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1、专题十四 书面表达之提纲类,高考24话题之(十四)：历史与地理(History and geography) 上个星期你班同学就“现代社会是否需要孔子精神”进行了一次讨论。讨论结果如下表所示。请根据表中内容写一篇120词左右的英语短文。参考词汇：孔子思想：Confucian thought,【写作话题】,Last week we had a discussion about _we still need Confucian thought in modern society. For one thing, more and more people in different countries
2、are bursting to study it, _(show) that it is still treasured in the world.,【语法填空】,whether,showing,About 60% of the students in my class think necessary to study Confucian thought. For another, Confucian thought has believed to have made great contribution to the peace of human beings. About 40% of t
3、he students in my class insist Confucian thought be outdated. 答案 necessary前面加形式主语it has改为is；contribution改为contributions be改为is,【语法改错】,Last week we had a discussion about whether we still need Confucian thought in modern society.About 60% of the students in my class think it necessary to study Confuc
4、ian thought.For one thing, more and more people in different countries are bursting to study it, showing that it is still treasured in the world.For another, Confucian thought is believed to have made great contributions to the peace of human beings.,【范文背诵】,But every coin has two sides.About 40% of
5、the students in my class insist Confucian thought is outdated.In a way it limits the development of the world. Different people have different opinions.I think Confucian thought still has some positive effects on our society.,根据范文画线部分仿写下面情景： 上一周我们就中学生是否该在校园内使用手机进行了一次讨论。 _ 答案 Last week, we had a disc
6、ussion about whether middle school students should use mobile phones in campus.,【自主空间】,古代中国被认为为世界科技的发展做出了巨大的贡献。 _ 答案 Ancient China is believed to have made great contributions to the scientific development of the world.,(2016新课标乙卷)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms. Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文
7、字和格式(format)。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。,限时25分钟,审题谋篇,范文展示 Dear Ms. Jenkins, I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.,In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a parttime job in a for
8、eign capital company.I have already finished my application and resume.But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I dont know if there is something to pay attention to.So, Im writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help.I will be very gratef
9、ul if you can do me the favor.,Looking forward to your reply.And Id be really thankful. Yours， Li Hua,名师点睛 本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience、现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help、宾
10、语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume也是文章的亮点所在。,全国新课标高考评卷组长评书面表达 1总体评价 这次书面表达题，对不同水平的考生都有不同程度地发挥空间，话题适用，难度适中。 2得分情况 平均分：12.25分 正态分布：主要集中在1120分之间，中间得分多，两头相对较少。,3主要问题 审题不清，写成了求职信和申请书；用词不准，特别是副词和介词的错误较多；时态语态
11、意识不强；篇章意识不强，主次不分，逻辑混乱，关联词语用得牵强；文体前后不一致，如前面正式用语，后面又是日常用语(如你帮我修改，我请你吃饭)；书写不规范。,4备考启示 提高学生的审题能力；重视基本句型，基本的语法结构；加强篇章意识；注意文体意识；规范书写；要求考生不能透露个人信息。,1命题常以短文提示、要点提示和表格提示三种形式呈现。 2考查形式以书信(电子邮件)、通知、日记、报道等为主，但体裁多变，记叙文、议论文、应用文都会牵涉到，且题材多贴近学生生活。 3写作内容以提纲的形式分割成独立的信息块，所给的提纲既是独立的要点，又体现了文章的层次，是全文写作的思路。,.题型特点分析,【规范答题步骤】
12、 1认真审题和分析所给的提纲，认清题目和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、内容以及文体。 2每一个提纲可以作为文章的一个段落层次，段落的展开围绕提纲的中心内容，不能偏离，也不能任意增减。,.技巧微课,3提纲只是对文章的提示和概括，不是主题句。这需要根据提纲的性质，写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子，使之成为主题句。然后围绕主题句进行扩展。 4收集材料支持主题句。材料可以是事实、例证、亲身经历、名人名言、谚语警句等。应当注意的是，所选材料要与文章的主题相符，即要“扣题”。同时要具有典型性，能充分说明问题。在有多个例证的段落中，还要注意各个例证之间的连贯性。,1常用句式 (1)开头常用句式 We h
13、ad a heated discussion about/on. With the development of. At present, there is a widespread concern that. Modern technology has many advantages. Im very glad to have the chance to speak here. It is often said that.,.写作素材,(2)衔接常用句式 The main reason why.is that. The reasons are as follows. Take.for exa
14、mple. Besides, we should not neglect that. Wonderful as.is, however, it has its own disadvantages as well. As far as Im concerned, Im in favor of the first/second view.,(3)结尾常用句式 Taking all these into account/consideration, we may safely reach the conclusion that. So we must take measures to.,【得高分的五
15、项基本原则】 1长短句原则 长短句结合，让人觉得抑扬顿挫！如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题： As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.,建议：在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点
16、的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。,2主题句原则 写作时，一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾，让读者一目了然。 不要隐藏主体句。 To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句) Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.,3一二三原则 阅卷老师看文章也必然要通过一、二、三的这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的
