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1、九年来的作文命题思路整理（纵向）,2001 书信 中学生减负 2002 书信 公园是否收门票 2003 看图 租房子 2004 书信 外国人才艺大赛 2005 书信 英文自荐信 2006 看图+议论 社会公德 2007 议论 免费师范生 2008 书信+议论 新同学融入新集体 2009 书信 与外国朋友的通信,词汇层面,Adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的 clever smart wise bright intelligent,词汇层面,Adj.令人惊奇的 surprising amazing astonishing,短语层面,电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。 1.Computers are ve
2、ry important in our life. 2.Computers play a very important role in our life. puters are of great importance in our life. 4.后面还有很多技术层面高，精彩的表达。,句型层面,他昨天下午来的。 1.He came here yesterday afternoon. 2.He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon. 3.Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. 4.It was
3、yesterday afternoon that he came here.,第五档（榜样的力量是无穷的！）,完全完成了试题规定的任务 ,覆盖所有的内容要点 。 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 。 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽量使用复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言应用能力 。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 。 完全达到了预期的写作目的 。,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的技
4、巧,Five steps for writing (写作五步骤）,passage,审题要点、难点的预见 （以1997年试题为例）P61,1997 年 英语写作(满分 30分) 下列图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历，请据此为一家中学生英文报的故事专栏写一篇短文。 注意： (1)短文必须包括图画所表现的主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使其连贯、完整； (2)叙述必须用第一人称； (3)词数：100 左右。 生词： 违章者 offender n. 十字路口 crossroads,要点的识别,哪些是要点？,1.看懂图画是关键。 2.图画中出现的人物都是要点。 3.能推动事物向前发展的细节，都是要点。 4.图中
5、的字句都是内容要点。 5.图中故事发生的背景是内容要点。 6.避免不合理的想象。,The other day my brother and l went to the cinema by bicycle. My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind. As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. “Weve found you at long last, ”they said. But we didnt know the
6、m. Pointing to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, “He stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. So come on, stand here. Hope you dont have to wait as long as we did. Good luck.“,以体裁为指导，稳扎稳打，步步为赢！,日记 书信（ 信函、电子邮件） 通知（书面通知、口头通知） 便条 说明文（事物，人物，地点） 记叙文 议论文（观点、建
7、议）,一、日记,1.通常用记叙文或 简单的议论文体裁。字数不宜过多。 2.格式：一般是在左上角记上当天的日期(年、月、日)，星期；右上角写上当天的天气情况。 下面一行可以写上日记小标题，也可以不写标题。 3.时态：所用的时态多为过去时态,但应灵活掌握. 4.顺序：日记一般按事情发生的先后顺序记述，所以有时需要借助一些表示先后顺序的词语。,Aprill 9th, Sunday Fine It is Sunday today. I didnt get up early as usual. In the morning after I finished my homework, I did some
8、 washing. Then I called Wu Gang and invited him to see the filmLion King“. But unfortunately when we got to the cinema at two oclock in the afternoon, we found all the tickets had been sold out. Then we went back to school to play table tennis. After this when we were about to go home, we saw our en
9、glish teacher Ms. Liu at the school gate. She told us that we had made great progress in Eng lish this term. She suggested that we should do more reading and listening. We promised the that we would take her advice.,P 62,1998 年 英语写作(满分 30分) 5 月 3 日，你参观了一个农场。请根据下列图画用英语写篇日记。 注意： (1)日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增减
10、细节，使日记连贯： (2)词数 100 左右。,1998年真题,第一步：认真审题，提炼要点,一审格式：日记体裁。,二审结构：日记常常使用第一人称， 谓语常常用一般过去时。,三审要点：用英语思维，理出写作 要点。,第二步：紧扣主题，扩展成句,第三步：补充修改，连句成篇,May 3rd, Sunday Fine Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then th
11、e head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. Befor
12、e we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers.,(5)信文(Body of the letter),信文是信件的主体部分，也就是信的内容。正文应在称呼下两行开始。信的开头第一个字母 通常和称呼开头第一个词平齐。 也有往后退四个或八个字的。 下面介绍一些开头语和结尾语。,开头语,相当于中文的“敬启者”。 (直接给别人写信） a. l beg to inform you that b. l beg to take this opportunity to inform you that c. I have the honor to adress
13、 you that. d. l write in a hurry to inform you that e. I hve the pleasure to tell you that. f. I am very delighted to inform you that.,相当于中文的“接读某月某日来信，一切知悉”。 a. l thank you very much for your letter of May 20th b.Your letter of May 20th has been received with thanks. c. It gives me great pleasure to
14、 receive your kind letter of May 20th. d. ln answer to your kind letter of May 20th, l deeply regret that e. l have received your kind letter of May 20th. f.Words cant express my delight on finding your favor of yesterday on my desk this morning. g.Your letter dated May 20th has been received,结尾语,采用
15、三种方法： 采用分词短语：句末用逗号，不用句号。 采用介词短语，句末用逗号，不用句号。 采用完整句子：句末用句号。,(6)结束语(Complimentary Close),结束语的一般写法如下： Yours truly, Truly yours, Sincerely yours, Yours sincerely, 公函常用： Yours faithfully, Faithfully yours, Yours respectfully, Respectfully yours,私人书信常用： Sincerely yours, Yours very sincerely, Yours affectio
16、nately, Yours ever, 给亲戚朋友的信常用： Love, All my love, You(ever)loving son/daughter/cousin, etc. Your affectionate nephew, Yours lovingly, Lovingly yours,(7)署名(Signature),个人署名： Li Hua 公司署名： Yours faithfully, Legend Computer Company Wang Lin Sales Manager,信函分类,1.生日贺信 2.圣诞节及新年贺信 3.感谢信 4.请求帮助信 5.申请信 6.道歉信,1999 年,假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友 Smith 先生的来信。他三年前参观过你 校，听说现在
