,【2011江西卷改编：骑自行车倡议】 假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Lets Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括： 1目前汽车带来的空气污染和交
9、通堵塞等问题； 2骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。 参考词汇： 低碳生活 low-carbon life； 节能 energy saving,【真题满分佳作赏析】,满分佳作（一） Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles”. As is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a pop
10、ular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve the problems then? As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles dont need any petrol and they
11、are energy-saving. Therefore, they are environmentally friendly because they wont give off waste gas. For another, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise, which is beneficial to our health. Therefore, lets take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on an
12、d join us! Thank you!,满分赏析 As is known to all(众所周知)和with the improvement of peoples living standards(随着人们生活水平的改善)这两个表达用来引出现象，显示了语言实力；且有means作“方式”意思，是高级词汇；bringing现在分词作伴随状语；整句话显得有档次。 用As far as Im concerned(依我之见)引出自己的观点，这是必备的表达观点的套语。 两个观点用到了for one thing, for another来连接，使篇章连贯；且energy-saving, environm
13、entally friendly, give off waste gas等描述环保的相关词汇体现了作者深厚的语言功底。 本句运用到了which引导的定语从句，which指代前面整句话的事情。 最后两句是加强呼吁，lets take the responsibility to和Come on and join us!十分值得学习模仿。,满分佳作（二） Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles”. As our liv
14、ing standards have improved, cars have increasingly become available to ordinary families. But too many cars on the road may cause many problems. For one thing, waste gas coming from cars has been a big threat to the environment. Whats more, while cars have brought convenience to us, they may also c
15、ause traffic jams. In this case, more and more people have begun to take up bicycles as an alternative way to get around. On one hand, as an energy-saving means of transportation, they dont cause any pollution to the environment. Besides, riding bicycles is a good form of exercise and can contribute
16、 to what we call low-carbon life. Therefore, lets ride bicycles, for the benefit of the environment as well as our own health. Thank you!,满分赏析 As our living standards have improved用于引出一种现象，这一说法在中英文中一样常用；available属于中高难度的词汇，体现出水平。 本句的while是“尽管”的意思，引出让步状语从句。 an alternative way(另外一种可选择的方式)，alternative是较难词汇，能给评卷老师好印象。 最后一句加强呼吁，简单的一句lets ride bicycles就能起到这个作用。,【模拟真题：提倡无偿献血】 作文原题 假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华，针对目前一些地方血库纷纷告急的情况，请参照以下提示，用英文写一份倡议书，提倡无偿献血（donate blood for
