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1、,邀请信,全国高考英语应用文写作,the nursing home 敬老院 show our respect 表现我们的尊敬 gain a better understanding 获得更好的理解 a romantic story 一个浪漫故事 sincerely 真诚地 be familiar with 对熟悉 art gallery 艺术馆 judge 裁判 speech contest 演讲比赛,【必备词语】,deliver ones speech 做演讲 is convenient for sb./sth. 对方便 locate 位于 promote students interest
2、 提高学生的兴趣 theme 主题 participant 参与者，选手 compete with sb. 和某人竞争比赛 feel honored 觉得荣幸 dragon boat racing 龙舟赛 training camp 训练营,【必备词语】,1. Im now writing on behalf of the classmates to invite you to come and attend it, if you can spare the time. 我代表同学写信邀请您来参加，如果您能抽出时间的话。 2. Im sure that youll have a good ti
3、me staying with us. 我相信您会和我们一起度过愉快的时光。 3. Looking forward to your coming. 期待着您的到来。 4. We would feel much honored if you could come. 如果您能来，我们会觉得非常荣幸。,【好句朗诵】,5. If you have any suggestions, please let us know. 如果您有任何建议，请告诉我们。 6. I sincerely invite you to watch the show because. 我诚挚地邀请您来看演出，因为 7. You c
4、an reach me through my phone number 44876655 at your convenience. 您可以在您方便的时候打我的电话，号码是44876655。 8. I wonder if youd like to go with me. 我想知道您是否想和我一起去。,【好句朗诵】,1. We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenience for you.,1. convenience改为convenient,2. Let me know as soon as possible that you
5、are able to come or not.,2. that改为whether/if,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,3. Since you are such eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.,3. such改为so,4. Ive read in the paper about a five-days tour, which I think suits you, so now Id like to recommend it to you.,4. five-days改为five-day,5.
6、 CCTY is inviting foreign students to perform at the Spring Festival Gala, that will be held at CCTV Station on the evening of February 9, the Chinese New Years Eve.,5. that改为which,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,6. Please let me to know as soon as possible so that I can make some arrangements.,6. 删掉to,7. Im writin
7、g to tell you well have an English Corner active which will take place in the library on Saturday afternoon.,7. active改为activity,8. We have never been abroad ago, so we are very interested in what it is like in your country.,8. ago改为before,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,9. This is Li Hua, a monitor of Class Two, G
8、rade Three of GuangMing High School.,9. 删掉a,10. Therefore, to make it a success, we would like to invite you to be our guide, give us some help with our spoken English.,10. give改为giving；或give前加and,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,【2012全国2卷：邀请外教参加生日聚会】 假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括： 1. 时间：周五晚8点至9点 2. 地点
9、：学生俱乐部 3. 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等 4. 要求：备小礼物,【真题满分佳作赏析】,满分佳作（一） Hi, Susan, Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday. Just as the name suggests, the party is still kept a secret from him. This Friday evening, well gather at the Students Club at 8 pm to celebrate his 18th birthday. Im now writing o
10、n behalf of the classmates to invite you to come and attend it, if you can spare the time. The details of the celebration, which will last about an hour until 9 pm, are as follows. At the start, the candle will be lighted and well sing “Happy Birthday” together for him, after which well enjoy the bi
11、rthday cake and have fun together, playing games and singing songs. Im sure that youll have a good time staying with us. Looking forward to your coming. Yours, Li Hua,满分赏析 Just as the name suggests(正如名字所说一样)，语言运用地道，很自然地引出细节。 用到Im now writing on behalf ofto(我代表写信)，句式高级地道，点明写信目的；if you can spare the t
12、ime又显示出交际中的礼貌，十分得体。 用到了which引导的定语从句；are as follows也是很好的引出列举的主题句。注意：follows不要漏了s，否则效果会归零。 用after which 介词提前的定语从句和playing games and singing songs现在分词短语，有效地把信息整合在一起，句式显得高级，句法复杂度高。 本句是作者添加的细节，详略得当，内容合适。,满分佳作（二） Hi, Susan, Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday. As scheduled, all the class
13、mates in our class will gather at the Students Centre at 8 pm this Friday evening to celebrate Xiaomings birthday. We would feel much honored if you could come and enjoy it, which is to finish at 9, lasting an hour. As the party starts, we will light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” for him. Th
14、en the birthday cake will be presented and cut for all of us to enjoy, following which well sing songs and play some small games. Whats more, as a surprise, well all prepare some secret birthday gifts for him, and itll be great to see how surprised he will be seeing the gifts. As its a surprise part
15、y, he will know nothing about it beforehand, and we do hope that you could manage to attend it. Looking forward to your coming. Yours, Li Hua,满分赏析 We would feel much honored if you could，语气委婉礼貌，句式高级，用would和could的过去式更体现出客气语气；且用到了which引导的定语从句和lasting现在分词，体现句法能力。 following which是一大亮点，现在分词短语中包含一句定语从句。 用
16、whats more连接自然，条理清楚；用and有效地整合了信息。 本句是自己添加的内容合适，且用do强调，更显邀请的诚意。 这是写信的必备用语，必须做到零差错。,【2007湖北卷改编：邀请国际学生慰问老人】 作文原题 假设你是某中学学生会主席李华，你校与本地一所国际学校经常举办联谊活动，你计划在重阳节组织学生到养老院去慰问老人，拟邀请国际学校的学生参加。请根据以下内容要点给国际学校的学生会主席Tony写一封信。 要点： 向老人赠送礼物(鲜花、自制贺卡)； 为老人提供服务(做清洁、陪老人聊天)； 为老人表演节目(唱歌、跳舞)。,【模仿翻译】,作文翻译 亲爱的Tony， 重阳，中国传统的老人节日，即将到来。我们计划去敬老院庆祝这特别的日子，我们也想邀请你们学校的学生加入我们。 我们计划了几项活动。当我们到达那里时，我们会分小组在老人们的房间拜访他们，给他们送花和自制的卡片，以表达我们的尊重和爱。然后，我们会在护士的帮助下为他们搞清洁和洗刷。
