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1、书面表达专题,-How to write a letter for advice,如何算是一篇好文章？ 覆盖了所有的要点 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。,要点全,词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道,连接词,写作要点： 1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。 2. 对象： 1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点； 2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。,3. 基本框架： 开头（beginning）- 开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(state your i
2、dea) 主体(body)- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence) 结尾(ending)- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.),4. 注意事项： 1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力； 2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议； 3）符合英文信件的基本格式； 4）基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。,常用套语,A建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料
3、,表明写作意图) 1. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that 2. I am very glad to hear that you want to 3. I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter I am writing to you for the purpose of I am writing to share some advice/opinions with you. You have asked me for some advi
4、ce with regard to and I will try to make some conductive suggestions. 7. You have asked me for my advice about/on ,B. 表达建议（body） 1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could 2. I would like to suggest/recommend that 3. If I were you, I would 4. Why not ?/ How (What) about doing 5. is a good/g
5、reat idea. 6. You may consider doing 7. It would seem/seems to me that you could 8. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 9. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should,First,/Firstly,/ Secondly,/ Then,/ After that,/ In the end,/ Finally, /Meanw
6、hile, /Whats more,/ In addition,/ Besides,/ Furthermore, ,C.建议信结尾常用句式,I believe you will take my advice into account/ consideration. I hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions/ recommendations practical/ useful/ helpful. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. I would ap
7、preciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 5. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.,假如你叫孙军，是红星高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：,参考词汇: 穿行 thread ones way 天桥 overpass,第一步：审题 养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十
8、分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：,第一人称,一封信,建议政府采取措施舒缓交 通拥挤的状况,说理逻辑性,一般现在时,书面表达如何写？,三个步骤,Step 1 List the key points,Step 2 Make sentences,Step3. Form a passage and polish,适当运用模板,模板二： Dear _(对象)， I am writing to express my views concerning _(问题). First and for the most, _(建议一). In addition, _(建议二). Whats more _(建议三)
9、. I hope youll find these proposals useful. Yours sincerely, Li Ming,Dear_, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _, and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _. I hope youll find these proposals useful
10、 and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you / your _(祝愿). Yours sincerely Li Ming,Dear Bob, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides,
11、 it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议) As to , I suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建议). Im sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心). Im looking forward to (表达愿望). Sincerely yours, Li Hua,第二步：搜索相关词组或句型,学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小, 家长接送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。,学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街,stand next to
12、 primary face/be faced with the main street,Theres a primary school near our school, and both schools face the main street.,Our school stands next to a primary school, faced with/facing the main street.,推荐句型：There be+并列句,非谓语结构,Standing next to a primary school, our school is faced with/faces the mai
13、n street.,润色小建议,Next to a primary school,将介词短语提前（全倒装）,stands/lies/is our school , faced with / facing a main street.,可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语,be located next to (near/beside/by),border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to与毗邻,在对面 be opposite to,The traffic is busy during the rush hours.,高峰期交通繁忙,traffic. during
14、 the rush hours,During the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road that,During the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic.,so. that,with结构,With so many cars and buses going on the road, ,润色小建议,“高峰期”可意译:,at peak time， a large current of cars and people,“交通繁忙”可译为:,traffic jam con
15、gestion 交通堵塞 be choke up with be crammed with 被堵塞/塞满,加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤,sendto, fetch. , which ,非谓语结构.,Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.,Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, making the traffic heavier
16、.,加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤 Whats more, pick up. make. To make things worse/ Whats worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded. In addition/ Additionally, many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier. Whats more, parents often attend their kids to s
