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1、English Writing for Doctoral Student,邓天文， CSUFT 13787317556 2011年8月,The Diaoyu Islands are sacred Chinese territory and if Japan clings obstinately to its mistake, China will take further actions. 钓鱼岛是中国的神圣领土，如果日本执意不改正其错误，中国会采取进一步行动。 More than 100 demonstrators in Shandong province, joined in an an
2、ti-Japanese march on Thursday morning, chanting slogans and waving banners in protest.,Slogans and Banners,“Free our compatriots” “Return our territory” “The Diaoyu Islands belong to China“ “Safeguard our territory” “Boycott Japanese products” “Defend Diaoyu Islands” “Out of Diaoyu Islands“ “The Dia
3、oyu Islands are part of Chinas territory“,About This Course,Overall Periods: 28 Objectives: 1. to facilitate understanding qualities of good English writing, esp.of good sentences and paragraphs. 2. to identify difficulties and weakness in writing good sentences, well-organized paragraphs and texts
4、3. to develop and acquire writing skills for good English writing 4. to develop ability of logical thinking,Methodology:,1. large quantities of reading activities 2. great amounts of writing practice 3. respective comments 4. self-improvements,Teaching Contents,good writing of English sentences well
5、-planned English paragraphs effective texts of great unity,well-planned English paragraphs,structure and cohesion by process by example by generalization by comparison and contrast by cause and effect by classification by definitions by time and space data interpretation,effective texts of great uni
6、ty,Introduction Discussion Reports: studies and research Surveys and questionaires Conclusion,Assessment,Class Attendance: 20% -2 for absence without permission -1 for being late, leaving earlier than scheduled, and permitted absence Class Activities: 20% +4 for each star given for each successful p
7、articipation in class activities,After-class writing: 60%,One best up-to-date sentence each day One best paragraph each week One best article each month Other after-class tasks,References,1.英语论文写作，石坚，帅培天，外语教学与研究出版社， 2010年7月 2. Academic Writing Course, by R. R. Jordan, first published by Collins ELT,
8、 1980 3.英语写作手册，丁往道、吴冰， 外语教学与研究出版社， 2003 4.写作教程第三册，俞东明、李华东主编，上海外语教育出版社，2006,Class Quiz,Write a well-organized paragraph of about 100 words titled as “My Reflections on” in half an hour. Here are some titles for your reference. My Reflections on My College Life/Occupation/ Personality Hunans Economy,
9、Education, Transportation, Forestry, Environment ,Unit 1 Sentence Writing,Diction Varied structures Being pertinent,Diction,Be exact Be specific Be vivid Be consistent Be varied,Examples,1. My relatives gave me a gift（general） My uncle gave me a watch as the birthday gift. My 50-year old uncle gave
10、me a Swiss watch as my 20th birthday gift. My 50-year old uncle came to see me yesterday and bought me a fantastic Swiss watch worth about 10,000 yuan as my 20th birthday gift 2. Jack went to the window and looked at the crowd outside（general） Jack tiptoed to the window and peeped into the noisy cro
11、wd outside.,3. Maybe you have time to go to the cinema, but I have more important business to attend to Maybe you have time to go to the cinema, but I have other fish to fry 4. The teachers maintained that the students should give up love for the sake of learning. Students, however, hold that forbid
12、ding love among college students is no good,Comparison of Hypotactic E and Paratactic C,All was cleared up some time later when news came from a distant place that an earthquake was felt the very day the little copper ball fell. 过了一些时候，从远方传来了消息：在小铜球坠落的当天，的确发生了地震。这一切终于得到了澄清。,人不犯我，我不犯人。 We will not at
13、tack unless we are attacked. 知己知彼，百战不殆；不知彼而知己，一胜一负；不知彼不知己，每战必殆。 You can fight a hundred battles without a defeat if you know the enemy as well as yourself. You will win a half of the battles and lose another if you know yourself and leave yourself in the dark about the enemy. You will lose every bat
14、tle if you leave both the enemy and yourself in the dark.,广出猎，见草中石，以为虎而射之，中石，没镞，视之，石也，因复而射之，终不能复而入石也。（33字史记） Liguang was out hunting one time when he spied a rock in the grass which he mistook for a tiger. Immediately, he shot an arrow at the rock with such such force that the head of arrow embedded
15、 itself in the rock. Later when he discovered that it was a rock, he tried shooting at it again, but he was unable to piece it second time. (71words),Varied Sentence Structures,Alternative length of sentences Varied opening of sentences Different sentence pattern,Examples,1. She returned to her offi
16、ceThere was a note under the door. It was from Mr MayHe said he was waiting for her in the coffee roomAnd he had not found her sisterHe was sorry to have missed her. Then，suddenly，all of the young people were up out of their seats，screaming and shouting, and crying, doing small dances of joy. All except Vingo,2. Opening a sentence 1) there be There are two ways in which one can own a book. 2) predicative Equally important is a good ha
