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1、Dynamic writing,1. Common mistakes,缺胳膊少腿类 少主语 Though was asked several times, he remained silent. 少谓语 However, other students against the idea. 少宾语 He seated on the grass, reading. 少介词 Besides, Im easy to get along, and enjoy working with others.,画蛇添足类 语义重复 He returned back the book yesterday. 谓语重复
2、But there are about 60 percent of the students support the idea. 宾语多余/重复 He dressed his clothes quickly and went out. 介词多余 We must study hard to serve for the people better in the future.,张冠李戴类 误用主语 Dont worry. Your body will get well soon. 误用谓语 Time past quickly before we realized it. 误用宾语 I was ve
3、ry pleased to hear from your letter . 误用表语 The price of the house is very expensive. 误用定语 China has more population than Japan. 误用介词 The robbers ran away toward the direction of the residential area.,乱点鸳鸯类 主谓不当 Our school has taken place a lot of great changes in recent years. 动宾不当 Go on, please. Im
4、 just hearing you. 系表不当 My dream has at last become true. 定/状不当 This is my first time visit to the village. He ate quickly dinner and then went toward school in a hurry.,生搬硬套类 There used to have a big tree in front of the temple. Those who break the law will must be punished. 瞻前不顾后类 Although he was
5、tired, but he went on working in the fields . On one hand ,40 percent of the students think the idea is reasonable; but the rest are against it.,2. How to polish(润色) sentences?,用简单句代替复合句(对比一下两个句子) A: Do you like the hotel? If you dont like it, I will try to find another for you. A: Do you like the h
6、otel? If not, I will try to find another for you. B: However, other students dont support the idea. They say Beijing Zoo was built in 1905 and it has a history of 100 years. It is well-known at home and abroad. B: However, other students dont support the idea, saying that Beijing Zoo ,built in 1905,
7、 with a history of 100 years, is well-known both at home and abroad.,活用句型/结构提升档次(对比前后两个句子) A：I have found a house for you. It is 25 square metres. It has a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. A: I have found a house for you, a small flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom , a bathroom and a kitchen.
8、 B: One can succeed by working hard. B: Only by working hard can one succeed. C: Ah Hu saved his master at last. C: It was Ah Hu who / that saved his master at last.,A: I suggest Internet bars should be strictly managed and that we should direct young kids to surf the Internet properly. A: I suggest
9、 that Internet bars should be strictly managed and young kids be directed to surf the Internet properly. B: He entered the office . Then he started to do work. B: Hardly had he entered his office when he got down to work. B”: On entering the office, he set about work.,准确使用连接句与句的词、短语、句子。 常用的词、短语、句子有：
10、 1).表顺序 first, second, /firstly, secondly, /then, finally, /the former, the latter, 2).表时间 since then, for the first time, at last, now, soon after that, before long, at that moment 3).表转折 but, however, on the contrary, instead, yet, unfortunately,4).表递进 whats more. moreover, furthermore, besides, i
11、n addition, additionally, even, 5).表并列 and, or, as well as, bothand, eitheror neithernor,some others 6).表列举 for example, for instance, take sb/sth for instance, such as, like, and so on, etc. 7).表因果 so, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, due to, thanks to , owing to, because of,8).表总结 in a wo
12、rd, in short, in all, briefly speaking 9). 表对比 on one hand, on the other hand, while, at the same time, ( in the ) meanwhile, 10).表程度 first of all, above all, especially, particularly, 11).表空间 on the right/ left, to the right/ left, at the foot of, at the bottom of, in the middle of, in the centre o
13、f, by the side of,12).表解释说明 that is, that is to say, in other words, namely, or rather(或者更准确地说), 13).作插入语 to start with(“首先”，后不加宾语), to be frank/frankly speaking, to be honest/honestly speaking, to tell (you) the truth, generally speaking, considering, given, judging by/from, compared with,3. How to
14、 show individuality(个性)?,使用大家不常用的单词、短语、句型、习惯用法等（对比一下两个句子） A:The next Monday morning our classmates were both surprised and very happy when they saw the wall newspaper. A: The next Monday morning our classmates were both surprised and overjoyed when seeing the wall newspaper.,B: I used to have a lot
15、of homework even at weekends. B: I used to have to work even at weekends, doing endless homework. C: The bathroom and the kitchen are good. C: The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished. D: A new railway is being built in my hometown. D: A new railway is under construction in my hometown. E: He
16、 didnt listen to me in class. E: He turned a deaf ear to my lecture in class.,F: I like swimming very much. F: Swimming is my favourite sport. G: You can find my house easily. G: Youll have no trouble finding my house. H: I hope you can write me back soon. H: I am looking forward to hearing from you. I: Ladies and gentlemen, listen to me , please. I: Ladies and gentlemen, may I have your attention, please?,J: Well try our best to make y
