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1、郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（12）附参考范文 (201*唐山联考)When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study hard，1._hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I experience2._pressure for the first time. I did that my mom expected3._because I didnt want to let her off. I was born to a poor4._peasant family, bu
2、t I really knew life was not easy. All the5._things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could6._lead better life in the future. As the saying goes, “No pains7._no gains.”I was finally able to meet my mother expectations and8._have a chance to go to college. Thanks to my mothers push and
3、the 9._pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a good thing.10._答案与解析：1去掉第二个was此处不用被动语态，故was多余。2experienceexperienced此处应用一般过去时态，与全文时态保持一致。3thatwhat这里用what引导宾语从句并在从句中作宾语，that没有这种用法。4offdown结合上下文可知此处意为“我不想让她失望”，故应用let sb. down表示“让某人失望”。5butand或so此处应为顺承关系而非转折关系，故将but改为and或so。6waswere此处主
4、语为all the things，故应用were。7better前加alead a better life表示“过一种更好的生活”。8mothermothers此处表示“达到了妈妈的期望”，故应用其所有格形式。910goodbad根据上文可知此处是指“我不再认为压力是一件坏事”，故应将good改为bad。*结束请你根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈诚信(honesty)的作用。Honesty means always telling the truth and never cheating.Honesty is a kind of courage and respon
5、sibility，an invisible power and wealth.Honesty wins trust，respect and friendship.So it pays to be honest.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； 内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例； 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称； 词数为120左右。_参考范文One possible version：Honesty is a good virtue.If you are honest all the time，youll be trusted and respected by others.I have le
6、arned a lot from my experience of dishonesty.When I was in Senior One，I was so eager to get a high score that I cheated in the exam.Although nobody discovered it，I had no sense of success at all.Instead，I felt guilty and it bothered me for a long time.What was worse，I was afraid that my friends woul
7、d know about it and trust me no longer.So from then on，I have been determined never to be dishonest.Otherwise I will be looked down upon and lose all my friends.As you can see from my experience，if you are honest，you can say and do what you like without fear.In conclusion，to be honest will ensure yo
8、u a happy life.*结束第一套短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）。并在其下面写出修改后的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。修改：在错的词后划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。 Im a middle school student name Li Ming. Im writing to tell you something. Recently Inoticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber caf
9、e near our school. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or chat. Some students were even talking about love affairs online. On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful informations. The Internet
10、 should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of it. Otherwise, it will give us great harm. So the local government should take measure to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively.参考答案Im a middle school student name Li Ming. Im writing to tell you something. 1namedRecently I noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students 2,去掉in 3.surprised playin
