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1、2017年高考英语总动员,书面表达,5.备考策略,1“五档”作文在眼里抓标准 (1)完成了试题规定的任务； (2)覆盖了所有内容要点； (3)应用了较多的语法结构和词汇； (4)具备了较强的语言运用能力； (5)有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑； (6)完全达到了预期的写作目的。,2“五档”标准如何抓 (1)抓“应用了较多的词汇” 解读：词性多样、词汇高级、短语丰富。 (2)抓“应用了较多的语法结构” 解读：感叹句、倒装句、复合句、强调句、非谓语动词结 构、with复合结构等。 (3)抓“有效使用连接成分” 解读：段与段、句与句之间明晰的、合乎逻辑的顺序组织与 安排，做到文意与结构
2、上层次分明、条理清楚。 (4)抓“完成规定的任务” 解读：对于题干、要点提示、注意事项以及参考词汇要做到 读题全面，只有这样才能确保完成规定任务。,1力保审题过程要“全” 审题五方面:审题是高考书面表达的关键第一步,确保审题“全而不漏”是得高分的基本保证。审题要注意以下五个方面: (1)审文体 考生首先要根据情景提示弄清要求写哪种体裁的文章，是记叙文、说明文、应用文，还是议论文。动笔之前认真审题并确定写作体裁是至关重要的。,(3)审人称 审人称，即弄清书面表达要求用哪种人称写作。其中有主要人称和次要人称，这一点要引起考生足够的重视，因为倘若人称不对，评卷时阅卷老师就会扣掉相应的分数。 (4)审
3、时态 审时态，即根据所给材料信息确定短文的基本时态。考生一定要重视时态，因为如果时态方面的错误过多，评卷时阅卷老师就会扣除35分。 (5)审要点 表达出全部要点是得分的基本保证，如果漏掉要点,得分档次就会被降低，因此考生要细审题,定要点,巧构思，列提纲。,(2)精准规避三类错误 错在各类词汇 A拼写错误 a误：We got struck in the traffic jam so we were late for the meeting. 改正：struck改为stuck B变化错误 b误：People throwed cans，paper，bags and so on into the ri
4、ver water. 改正：throwed改为threw c误：The book presents us a lot of useful informations. 改正：informations改为information,C词性错误 d误：During my summer vacation，I spent half a month in the country and played very happy. 改正：happy改为happily e误：Doing a parttime job always effects study. 改正：effects改为affects 错在语法结构 A时态
5、错误 a误：In the morning，we had bicycled in the suburbs to plant trees. 改正：had_bicycled改为bicycled,B语态错误 b误：Children who raise in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 改正：raise改为are raised C主谓一致错误 c误：My hobby is widespread，which include drawing，collecting s
6、tamps and so on. 改正：include改为includes,D比较级使用错误 d误：With the development of transportation，the world seems to be getting more and more smaller. 改正：more and more smaller改为smaller and smaller E非谓语动词使用错误 e误：Comparing with other countries，the country pays little attention to the pollution. 改正：Comparing改为C
7、ompared,F平行错误 f误：Then I put my book under my desk，opening it and started looking for the answer. 改正：opening改为opened 错在汉式思维 A纯汉语式思维和汉语式语序 a误：At this school studying，I really very happy. 改正：Studying in this school，I am really happy.,B句子成分残缺 b误：There are many students dont support the project. 改正：There
8、 are many students who dont support the project. c误：On the other hand，dogs are our best friends，bring us a lot of fun. 改正：On the other hand，dogs are our best friends，which bring us a lot of fun. C句子成分赘余 d误：On one day，he went to the cinema. 改正：One day，he went to the cinema.,1运用三大原则，体现美不胜收 (1)新颖性原则 写作
9、时恰当得体地使用高中学过的，别人可能想不到的词 汇，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。但是需注意：既要避免使用俗词，又要避开冷僻词汇。 (2014高考江西卷)In the coming three years，our school life will be difficult. In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging.,(2)短语优先原则 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 Developing a good habit is also important. Developing a good habit i
10、s also of importance. (3)避免重复原则 尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。 I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches.,2频变句型结构，增加得分亮点 (1)肯定不如双否好 对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，在文章中运用双重否定的句子可以给自己的书面表达加分。 We can imagine what life would b
11、e like with phones. We cant imagine what life would be like without phones. (2)陈述不如倒装妙 倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法，它能使文章内容突出，富有节奏。 The library lies in the center of our school. The library is between the garden and the teaching building.,In the center of our school lies the library，which is between the ga
12、rden and the teaching building. I was so excited that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it. So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.,(3)主动不如被动巧 使用被动语态符合英语的习惯,如果书面表达中有一两个被动语态句子，就会呈现出句型的变化,使整篇文章句型丰富。 One day，when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class，the teacher a
13、sked us to make a sentence with it. One day，when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class，we were asked to make a sentence with it.,(4)简单不如并列、复合强 有时为了使句子连贯性更强，表达更贴切、自然，我们在两个或多个简单句之间加上and，for，or，not only.but also等连词，使其成为并列句；有时根据上下句之间的关系，在两个或多个简单句之间加上when，as，where，because等从属连词，使简单句变成复合句。 I would r
14、eally like to interview him. He is the first Chinese to go to space. He is one of the greatest astronauts in the world.,I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. (5)非谓语动词不能少 非谓语动词包括动词不定式、动名词和分词三种
15、。巧用非谓语动词，使书面表达句式丰富多彩，增加高分亮点。 In the picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes.He is sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.,In the picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it. He is going to write a book.The book is based o
16、n this experience. He is going to write a book based on this experience. (6)篇章结构巧连贯 在英语写作中，要做到篇章结构连贯，除在内容的组织安排上要注意前后的逻辑关系外，有时还需要恰当使用能承上启下的关联词语。,First，he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines.We stood around him and watched attentively.Then we started to have a try ourselves.The old man walked around and helped us patiently.Finally，we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman.
