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1、ENTER,Composition for CET 4,By Marian Foreign Language Department December 15 2007,概 述,所占分数及比例 ：107分（15%） 考试时间： 30min 注：写作与快速阅读先收， 后答其他部分 据对近10年来四、六级作文体裁的统计，应用文和议论文出现的几率几乎是一半对一半。,CET4-Writing,写作的重要性 6分最低限，只要结构不出错，得分应该为9分(以15分为标准） 。 评判作文: 四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。 内容不跑题即可，注意：1.不要妄图以情动人；2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。 结
2、构上牢记总分总：先写主题句(Topic Sentence)，再写分论点，最后写总结句(Conclusion)。 语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。,写完之后修改注意：（内容方面尽量不要修改） 1、字母大小写 2、怪符号 3、单词拼写 4、主谓一致 5、动词时态 6、名词单复数,I、对比观点选择题：,1.有人认为； 2.另外一些人认为； 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。 （最好写成4段）,典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：,（启）Paragraph I：（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点； （2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。 （承）Paragraph II：（1）
3、提出一种观点或优点；（2）本段的支持性分论点；（3）本段总结（可以省略）。 (转）Paragraph III： （1）承上启下的过渡句； （2）提出另一种观点或缺点；（3）本段的支持性分论点（4）本段总（可以省略）。 （合）Paragraph IV：（1）平衡两种看法；（2）给出自己的观点。,实例二 99年6月真题,Reading Selectively Or Extensively? Outline: 1. 有人认为读书要有选择 2. 有人认为应当博览群书 3. 我的想法,Paragraph I. （启）,How should we read? Should we read selectiv
4、ely or extensively? Everyone has his own view.,Paragraph II. （承）,Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. Whats more, there are many bad books
5、 that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldnt read them. Since we cant read all the books and we shouldnt read bad books, we must read selectively.,Paragraph III. （转）,But others may not agree, they emphasize that todays society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will h
6、ave more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.,Paragraph IV. （合）,Whos right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively fi
7、rst. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.,选择题型变体逻辑结构（My View on Sth.）,选择性观点的变体的文章写作逻辑结构： Paragraph I:（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点； （2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。 Paragraph II:（1）提出作者观点（本文主题句） （2）举例加以论证。 Paragraph III:（1）总结全文（再次强调作者观点),范文17. My View on Fate,There is no consensus o
8、f opinions among people as to the view of fate. Some people believe that everyone is born to a certain that he can not change, while some other people think that every man is the master of his own life. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. There is a saying, “Everyone is the ar
9、chitect of his own future.” Which means ones fate is decided in his own hands. In fact, no one is destined to a certain fate in his or her life. Those who claim that they were born to fail or be unlucky just cant realize how much inner strength and ability they have. We must depend on ourselves to c
10、hang our lives and make us successful and happy.,范文17. My View on Fate （续）,Lets take Helen Keller, an extraordinary American woman, for example. When she was only 19 months old, she became blind and deaf. Instead of accepting her misfortune helplessly, she showed great courage and unconquerable spir
11、it in fighting against her destined fate and was awarded the Presidents Medal of Freedom in 1964 because of the achievements she had made for helping the blind, the deaf and the speechless. This story tells us that a wise man is always creating his own fate rather than waiting for good luck.,In conc
12、lusion, I believe that everyone is born equal and is the builder of his own fate. We can have good fortune only if we take pains and work hard. We should bear the following saying in mind, “Every man is the master of his own fate.”,1. 方便：convenient/ convenience 2. 效率：efficient/ efficiently/ efficien
13、cy 3. 节省和浪费：save time/ money/ space; economical, thrift; waste time/ money/ space; costly, lavish 4. 人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive,considerate, confident, creative, sociable,perseverance; selfish, isolated, consevative 5. 人的身体健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic,CET4-Writin
14、g,万能理由(omnipotence),6. 娱乐：colorful, pleasure,joy, recreation, entertainmentm, relax, tired, boring, lonely 7. 环境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty 8. 安全和危险：safe, danger, risk 9. 经验：experience, social experience, enter the society 10. 人际：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely,CET4-W
15、riting,- 万能理由(omnipotence),II、社会热点话题写作逻辑结构,Paragraph I: (1) 概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点（general）； (2) 具体描述这个事物或者观点（或者是我对这个现象/ 事物的基本看法specific） Paragraph II: (1) 作者对该现象货问题的基本看法，即文章的论点句； (2) 支持性的细节分论点（至少两点）； (3) 本段总结（可以省略）。 Paragraph III: (1) 总结全文，定下结论（通常为我的对策或看法）。,Example: 四级作文试题2000年1月,Directions: For this part
16、, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 上大学的费用（tuition and fees）可以通过多多种途径解决。 2. 哪种途径适合我（说明理由）。 How I Finance My College Education,How I Finance My College Education,第一段：首先，应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点： Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensiv
