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1、书面表达学生观摩篇（1）书面表达训练假定你是李华，你所喜爱的实验报创刊十一周年（总100期）之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编Mr. Wang写封信，内容主要包括： 1说明你是该报的忠实读者 2赞赏该报优点：1) 国内外教育新闻 2) 学习经验交流及名人成功故事 3) 学生习作3提出建议 注意：1词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mr Wang, Congratulations on the 11th anniversary of Experimental Newspaper! 【参考范文】Dear Mr Wang,Congratulati
2、ons on the 11th anniversary of Experimental Newspaper! Im a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following three reasons. First, it covers both national and international news of education so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that hav
3、e happened during the month. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. Besides, it offers us students a platform to exchange our learning experience and share encouraging stories. As a youn
4、g student, I suggest that Experimental Newspaper carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular. Yours sincerely, Li Hua书面表达训练假如你是李华，你向美国笔友Jack介绍你校开设的学生社团活动的情况，大致内容介绍：1、活动对象：高一和高二学生；活动时间：每周二 的三点钟以后。2、通过参加活动，你们的收获。3、你的感受。注意：1、词数不少于100；2、开头和结尾已经给出，
5、不计入总词数；3、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；Dear Jack, Thank you for your letter asking about the club activities in our school.【参考范文】Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about the club activities in our school .These clubs are set up by the Students Union and they are intended for students from Grade Two and Gra
6、de Three, open after 3 oclock on Tuesday afternoon.The club activities, aiming to offer students more opportunities to show their different talents, benefit us a lot. Taking part in club activities can help us to make new friends, expand our circle, and develop interpersonal skills. At the same time
7、, these activities can help us to develop self-confidence, communicating with each other more easily. Besides, we have developed different skills and many interests, which enrich our lives.In my opinion, I acquire more knowledge in an interesting way. Meanwhile, I bring myself more relaxation after
8、hard study, which reduces my tiredness.【2014高考英语吉林省长春市调研试题】书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，因陪母亲看病，不能参加明天下午关于美国文化的讲座。请写一封 短信向老师Miss Clinton请假。内容主要包括：1. 不能听讲座，跟老师表示歉意；2. 向老师陈述缺席理由；3. 询问老师是否有讲座录音或影像，以便日后补听讲座。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当増加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。Dear Miss Clinton,I am very sorry that _Yours, Li Hua【语篇解读】 书面表
9、达体裁为请假条，题材贴近考生生活。【命题立意】 本试卷书面表达的目的在于考查考生应用已有的语言知识完成一篇应用文（请假条）写作的综合能力。【参考范文】 Dear Miss Clinton, I am very sorry that I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon, which is on American culture. My mother is ill, and I will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a business t
10、rip. I will take care of my mother until she is better, so I have to ask for several days leave. I am very interested in the topic of American culture. It is really a pity that I miss it. I wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture. If so, I can listen to it when it is convenient. Thank y
11、ou very much. Yours, Li Hua【评分标准】 1. 本题总分为25分, 按5个档次给分。2. 评分时, 先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次, 然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次, 最后给分。3. 词数少于80和多于120的, 从总分中减去2分。4. 评分时, 应注意的主要内容是: 内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性、上下文的连贯性。5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予 以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6. 如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。【内容要点】 1. 正确使用表示歉意的语句。 2. 陈述理由：母亲生病，陪她去医院看病。 3. 询问是否有录音，以便过后补听讲座。 4. 语气符合学生向老师请假的情况。【各档次的给分范围和要求】 第五档21分25分完全完成了试题规定的任务。-覆盖了所有内容要点；-应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；-语法或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高词汇 所致；具备较强的语言运用能力；-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档16分20分完全完成了试题规定的任务。-覆盖了所有内容要点；-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求；-语法结构和词汇方面应用
