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1、基础写作训练一学会运用复司句和非诸语动词广东08高考基础写作范文:句子表达有何亮点?GShooting,originatedasameansofsurvival,developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.G)Thesport,whichfirstappearedin1896,waseversuspendedduringthe1904and1928Games.GG)ItwasonlyfouryearsbeforethesportreturnedtotheOIympic.(Howevenrnotuntil1968werewomenfirstaliowe
2、dtocompeteintheOlympicshooting.(G)Withthesportbecomingmoreandmorepopularithasgrownsteadilyfromjust3shootingeventsatthe1896OlympicGamesto17today.精“写f中复合句常见的错误1.只有从句,没有主句Thekeeperwhohadlivedinthelighttowerforalongtime,sohecouldkeepcalmintheStornt一Thekeeper“,whohadlivedinthelighttowerforalongtime,could
3、keepcalminthestorm.2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子GThehallisdifferentfromallotherbuildings,whichismadeofglass.G)Theol4manthoughtofhissom,withtearscomingdownfromhisface.3.刻意使用从句,表达不自然ThereareoverfiftystudentsinthisschoolwhoaregoingtotakepartinthesportsmeetnextSunday.一Overfiftystudentsinthisschoolaregoingtotak
4、epartinthesportsmeetnextSunday.4.过多地使用并列句组合信息GItisabeautifulday,andthesunisshiningandabreezeisblowing.一Itisabeautifuldaywiththesunshiningandabreezeblowing.G)Weweregriying0utintothecolmtry,andwesaWourEnglishteacherridinginabus,andthebuswascrowded.一AswWewWeredrivingoutintothecountry,weSaWourEnglishtea
5、cherridinginacrowdedbus.请看范例MyEnglishLearning4UItissixyearssinceIbegantolearnEnglish.(2)Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,IhavemadeprogressinmyEnglish.(3)NowTmdoimgWwellbothiwritingandreadinginEnglish.(4ButITst训findithardtolearnRnglish,suchassomedifficultidionis.“3JDPitticuitasitis,Ihavezadepm2y7
6、zirzdtomasterthisusefullanguagebymyhardwork.从上述例子同学们可以明自什么样的句子叫“规范的英语句子“。其实,“规范的英语句子“就是我们经常讲的三种句子:A)Simplesentence:Hearingthenews,hewashappy.=Whenheheardthenews,hewashappy.B)CompoundsentenceA:Hegavemeabookbut1forgottobringitbackhome.C)CompoundsentenceB:Whatpeisdqoinghasnothingtodowithme.Hereare3ways
7、tomakesentences:1.巧妙运用短语,写出规范的筒单句:1)借助名词短语做同位语如:李立,男,19岁,1996年生;籍贯:广东。LiLi,aboyof19,wasborninGuangdongin1986.2)借助介词短语做定语如:李口,男,10岁,榷色短发,身宏白色茄克。LiFeiisaten-year-oldboywithshortbrownhaijrandiaWwlitejacket3)借助介词短语做状语如:有了Tom的帮助,我们很快就找到了他们的村子。WiththehelpofTom,wesoonfoundtheirvillage.4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语如:他们站在大树下,等待着总统的到来。Theyarestandingunderthebigtree,waitingforthepresident.
