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1、英语六级写作指导一Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1)当今的大学生要面临很多来自不同方面的压力2)大学生缓解压力的方式有3)你一般都是如何排解压力的?Ho
2、w Should College Students Relieve Pressure?行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一个问题，提纲第2点要求说明如何解决该问题，提纲第3点要求阐述“我”的做法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出当今的大学生主要面临哪些压力;列举大学生缓解压力的方式;谈谈“我”是采取哪种方式排解压力的。高分范文How Should College Students Relieve Pressure?Todays college students face many pressures, mainly from parents
3、expectation, study, economy, employment and all kinds of competition. 1Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. Pressure can destroy a students confidence. 2More seriously, it might make some students lose control of their emotions and
4、behaviors.3Considering the great damage of overdue pressure, college students should learn to how to relieve pressure. 2First, we should have a right evaluation of ourselves 4so as to 5make use of advantages and avoid disadvantages. 2Second, we should 6set a clear aim of a struggle. The aim can give
5、 us motivation, and make us become active. 2Third, 7attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve pressure. 2Finally, if you find pressure is nearly 8beyond your control, youd better turn to professional psychological guidance.2As to me, my pressure is mainly from future employment.
6、 4In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages, and produce a more practical job objection. 2So my employment pressure was relieved greatly. Now I become confident in my future, and I 9do believe I can get an ideal job after my graduation.【亮点点评】1although引
7、导让步状语从句。2过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。3“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。4表示目的。5“扬长避短”。6“设立一个明确的奋斗目标”。7动名词短语作主语，用不同于前两点的句式提出缓解压力的第三种方式。8“超出范围或能力”。9强调动词believe。佳句临摹1.佳句：Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect.临摹：尽管兼职工作能够带来很多好处，但我们不应该在它上面花费太多的时间。2.佳句：Attending collecti
8、ve activities is an effective way to relieve临摹：学会如何与人沟通是步入社会的第一步也是最重要的一步。3.佳句：In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages临摹： 为了在激烈的竞争中获得优势，大学生们必须全面发展自己的能力。【KEY】1. Although a part-time job does much good to us, we should not spend too much time on it.2. L
9、earning how to deal with people is the first and the most important step to enter into the society.3. In order to get their priority in the fierce competition, college students have to develop their abilities in an all-around way.请将下面这段话翻译成英文：九寨沟的山水风光，纵有万丽千奇，一旦离开原始的自然美，就一切都没有了。”他们的见解是精辟的。当你步入沟中，便可见树
10、正群海荡漾生辉，瀑布舒洒碧玉。一到金秋，满山枫叶绛红。盛夏，湖山幽翠。仲春，树绿花艳四时都呈现出它的天然原始，宁静幽深。参考翻译：All the beauty of Jiuzhaigou is endowed by nature. If the natural charm were removed, there would be no more of Jiuzhaigou.Mystic lakes and sparkling waterfalls captivate your eyes as you enter the ravine.The trees are their greenest i
11、n spring when intensified by colorful flowers.In summer, warm tints spread over the hills and lakelands.As summer merges into autumn, the maple trees turn fiery-red, splashing color through the thickly forested hills. Tranquility pervades primitive Jiuzhaigou throughout the year.红楼梦问世二百年以来,通过汉文原文和各种
12、译文读过此书的人,不知有多少亿!这么多的读者哪一个是先看批评家的文章,然而再让批评家牵着鼻子走,按图索骥地去读原作呢?我看是绝无仅有的。一切文学作品,特别是象红楼梦这样伟大的作品,内容异常地丰富,涉及到的社会层面异常地多,简直象是一个宝山，一座迷宫。而读者群就更加复杂，他们来读红楼梦，会各就自己的特点，欣赏该书中的某一个方面，受到鼓舞，受到启发，引起了喜爱;也可能受到打击，引起了憎恶。总之是千差万别。参考翻译Ever since the publication of A Dream of Red Mansions some 200 years ago, hundreds of millions
13、 of people have read its Chinese original or its translations in various languages. Of these innumerable people, how many have read the novel by starting with a perusal of the critics#39; articles and allowing themselves to be led by the nose by the critics as to how to read the novel? Next to none.
14、 All literary works, especially a monumental one like A Dream of Red Mansions, are extremely rich in content and involve diverse social strata-to such an extent that they virtually resemble a mountain of treasure or a labyrinth. And the readers are even more complicated, differing from each other in
15、 family background. They will each appreciate a certain aspect of the novel according to their own individuality. They may feel inspired and enlightened, and hence love it, or they may feel hurt, and hence loathe it. In short, the reactions vary.英语六级阅读Most of us are taught to pay attention to what is saidthe words. Words do provide us with some information， but meanings are derived from so many other sources that it would hinder our effectiveness as a partner to a relationship to rely too heavily on words alone. Words are used to describe only a small part of the many ide
